Reborn in 1999: Make a Name for Yourself Early

Actually, you can just write a novel normally. Think about it, are there so many conflicts and oppositions when you read a book?

Middle school was alright; if you managed to attend a couple of classes, you still had a chance. High school was a disaster; if you just couldn't learn it, you just couldn't learn it.

He wrote a hundred chapters, more than 200,000 words, which were just about a few junior high school students copying books and fighting over trivial matters.

If you don't study in junior high, what will you be able to do in high school? This is all just childish rambling; what's the point? Forget it, I'm leaving.

She has the writing skills, but she has too many trivial matters to attend to. To achieve success, you either need to learn from female authors' daily trivialities and write with delicate emotions, or you need to write about the exhilarating and important things in male-oriented content. It seems you haven't handled either aspect well. This is just my personal opinion; feel free to delete it if you disagree.

The first seventy or so chapters are filled with trivial school matters; the excessive setup makes it less engaging. It would be much better to condense it to under fifty chapters and then get to the main plot.

It's too padded, and physical books aren't like online novels. 500,000 Words is very difficult to achieve.

The author has been constantly suppressing the protagonist, with all sorts of clowns jumping around on his head, yet he doesn't bother to retaliate. The plot is also incredibly slow; dozens of chapters have passed with only a few chapters. The daily life scenes are also poorly written. The pacing is too slow, and the protagonist is excessively oppressed.

That so-called music teacher thinks she can threaten you with a cigarette? You dare not do your homework and smoke just because you're afraid the homeroom teacher will find out? That's hilarious, such forced drama. With an adult's mindset and knowing all that about her family, you're practically threatening her instead. You're like a clown.

The ending of Chapter 3 inexplicably featured a song that made me incredibly embarrassed. It was a typical case of trying to show off but failing because the writing couldn't support it. Also, the frequent use of "ha" and "by the way" in the text gave me a strange feeling, like reading a Japanese light novel.