From Wizard Civilization to Ascension

1 A reasonable and logical novel upgrade system, at least you can't treat readers as fools 2 A pretentious and slap-in-the-face plot, it can't be a bloody old routine 3 The historical evolution of the rules of different worlds in the universe (Whether a movie about astronomy is good or not depends on this) It is best to be original, almost a mixture of at least 1-2 movies and TV series What we want to see is a novel world view>a brain-opening system plot, not an ancient rumination of routines. There should obviously be a lot to write about here For example, special scenery, unique humanities, grand wars, historical pulses, the rise and demise of races For example, the Titanium race, the 3-headed 4-legged race, the underground race, the cube race, the ephemera race with 7s life, the immortal race (eternal life is a sin, only major contributors can enjoy the peace of death), the slow race (one day is a second-long activity), electronic life For example, time flows backwards, and the future determines the past. The speed of light changes. Repulsion replaces gravity, the earth becomes the sky, and the clouds become the earth. Wait For example, enemies and allies of each race in the world's food chain, heroes and sinners of each race, and the epic history of each race The protagonist becomes mature and more charming through the love and hatred encountered in traveling across the world, etc. For many of the chapters you have written now, the names all give people a sense of familiarity. You should speed up the progress and quickly skip the assimilation part. Readers will not have the patience to read your highly homogenized water. Jump to the feature part of the book to reveal the same type.

There are too many of the same type, and it's hard to stand out without anything new.

Speechless, I have written more than twenty chapters, and the protagonist has not yet become a wizard.

The underground palace is okay. The author should add more new ideas and not be too naive.

The part about the underground palace about my sister feels like it. . . . .

It's not that you are so weird, you have been weird since you entered the wizarding world, and you often describe strange things in a whole chapter. You think these so-called plots are foreshadowing or foreshadowing for the subsequent plots. But when you are writing as an author, you know how the plot will develop later, but the readers have no idea at all. They feel very disconnected when they look at these things, and they don't understand the meaning of writing them at all? If the whole story was filled with weird things like self-pleasure, then it would be impossible to watch.

I hope that the time interval between subsequent time travels will be longer. The protagonist will start traveling before he has learned much about wizards. It is still a mandatory time travel. It is more appropriate for the protagonist to take the initiative.

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What is the situation where the chip can first search without external media, and then can automatically scan surrounding books?

How did the witchcraft genre arise? In our country, witchcraft uses people to communicate between emperors. I don't know much about foreign countries. They should be people who know magic. How did this wizarding genre come into being?

Boss. . Can there be less Chinese words in it? It's too inconsistent.