Swallowing the Starry Sky: Traveling Through the Tomato World

Nice. Just don't fix so many systems.

You share the source with the company's senior management, my boss and I, who have been through life and death for decades. I want to ask the boss for a few more, and give them to my family and the protagonist. Do you want to give them to me? After all, it is about the life and death of his children and his wife. I must shamelessly ask the protagonist for... The origin of this thing, even though the protagonist comes a little bit every week. Isn't that how it is divided? RR virus has a 30% mortality rate. Who doesn't want to live? Who has no sense of humanity? Three people become tigers. In less than 2 days, the whole country will know that the protagonist has a life-saving medicine Do you think the top management will ask for it from you Who wouldn't lick their face and ask for it from the protagonist? So you have to carry the virus on your own, and if you survive, your life depends on it. Where are the management talents in the country?

The Great Nirvana was written in too much detail and not many people read it, and the process took several years!

Since it is a book written by Tomato, should it also include "The Nine Cauldrons", "The Coiling Dragon", "The Change of Stars", "The Wilderness", etc.

The protagonist is nothing now. He has not even reached the level of a warrior apprentice. How can he take his whole family to fly? No problem. Still want to take everyone in the company with you? Can you move it? Doesn't it mean that the company doesn't pay you wages when you work for you? Don't owe them The protagonist is a time traveler, and he also knows that all the earth coins will be useless soon, so why do you need so much money? It's all waste paper, what do you want the company to do? Make you weapons? What are you taking them for?

He has not even reached the level of God of War, and even warriors dare to do such a big thing, and are not afraid of taking advantage of others? The two major martial arts schools both emerged from a chaotic and anarchic land. You have so many small towns where strong men will come from to protect them. It will only distract the power and act like a fool. In addition, you don't know the traceback of the giant ax. Have you read the original work? In addition, do you need so many people from your martial arts school? Are light machine guns and assault rifles not enough? What do you want to do to raise so many people? History has strongly proved that suppressing bandits is the most important thing

It's full of loopholes. I'm a senior executive in the company. If my boss gives me the RR vaccine, I will definitely be reluctant to take it myself. I will definitely give it to my children and my wife first. The protagonist will definitely be divided. In reality, the protagonist can be given to his family. There is no need to give the source to the company's senior management Besides, how can there be an airtight wall?

Now I am writing a Tomato fanfic that travels to an earlier time and has a very high level of cultivation at the beginning. There are many such audiences.

Even if the main world of Devouring Stars is slow, Jiuding Ji is also so slow. How about playing it?

This innateness is too general. There is a huge difference in the difference. Just like the planets and world lords, they are all below immortality. Your writing skills are too poor.

It turned out to be a flashback, terrible

The other world is very dull, I hope to write more about Swallowing Starry Sky

Since it is about Devouring the Starry Sky, I will write more about the plot of Devouring the Starry Sky. How come most of them are writing about the Jiuding Ji! You need to prioritize

It's okay, there are no logical errors, and the character descriptions are more vivid, unlike those who wrote fan fiction in the past who just relied on this character with his own ideas to stand up.

Not bad, but Jiuding is not interesting.

The writing progress is so slow, is this the end of the story?

The author can't tell the priority. It's useless to keep writing about Jiuding. Jiuding only needs to mention it occasionally. He doesn't distinguish the priority. Let's wait for the follow-up. If you continue like this in the future, you can only say goodbye.

Also, don't follow the old routine of participating in the genius battle and joining the five major forces. Almost all fan fiction follows this routine. It annoys me and there is nothing new at all.

It's been two days, why hasn't it been updated yet?

Are you writing about Devouring the Starry Sky or about Jiuding?

The author should write quickly and read it if the word count exceeds 500,000. If the word count is less than 500,000, it will be too few to read.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~