
Let's Install the Drill Bit on Unit 1 First.
先给初号机装上钻头吧
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 360k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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0Monthly votes
141Recommends
0Fans
163Chapters
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The writing style is quite good and worth reading~ The writing is logical and the overall arrangement is quite comfortable. Also mention some feelings and opinions after reading from a personal perspective. Can the author refer to it? There are three main points: First, I am a little worried about whether the protagonist's ability is growing too fast now. Not long after the beginning, he already has an invincible momentum. I'm worried that this may cause the subsequent plot to go deviating from expectations. I hope the author has arranged the outline and has a follow-up "Enemy from the Sky" part. Secondly, in terms of the feeling of reading, I may not be able to completely match the author's ideas. During the reading process, there is more or less a feeling of "separation", and I cannot fully immerse myself in the world in the book. This is probably more of my problem. The third is the character creation. My biggest regret after finishing the game is the creation of the protagonist "Shinji Ikari". It is true that he has accumulated 30 years of experience in Tianyuan Breakthrough, which makes him mature and stable. But from a reader's perspective, I still hope to see a protagonist with the original Shinji Ikari background. Now the protagonist gives me the feeling that he is just an outsider with the name "Shinji Ikari". My understanding is that Tianyuan's breakthrough of 30 years can make Shinji Ikari more mature and stable, overcome avoidance, and no longer be autistic. But now that he is back, he still needs to be able to reflect his underlying temperament. It is difficult to describe this temperament, and I can't find the words, but there are a few key points: "Can't escape, can't escape", "Give Ayanami back to me!", And even though he is called "Xiao Shou" by the audience outside the screen, he can overcome his inner fear when he is needed.
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This is a good book, and I beat it with strength. The other G modes obviously overwhelm the combat power. It looks too slow. I like to watch violent and fighting animations. I used to feel that there are too many characters and plots, too few fights, and not enough fun.
The book is good, but it's a pity that the author is too boring and doesn't interact with me at all
Really great!
He is really a rare Shinji Ikari in the fandom. There are no unscrupulous jokes, no chaotic relationships between men and women, no love triangles and four corners, and no showing off during battles. Shinji Ikari, who has mobility and IQ, is really great!
It's rare to have a new EVA fan, the writing is pretty good, please support me
It's broken. It's been the Chinese New Year and there's still no movement... I feel bad.
Why haven't you signed a contract yet?
It's obviously very well written and has the author's unique insights into the original world view. If you don't sign a contract, you won't be able to vote monthly.