A Reborn Beautiful Girl, I Really Didn't Want to Become an All-Round Idol

Edit, I said a little too much at noon. It's impossible to get married anyway, I don't have that inclination.

Kesha

. . Although it says you are not to marry, I am still afraid, so I will give it a try first and read the comments from readers later before deciding whether to read it or not.

After seeing this bloody story about life, I have no interest in reading it. Just write entertainment articles well. Will there be a cultivating immortality in the later stage?

I do dubbing for the protagonist, singing, playing sports, playing games, everything. It's better to write multiple threads at the same time, write a little here, write a little there. Just after the album was released, I was still playing a mahjong game and an archery competition. But before the archery competition started, you participated in the school basketball game and the archery competition over there. There is a problem with your qualifications again, and now you are engaged in acting. You are just interested in it, and you are looking forward to releasing a new song. The plot turns to archery. You were just looking forward to the archery competition, and then it switched to basketball. You are bored. You are jumping through the plot of the basketball game. Finally, the basketball game is over, and you run to act again. Author, what you write like this consumes readers' enthusiasm.

This is the second time I have added this book to my bookshelf. Last time I saw over a hundred chapters and I couldn't finish it. This time I feel the same way. The plot is procrastinating, with more than a hundred chapters including a singing competition, and there is not even a small climax in the whole process, it is just a matter of flow. There are too many characters, the relationships are too complicated, and the names are unrecognizable. Moreover, the main character has multiple storylines, which is a common practice in system novels, but the way the author writes it makes me feel that the heroine is very busy, doing several things, dubbing, making games, singing, releasing albums, and being the host of an up-and-com, all of which are done, but the writing is not outstanding. The feedback from the market and netizens are too bland. Each chapter seems to be always interacting with the people around me, with a lot of dialogue and a lot of added points, but I can't find the main line, and everything is written very scattered. Transformation texts are niche, and it is not easy to find a long one. I suggest that the author can learn from Yi Ren's writing style, and advance the plot with the protagonist as the center. The most important thing is how to write about the career, the market, how to deal with character relationships, plot allocation, etc. Come on!

I won't discuss how ridiculous the plot is, but let's just say what's the use of acknowledgment? That shit, the Su family is in chaos, and if you admit it, it will be a lot of trouble. And there is something wrong with Yan Lulu's mother, right? You are so good at making the decision to bring people here when it comes to acknowledging relatives? Just bring it and just send the message out once confirmed, right? It's not like you don't know how chaotic the Su family is? Just send it out without keeping it secret? Or is it that you are not even sure whether you recognize the protagonist or not, so you just send out the news? Even if security is not a problem in the country, who knows that there won't be some disgusting methods? Like online public opinion? As for the handling of the protagonist's matter, why do you think so? What does it matter if you don't recognize the main character?

It's already 2024 and there's still a plot of internal strife among wealthy families.

It's okay in itself, but as soon as this life experience came out, it was full of strange smells In fact, I had already had a premonition when I was preparing the book, but I still didn't expect it to be so bloody emmmmm, it may be a true story that the author has personally witnessed or heard, but it is a bit difficult to write it as a novel Suddenly it flew from Xiaoshuangwen to indescribable.

I don't understand the purpose of this life experience arrangement. If you want a good life experience, you just have to arrange it from the beginning. Looking at this mess now is really annoying, so I just want to ask what storylines have been advanced during this period of time.

As for the protagonist's versatility, every time it comes to singing skills, it's sincerely embarrassing. I think that when an author writes about one aspect of professional knowledge, he should first have a certain knowledge reserve in this area. This is also a common problem in this type of article, but most authors who write the protagonists of all-round articles appear to be amateurs. The same is true for the author of this article. He casually looked it up online and started to use words casually. He also used some professional vocabulary for no reason, which affected the perception of the plot. After all, there are many people who read novels. People who don't understand can just read it, but readers who are professional in this field will find it very embarrassing. For example, when the protagonist participated in a singing competition, after singing and the judges commented, a female singer said that the protagonist used the throat singing method. First of all, pharyngeal pronunciation is a technique used by most singers. Even when you speak, such as pronouncing the word "Hey", you will use this vocal technique, which will make your voice sound brighter than usual. This pronunciation position is the pharyngeal pronunciation. And not only in the treble, some singers also use it in the mid-low range. Like Lin JJ, his mid-bass will have a rustling texture. This is his vocal technique of using breath to rub the back pharyngeal wall in the mid-bass. Of course, it affects his pronunciation, but it also highlights his personal characteristics. The female singer in the article commented that you used the throat singing method. The author also explained the throat singing method and said what kind of special singing method it is. For example, it is as embarrassing as when you participated in a painting competition and the judges said that you used the sketching method. Secondly, why don't many singers in the current entertainment industry and media directly discuss their singing skills? One is because most viewers don't understand these things, and it's useless to talk more. Another reason is that in terms of singing skills, there are many schools, such as strong mixing, which is called true voice off, weak singing, which is called true voice off, etc. Pharyngeal voice is also a form of closing, and the nouns are different. Each singer is taught by a different teacher, and there are even those who have not studied vocal music professionally, so they generally do not say much on TV to prevent controversy. I have said so much above, not to criticize, but to give the author a suggestion. If you know more about this aspect, you can combine the protagonist's timbre and singing skills, and use the knowledge of these skills to write something more distinctive. For example, Zhou Shen's unique breathy singing voice is amazing, JJ Lin's compressed metal core, etc. Many singers who are out of the industry are not only because of their high notes, but also their characteristics in the mid-low range are the most rare. If you don't know much, then try not to use these professional vocabulary, just say that your singing skills are very good, very distinctive, whatever the feeling is, and let the readers figure it out on their own. However, it is still recommended that the author learn more about what you are going to write about. After all, you have already written a book, so be as rigorous as possible. Personal advice, don't spray if you don't understand. 😄

There is a reason for poor grades, this inexplicable plot

As we all know, when a book that usually doesn't have a single chapter and a bunch of chapter chapters suddenly appears, it's either a plot explosion or a plot explosion.

(QQ reading subscriber, there are many people here, so this is the comment) Firstly, at the wedding ceremony, we were complete strangers, but inexplicably ended up chatting very close to each other. There are also those relics whose value lies in commemoration, but for the protagonist, there is no commemoration at all. Aren't they just complete waste? As a result, the protagonist accepted it without any complaints. There are also shares. The protagonist himself said that he has no knowledge of high-end cosmetics, but in the end he has to take over the shares and take over the responsibility. Please, it is these people who want to recognize their relatives, not the protagonist. The protagonist can develop well without these relatives. If they have these relatives, it will be more tiring and troublesome. Can the author clarify the priority, instead of blindly accepting the role of a tool and having no temper in order to expand the protagonist's business? Secondly, it was also reflected in that song variety show. Just like Mei, a random person came and offered to sing, or did he hack the protagonist's company, and the protagonist didn't refuse? Is it okay for them to ask nicely? ? No, don't worry about whether it's the family behind Mei, but the company is a company? Besides, will your song appointment be of any benefit to the protagonist? Can't you just refuse to let us readers enjoy it? These are just two points that impressed me deeply. In short, I feel that the protagonist's temper is completely in a quantum state. In some places, he refused when he should have refused, in other places he should have refused but not, and he should have temper but didn't. Then the protagonist has no temper. Doesn't this "anger" just escape into the hearts of those of us who see it? Anyway, the author, please think about it. For example, to expand business or promote the plot, the subjective initiative of the protagonist can be fully utilized instead of relying on external factors?

If you look at it as an entertainment article, it's obviously almost interesting. The main plot in the early stage was too confusing. Both dubbing and singing. What kind of entrepreneurial community is there? Participating in any draft competition again, the newly generated sense of anticipation will soon be interrupted. But if you look at it as a daily transformation, it is indeed good. It's best to prioritize. In this way, there will be no feeling of hammer here and there. Also, there are a lot of characters appearing in the early stages. If the writing power is not enough. That gives people the feeling of chaos. When supporting characters appear. Who is this person? Have you ever appeared before? Especially for people who read quickly, they will be a little confused. If the control ability is not enough. It is recommended not to appear too many characters in a short period of time. Just come little by little.

I've read hundreds of chapters, but the teacher is too cool, and the progress is too slow. Most of the text is filled with dialogue, and I can write half a chapter just talking to the system... I can't stand it any longer.

I'm too tired from studying, so forget about singing and acting, it's archery and basketball.

The protagonist played a song called "Sha Po Lang" at the beginning, but was accused of plagiarism. As a result, he immediately clarified in a panic, and even used his roommate's official influence to end the rumors before they started, making the plagiarism incident as boring as a running account. In normal stories, everyone knows how to let the bullets fly first when it comes to this kind of low-level rumors. The protagonists have countless original creations and all of them are classics. Is it difficult to prove originality? Ignoring it not only despises self-confidence, but also prolongs the time to let more people know and then reverse it more harshly, maximizing interests, and also paving the way for readers to feel more relaxed. As a result, the author's writing was not satisfying and made people feel that the protagonist was too immature and immature.

The main plot is slow to advance, there are too many branch plots, and the rhythm is very scattered. As a result, I skipped and subscribed to many branch plots. It was really boring. Secondly, the protagonist came from a bloody background and was speechless, but I thought the poison resistance was okay so I continued watching. But I really can't bear it when I see a beautiful girl on campus in Hong Kong. She is so shameless and ignorant. She comes to you for a song and asks for a discount when we meet her for the first time. The economic company behind it also has a grudge against the protagonist. Just ran away, yes, the world is not black and white. These things may have nothing to do with the woman, but they will also affect your perception of a company that has repeatedly dealt harsh blows to you (spreading dirty water, spreading rumors, setting up a mainland navy company to blackmail the protagonist, and sending people to follow and secretly take photos) If you have a hookup and a background, don't think about fighting back. To actually collaborate with his artist, all I can say is, it's disgusting, as disgusting as eating shit. Originally I was thinking that maybe it was just an interlude, and I had no idea whether we would collaborate or not, but then I looked through the catalog and there was a chapter called "A Song for Me". As soon as I saw this cheeky title statement, I knew that we would finally cooperate. After subscribing, I found out that it was true. I suddenly lost interest. Although I only subscribed to watch the parts I liked - I was still interested in some branches, such as dubbing for Honkai Impact and variety shows. But this plot left me with a lump in my throat even more than the chapters about the protagonist's life story. Even if I skipped through the rest of the story, I wasn't interested anymore.

Have you ever been a beautiful girl? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

System literature really relies on the party and connections Said it was afraid of system AI But let the system clone, surf the Internet, control the cyber army, etc. The result of the foreign boycott was that it would not release foreign language albums Every time it was published, it was said that they all liked it It was not a slap in the face.

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It ended very suddenly. I kept it and opened it one day and suddenly found it was over 😰 It feels like there are a lot of things that have not been finished yet.

I caught up on it in one go and I am really looking forward to the update. There will be Winter Olympics figure skating or swimming competitions.

This crappy book is the same as the 985 plan of Wu Ce Zao Liang, thinking that if you blame others for what you did, it means you have never done it 😁 Now the big win is a big win 😁 As expected, fans of Wu Ce Zao Liang and Queen Dubbing are like rats in the gutter, they will suddenly appear out of nowhere and disgust normal people 😁

Aren't there four people in the dormitory? Why are there only three popular characters?

Do you think it's appropriate?

It's just as pretentious as a bunch of entertainment articles.

This thing really rarely lights up... The book is very good, looking forward to the next one