Reincarnation Game: Starting as a Baby Every Time

This is my personal evaluation of the first 50,000 words after reading it For those who like to watch a little love element, it belongs to Liangcao The early plot is too routine. With the love of parents and no strong foreign enemies, the relationship between the brothers is not very good, but it is not bad. It is an ordinary brotherly relationship. In such an environment, the protagonist is still Choosing to hide special bloodline talents and disguise them as ordinary bloodline talents (according to the author's description of bloodline knights, bloodline knights need more nutrients than ordinary people. It is expected that advanced bloodlines will require more resources than ordinary bloodlines. This wave of hidden strength lacks more resources that parents may give). It may be that the author will let the master in the next academy The character's full play will allow the protagonist to level up quickly The attitude towards the little maid is also slightly deliberate (forcing the maid to eat at the table, force-feeding, etc.), And then the classic maid loves the young master without any brains (and the protagonist is a simulated reincarnation, so either the heroine can be given a more touching story, or she can be taken away after the simulation is over) Overall, it gives me the feeling of a Japanese light novel (even the routines are a bit similar). The advantage is that the author portrays the protagonist in a normal environment very relaxedly. There is no brainless villain to send him off, and it is a step-by-step step for normal people. Some suggestions for the author The early stage is a bit flat. It is recommended to speed up the pace to the climax. If the author could write a good love story, he would insert maids or other female protagonists in the middle. The current plot will probably only attract some readers who are not interested in reading and a small number of readers whose taste for stories Overall evaluation Sticks to the daily life of another world, the feeling of love For those who like love dramas, it is grain For other readers, it is hay

The protagonist talks about everyone being equal. The servants ate with their masters. Yes, it seems that the author has completed nine years of compulsory education.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I found that this book was not for me. If others want to read it, let's see if they can accept these poisonous points. 1. In the first chapter, poison was released, and the golden talent was drawn. The result is that the function is to reincarnate from a baby 🤔. It is not much better than the white talent? 2. When the protagonist awakens his bloodline, the more nutrients he gets, the faster he awakens. Then the protagonist gave the maid the highly nutritious monster meat. You know, the protagonist's father has been working hard to make money in order to train his son. This is like an old father who works hard and uses the money he earns to buy supplements for his son, but the son feeds the supplements to the dog.

It is clear that the protagonist can travel through time at any time, but he did not remember any modern knowledge (gunpowder, glass, salt production, etc.). He only wrote about bonds, but he just mentioned the term and didn't describe it too much. Too much description of Bai Mao (Annie) has little effect on advancing the plot, and the death of Ha Weng is used to deepen the relationship between the protagonist and her. There is no real fighting yet. Fighting should include descriptions of slashing, blocking and other actions (don't describe the villain being killed by the protagonist's move while thinking about how strong the protagonist is). I didn't realize the geography of this first world. When describing geography and countries, there weren't too many references and directions, it was too scattered.

I have read Chapter 42 so far, and it is well written, but there is a question, what is the role of Anne? Vengeance? In the first 42 chapters, I didn't see any potential in Annie, and I couldn't use words. In the middle and later stages, she was a pure waste character. She was given the identity of the heroine just because she has white hair and red eyes? Judging from what is written in Chapter 42, the future is destined to explore space. Anne Fifteen has no blood and cannot write. What is the use of being a heroine? Later, when you go to space, you won't be able to see anyone, and you may even die of old age. Even if you give her something worth talking about in the early stage, such as having bloodline and having IQ, but Shi Fifteen has no signs of awakening, can't write, and all she can think about is how to stay away from the protagonist, what's the use of writing about her? Then looking at her vague background, maybe she is the direct descendant of a certain big family. If she didn't wake up at the age of fifteen, will she wait until later to get resources? Or are you planning to use her to open a line for the big family? But is this enough to be a heroine? Give a dispensable character a position that can advance the plot and add depth to the work?

Before entering the academy: Very good. After entering the academy: It was awkward, awkward, and embarrassing.

The little loli with white hair and red eyes has grown up and is tired of aesthetics. The protagonist acts like he has never seen a woman in his eight lifetimes, thinking about the heroine in everything he does. Brother, this is fantasy, not Riqing. Just embellish it with love elements. There is also a knight academy in the back, which makes the romance even stronger...

From the current point of view, the food and grass are adequate. The first world hopes that the author will not be anxious, even if it is the main article directly.

The classic opening is to ask the maid to serve the table, which was said by a three-year-old kid to a four-year-old maid. It makes me laugh to death. I can only say that if you can accept it, just watch it.

If you sit down, you may not read the post, but training the maid will at least dissuade a large number of readers.