Reborn as a Beautiful Girl, I Never Meant to Become an All-Round Idol

Edit, I said a little too much at noon. It's impossible to get married anyway, I don't have that inclination.

Kesha

. . Although it says you are not to marry, I am still afraid, so I will give it a try first and read the comments from readers later before deciding whether to read it or not.

This is the second time I have added this book to my bookshelf. Last time I saw over a hundred chapters and I couldn't finish it. This time I feel the same way. The plot is procrastinating, with more than a hundred chapters including a singing competition, and there is not even a small climax in the whole process, it is just a matter of flow. There are too many characters, the relationships are too complicated, and the names are unrecognizable. Moreover, the main character has multiple storylines, which is a common practice in system novels, but the way the author writes it makes me feel that the heroine is very busy, doing several things, dubbing, making games, singing, releasing albums, and being the host of an up-and-com, all of which are done, but the writing is not outstanding. The feedback from the market and netizens are too bland. Each chapter seems to be always interacting with the people around me, with a lot of dialogue and a lot of added points, but I can't find the main line, and everything is written very scattered. Transformation texts are niche, and it is not easy to find a long one. I suggest that the author can learn from Yi Ren's writing style, and advance the plot with the protagonist as the center. The most important thing is how to write about the career, the market, how to deal with character relationships, plot allocation, etc. Come on!

I won't discuss how ridiculous the plot is, but let's just say what's the use of acknowledgment? That shit, the Su family is in chaos, and if you admit it, it will be a lot of trouble. And there is something wrong with Yan Lulu's mother, right? You are so good at making the decision to bring people here when it comes to acknowledging relatives? Just bring it and just send the message out once confirmed, right? It's not like you don't know how chaotic the Su family is? Just send it out without keeping it secret? Or is it that you are not even sure whether you recognize the protagonist or not, so you just send out the news? Even if security is not a problem in the country, who knows that there won't be some disgusting methods? Like online public opinion? As for the handling of the protagonist's matter, why do you think so? What does it matter if you don't recognize the main character?

After seeing this bloody story about life, I have no interest in reading it. Just write entertainment articles well. Will there be a cultivating immortality in the later stage?

I do dubbing for the protagonist, singing, playing sports, playing games, everything. It's better to write multiple threads at the same time, write a little here, write a little there. Just after the album was released, I was still playing a mahjong game and an archery competition. But before the archery competition started, you participated in the school basketball game and the archery competition over there. There is a problem with your qualifications again, and now you are engaged in acting. You are just interested in it, and you are looking forward to releasing a new song. The plot turns to archery. You were just looking forward to the archery competition, and then it switched to basketball. You are bored. You are jumping through the plot of the basketball game. Finally, the basketball game is over, and you run to act again. Author, what you write like this consumes readers' enthusiasm.

It's already 2024 and there's still a plot of internal strife among wealthy families.

I don't understand the purpose of this life experience arrangement. If you want a good life experience, you just have to arrange it from the beginning. Looking at this mess now is really annoying, so I just want to ask what storylines have been advanced during this period of time.

It's okay in itself, but as soon as this life experience came out, it was full of strange smells In fact, I had already had a premonition when I was preparing the book, but I still didn't expect it to be so bloody emmmmm, it may be a true story that the author has personally witnessed or heard, but it is a bit difficult to write it as a novel Suddenly it flew from Xiaoshuangwen to indescribable.