Let You Be Reborn, Not Make You Sentimental

The recent plot is very exciting. The character of the heroine Yu Yue is my Bai Yueguang, which is a pity.

The writing is okay, but the plot is too forcefully subdued and not enough foreshadowing. Forget it about Teacher Xiao. The scene later when parents come to school to cause trouble really ruins the viewing experience. It's too childish.

When I think about the male protagonist, a high school student, worth billions, and taking the high school students to make his net worth hundreds of millions, I feel that it is ridiculous and outrageous. He goes to school and works, and is still in the third year of high school. What a 🔨

The main joy of writing a high school plot is to get better grades and slap teachers and classmates in the face, and then become handsome, grow taller, become outstanding, etc. Also, to start a business in high school, find a woman behind you (career assistant), wait until college to take off, buy a house to go to college, and then develop your ambitions. If you get into a good university and get the top prize, you no longer need to be too cliched and empty. And learn and progress together with the school beauties and then come together. I feel like the high school plot could be written more delicately so that you can start driving after you become an adult. I feel like that's what the advice is. You can refer to the book that Orange Cat sealed. He did get a lot of success from that book, and it's sealed anyway, so there's nothing wrong with borrowing from it. Mu Mu, the author of Tomato, also uses this routine and achieved very good results.

The update time is usually two chapters before 12 noon. I have to save two or three chapters so that I can read them over and correct typos.

Zhou Qingning

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Hello author, I have been reading books for many years, and I found that many people like to use the two words "(but)". It is true that these two words are too ordinary to use. Can you use other methods when you can't use them, so that the writing will be fuller and the number of words will be more?

Hahaha! First place😁😁😁

First again😎

Chen Weifeng

No. 1 In September😁😁😁

After reading it, I have to start reading books again. It feels uncomfortable

It is about the regret of a couple. The two lovers broke up due to the strong opposition of the girl's parents. The girl went abroad and the boy became a taxi driver. Ten years later, one day by chance, the girl got into the boy's car. After ten years of separation, the girl was still the same as before, but the boy's face was indeed full of vicissitudes. The boy recognized the girl but did not dare to say hello, but he did not know who the girl sitting in the back seat was. Unable to recognize himself, the boy saw through the rearview mirror that the girl had dialed a phone number. The person on the phone seemed to be a good friend of the girl. Along the way, the girl kept talking on the phone about everything she had going abroad, while the boy just listened silently. When she finally arrived at her destination, the girl also hung up the phone and said: I have told you all my experiences in the past ten years, why don't you even say hello? It turned out that the girl recognized the boy from the moment she got in the car. There was no one on the other side of the phone. Everything was told by the girl to the boy. The boy was choked with sobs and said the word "hello" tremblingly. The girl looked at the boy affectionately and then asked: Can we still go back? Boy: "Go back? Of course you can go back. You can, but you have to pay extra..."

... I originally thought it was good, but the part about Xiao Qinglu in the elevator was really... Everything else was well written, but this part made me suddenly lose my mind. I'm sorry.

No. 1 In August😁😁😁

The author has ordered all the books for 3,600 each! Even though he knew it was useless, I still recommended your book to my book friends! I hope you will never become a eunuch! That is really a loss of character! 👍👍👍

Just write according to the rhythm! The previous paragraph was really a bit messy!