The Journey of the God of War That Started in Qing Yunian

Bad review, only worth 01. Points out of ten, pure AI writing, third-person narration throughout

Why does the protagonist want to climb up? Suddenly there is no way to climb up, which makes me confused. The protagonist has a system and concentrates on pursuing the peak of martial arts. Isn't it nice to rush up and become a dog?

You are so weak in the early stage and still want to be a chess player? Cheng Jushu, why do you perform such a big show of concealing the truth? There is really no logic at all. This cheater can't be unparalleled by just doing it casually. He has to be there without thinking.

This novel is all about the author narrating every sentence. I didn't see any vivid characteristics of any of the characters. The author was the only one telling the story.

Not many people writing about "Qing Yu Nian" understand that it is radiation and not martial arts energy. They are not the same species when they go to the martial arts world. People in the martial arts world are likely to lose their hair and vomit violently. Except for modern Hiroshima people, they probably lost their hair and teeth the last time they went to bed.

Another one who likes to be Fan Xian's lackey

There are too many garbage protagonists. It should be Emperor Qing who kills the protagonists and gets the system. It is gratifying that another strong man who can embark on the road to the top is born Almost the system is garbage, but it is still garbage, a waste! Can't a normal person get the system, or a wise man like Chu Xuan get the system? It's a pity that most authors are not good at writing, and their IQs are not that high. If they have high IQs, they will not write novels.

It's not enough for the author to be a dog in real life, he also has to be a dog when writing novels

God of War? With such incredible strength, you still play tricks and tricks? Even a martial arts elixir can dominate Qing Yu Nian... Speechless😒

This is what the legendary pseudoman wrote. A paragraph was expanded three times using AI, and it was expanded to 2,000 words.

Cut it off, we are short of talents like you

This protagonist is completely Fan Xian's creation.

I haven't finished the first chapter yet. Is it really necessary to write down this setting?

A lot of nonsense, one sentence can explain several chapters

What are you writing about without any characterization at all? ? Self-entertainment and narcissism? ?

If you don't practice on your own, how can you become a god of martial arts? ? ? Outrageous setting

What I wrote later is okay, but this is a very poor start. After traveling through the physical body, it is reasonable to say that an unknown master of level 7 or above cannot survive in Kyoto. If you have force, others will pay attention to you. If you can't find the explanation, it is either Beiqi, Dongyicheng, or other spies further away.

Comrade the author, has he ever written about Guan Shan?

. AI is damn good at writing novels.

The best narration of the original work is the first to follow the group. Unfortunately, it is too long and is almost the same as watching TV. After the first season, you can actually find another way to make a living. The second season is almost boring. The second world is the Qin Dynasty. The protagonist's behavior style has already been established. It is too repetitive to choose an ancient background, and the expectations have plummeted and decisively abandoned the book.