Reborn in 1999: Make a Name for Yourself Early

In fact, just write the novel normally. Do you think there are so many conflicts and oppositions when reading?

Junior high school is okay, I can take two classes at the same time, so I still have a chance. High school is useless. If you can't learn, you just can't learn.

I wrote one hundred chapters and more than 200,000 words, just a few junior high school students copying the book and competing for it.

If you don't study in junior high school, what can you do in high school? The babble is all trivial talk between little kids, there is nothing to see. Forget it, let's go.

The writing is good, but there are too many trivial matters. To achieve good results, one must either learn from female authors about their daily chores and write with delicate emotions, or one must have a great time doing great things as a male. You feel like you are not doing your job well. In my humble opinion, if you think it's not good, you can delete it.

The first seventy or so chapters contain a lot of school nonsense. If the foreshadowing is too long, it loses its appeal. It would be much better to shorten it to less than fifty chapters and then focus on the main story.

It's too watery, and the physical book is not an online text. Five hundred thousand words is difficult

The author has been suppressing the protagonist, and all kinds of clowns are jumping on the protagonist's head, and he is not quick enough to slap the face. Then the literary plot is also very slow. There are only a few articles after dozens of chapters. The key is that your daily writing is not good, the pace is too slow, and the protagonist is too suppressed. You know, readers come to read the enjoyable articles, not to read the articles that abuse the main character. After dozens of chapters, the protagonist is now a clown in school. I am really convinced. Goodbye

What kind of bullshit music teacher can threaten you with just a cigarette? I dare not do my homework and smoke because I am afraid that the class teacher will find out. It makes me laugh to death. You are forced to add drama. You have the thinking of an adult and you know the bad things in her family. In turn, you threaten her. It is like a clown.

The third chapter ended with a song that was inexplicable, which made me feel very embarrassed. It was a typical example of trying to show off but the writing couldn't hold it up. There were also "ha" and "speak" in the text from time to time, which made me feel like I was reading a Japanese light novel. It was very strange.