Magical Girls Don't Want to Fall

Alas, we have reached this point after a lot of ups and downs, but there is a result in the end, although it is full of regrets. But first of all, congratulations on completing your first book. No matter what the result is, I hope you don't lose heart. You still have great potential, and few people succeed for the first time. From the current point of view, this book actually seems to have some problems in the underlying settings as someone said. For example, this qualification is a failure and the strengthening is a little too much. To be honest, the most important thing for magical girls is "Believe that the heart is magic! Miracles always exist." The article is too absolute about this. Although it is okay for us to bring in Ginkgo, but if we substitute other weak qualifications, it will inevitably feel a little powerless. This is too dead set. Of course, this does not mean that there are no bonds of cooperation and unity, there are. This is also the biggest problem, there is something wrong with the plot. Although there is nothing that can be done about it, it is really difficult for a new author to do this. To be honest, the writing style is still at an average level. To be honest, the main plot has been flying straight away since leaving the novice village. The various advancements are blunt and the most important thing is that it feels bland and boring. It feels like I haven't watched it at all. To be honest, what interests me here is where the ginkgo and white birch stick together. I can see the rest. And here the author changed the map and abandoned a very important basic point of magical girls, bonds. The backstabbing and backstabbing plans of teammates behind him were all mixed up and chaotic. To be honest, there was obviously a bond in the first city, and because of this, this section felt very comfortable. It may be too much to say that it is completely messed up later, but I think this may also be the reason why some people say it is like a fantasy novel about cheating. What should I do if I upgrade to the top of my strength? Change the map. My personal feelings, including the facial expressions later, are all minor issues in comparison. Of course, the good thing is that there is an ending, unlike many that just ran away. In the past, one wrote the first volume and immediately ran away with the outline of the next seven volumes. Some even asked for leave and then finished. Come on, look forward to the next book if possible, it will definitely come then.

Do it with the fallen beast, and then give birth to the fallen beast, so that the fallen beast has fifty percent human blood, and then continue the cycle, which will turn the fallen beast into a human. This is purification

Who is the protagonist Poppy? He takes his friend's sledgehammer and wants to find someone who can inherit his friend's legacy and will, but he never realizes that that person is himself.

I always feel like I've read a fantasy upgrade novel in the guise of a magical girl.

Generally speaking, it's okay. The writing is smooth, the plot is well designed, the power system is not purely based on someone else's, and there is a sense of fun in the early stage. However, I have to say no here. Since leaving the first city, the overall plot has become more and more tiring to watch. From my point of view, the various forces, motivations, and characters designed by the author are quite detailed, and there are no major logical problems. The protagonist grows up, and the exploration is carried out very resolutely. How can I put it, I'm just a little disappointed. The world of magical girls can have conspiracies, darkness, and intrigues, but it cannot always be conspiracy, always intrigues, and continuous battles. Magical girls still have friendship, love, and are girls. However, in the author's writing, this part is basically not reflected. The protagonist only fights. In my opinion, the magical girls in the game written by the author have been alienated by the system and have lost the heart of a magical girl. However, in addition to a firm and open heart, the protagonist actually lacks the heart of a magical girl. Take the third sublimation of the protagonist designed by the author. Does the evolution of a magical girl really require any rituals? Shouldn't it be "can't be sublimated or something, I don't understand." "The heart that believes is magic" "How can a magical girl be such an inconvenience" It gives people the feeling that as the game progresses, the protagonist actually becomes less of a magical girl and becomes another thing in the skin of a magical girl. On the contrary, when it was first released, she was the most magical girl. Towards the end, the protagonist keeps being driven away by things, and then tries to find ways to deal with the problems. The magical girl becomes a mortal, and the feeling of tiredness comes from this. There is not much else to say. I estimate that this book is almost finished. There are only a few remaining structures of the world that have not yet been revealed. The author will work harder in the second half of the book.

"Sister Qing, happy birthday!" Chu Lan handed out a carefully packaged box to the slightly older girl in front of her. "Open it and take a look!" "This is it?" What is inside the box is not the trinket that Lin Qing thought, but a figure, a cyan magical girl, who looks very delicate. "Sister, do you still remember what I told you? She is the reason why I dreamed of becoming a magical girl." "Sister, do you know that I used to be very cowardly and timid, and I couldn't seem to do anything no matter what I did, but until that day..." "The beast is coming, run!" "Boom!" When she was 6 years old, she was choosing a birthday gift and ran in panic with her parents after hearing the siren. But unfortunately, the disaster beast was not far next to them. So it came. The whole body is black, with uneven bone spurs on its back. There is a single horn on the wolf's head. Its scarlet eyes are crazy and stupid, coveting everything in front of it. "My dad went to lure it away alone for our safety, and we hid in a certain cabinet." His dad has always been in good health. Although he faced the terrifying beast, he still mustered up the courage and tried to run away, but it was of no use. The giant wolf's bloody mouth was already close to the man. No one thought he could escape, and even he closed his eyes in the end. "Kacha" "Dang~" However, a cyan magical girl appeared and he saved us. She is a very gentle, kind and cheerful magical girl, her code name is Ginkgo. "Later I left that city and came here, but she also gave me a yearning for magical girls." "I begged my parents to buy this figure before I left and waited for a long time." >"In my opinion, it is equivalent to that magical girl, so I want to give it to you, Sister Qing. Thank you for taking care of me for so long!"

This book feels a bit like cutting a knife for the sake of cutting a knife. It feels like the knife being issued is inexplicable. There is no fluctuation in my heart, and I even want to laugh a little. It always arranges a person's death for no apparent reason, and then kills him. After watching it, I felt that the death was too casual, a bit like dying for the sake of death.

Although I haven't watched it, I know that the protagonist must be hiding his identity. After all, there is no such writer who does not hide his identity.

Your Fallen Sun organization is so strong, how can the official organization rely on them to suppress them? Nowadays, there are even villains who can predict the future. If the magical girl side does not have the same ability, then wouldn't she just follow them to eat? (This ability can even accurately predict when and where a person will appear, and can also predict the other person's next behavior in real time)

This book is probably written by a newcomer. The words "One Eye Ten Lines" or "The Crimson King" seem to be okay, but if you read them word for word, there will be grammatical errors and word order errors throughout the book, which will make it a bit uncomfortable to read. The writing method is a little bit stream-of-consciousness, a common problem for new writers. They are thinking about this scene and such and such details, but what they write may only be 70%-80% of the idea. The money is still in the author's mind. The author will automatically complete the details in his mind when he reviews it. However, it will be a little difficult for readers to read word for word and they have to rely on guessing. The subject matter is not bad, but the writing style is too immature. If you are picky about the writing style, it might be uncomfortable to read. But if you just want to read the subject matter, it will be a pretty good book.

Among the magical girl novels I have read, yours can be ranked high. It is indeed quite good.

Magical girls do not admire each other, and even weak magical girls will express obvious fear of the magical girls with status. This shows that there is an obvious chain of contempt within the upright supervision bureau, and since only having that kind of pure innocence can go far in this setting, then this kind of four-dimensional situation It's quite strange that there is a supervisory bureau with a sense of class. Since there are so many magical girls, and they are easy to die in the line of duty, why don't the strong lead the weak and travel in a team? The lives of others are important, but the life of the magical girl is not. Take Du Juan and An Wei at the beginning. The descriptions of these two people made me disillusioned with the image of magical girls.

The protagonist does not want "Chen Que" to become a vassal of "Ginkgo" - I agree with this sentence. I bet there must be some transformation stories that have touched the author's poisonous spots, because I have been poisoned too.

The writing is good among magical girl novels of the same type.

In fact, the writing is quite good, much better than the pineapple buns. . 😅

It's too stereotyped. The male protagonist should put the devil in Binzhou.

I seem to have seen a similar man transform into a magical girl. It made my little heart skip a beat when I saw it, and my boyish heart suddenly emerged.

Is the protagonist male or female?

The last two chapters were a bit sloppy. I originally thought there were still a few chapters to develop, but the result was that I just fast forwarded. Well, it is understandable. After all, the results are not very good at the moment. I want to try to recommend it, but I suggest that if there is a next time, try to pave the way for it. There is currently less ground, and the originally high results are not as exciting as expected. To be honest, this situation is squeezing the potential and may not have the expected effect. But no matter what, I wish the author a big promotion. I also want to see Miss Ginkgo. ^0^

But to be honest, I feel like the author confused the two Ginkgos slightly. I feel that there is a lack of emotions and thoughts about the falling sun as the protagonist, Chen Que, and as a result, it is not reflected that the current Ginkgo has its own personality and response when facing the falling sun.

That so-and-so game is very, very dramatic, and this setting is simply terrible.

Forget it, it's a fantasy novel covered in skin, at least it's different, but when will that disgusting qualifications bureau be dealt with? He has just finished an incomplete fourth sublimation. When can he crush the incomplete fourth protagonist in Yundu and get rid of this qualification bureau that has betrayed him four times?

1. The plot arrangement from beginning to end of this book feels a bit fluid in my opinion. It seems sloppy but in fact there is no slow transition and the rhythm is uncomfortable. 2. The emotional drama is a bit of a play, whether it is the bond between the Tree Whisperer team or the death of a passerby magical girl, it seems a bit childish. This may be due to the lack of emotional foreshadowing caused by the above-mentioned rhythm problem. 3. Characters have flat facial makeup and NPCs, and the plot of the characters has no sense of freshness at all. Even the protagonist has become mediocre and reduced to a task machine after being highlighted, as if there is an invisible system guiding the protagonist. To a certain extent, what I mentioned in points 1 to 3 are all the same issue. 4. Is there really a serious ending at the end? In order to guide the plot, a very strange game was created, but the function of the game is of no use other than turning the NPC mission into a game console mission. Maybe it also links the protagonist and Blue Fur. 5. Let's talk about the plot points at the end. Both sides have a lot of stories, and then it ends with the main character breaking the order. The internal fighting in the company will lead to internal fighting, and the team will be destroyed when the qualifications bureau is destroyed. Since the protagonist loves human beings, why does he let Yundu go, and why does he solve the qualifications bureau?

17 Days ago... Ended😰

I found a good magical girl book "Magical Girls Can Transform, But Cannot Be Perverted", a new book by an old author. If you are still looking for magical girls, you can check it out~!

Does anyone have any spoilers about what's going on with Bai Hua? I'm a bit confused now

Come on, hold on, ^0^~

It feels like there have been a lot of plots about killing magical girls recently, and now the protagonist has really become a fallen beast in human form. . . 😥😥😥

The plot in the second half is actually forcibly advanced, but in the end it ends with one sentence to show off the flowers ✌︎˶╹ꇴ╹˶✌︎

Don't tell me that when I enter Yundu, I will become a grandson again. Byd is the gatekeeper⭕️Why do you still despise it?