Naruto: I Will Grab Fate by the Throat

There is no audience for the abuser, especially the one who wants to ride out the branch family just for the sake of abuse. It has completely distorted the original work. You must know that the original Ningji has always treated other clan members with a cold shoulder. Rizu even knelt down and apologized to Ningji. If it had been replaced by these fanfics, Ningji would have been beaten to death. Appropriate adaptation is understandable, but the adaptation is not made up.

Why do we always have this kind of thing lately? Taking the plot template of a fantasy novel from more than ten years ago and writing about Naruto? Don't you just make it clear that you don't understand Naruto?

Brother, your protagonist has been suppressed for too long in the early stage. Although the protagonist may be able to take off, the abusive protagonist is not good-looking.

What are you writing? The plot is unreasonable. Are you going to show your heart to the young Itachi like this? And about the competition part, can the Zong family use the caged bird in public in the hall without any reason? Is the Zong family so brainless? The Zong family must have a requirement to use the caged bird. Otherwise, if a madman comes and uses the caged bird to kill most of the people in the branch family, wouldn't the family become weaker? The mastery of Hizu's control skills can be seen from the fact that Hizu kneeled down to Neji in the original work. Once he knelt down, Neji sacrificed his life for her daughter. If the entire Zong family acted as wantonly as the author wrote, and the people in the divided families were all in trouble, who would be able to protect the Zong family from the sword at the critical moment? The author has no understanding of human nature. The way to govern is to use both kindness and power before you can work hard for you. In history, how many superiors who acted wantonly towards their subordinates were killed by their subordinates.

It is recommended to read more books before writing. None of us are professionals. If you imitate someone else's 80% score, you may not be able to write a 70% score yourself. But readers are picky, and Naruto Darkness is really an old track. In every chapter, I can see someone criticizing the chapter. It's no wonder that there are no reviews and no popularity.

The author is more popular than the cloud audience

Cloud Hokage? ? ? Did Douying start writing a novel after reading the commentary? ?

Why don't some people agree with Will of Fire? How can it be? Will of Fire, I can write 100,000 words

Weird, what was written.

In the early stage, it was too natural. Like other posts said, using fantasy to write about Naruto is a drama, because Naruto is a world that has already been formed and everyone has seen it. Unlike fantasy, it is the creation of one author alone.

After passing the early part, I feel okay after reading the latest chapter The protagonist is finally out of the cage, which is gratifying.

I would like to recommend a book. New book: Naruto: The Fourth Holy Land has been released. A new writer has updated 400,000 words. Please give us your opinions and leave valuable comments. Thank you very much! 🙂🙂🙂