Rebirth in the Opposite Direction

The idea of ​​the novel is indeed good, but the character of the protagonist is a joke, actually a dog-licking character. The middle-aged protagonist travels back to his youth and ignores Bai Fumei and misses his ex-wife. That's it. After all, if this is not the case, the son in the middle-aged period will be gone, and it will be troublesome to write by then. I also understand the author's setting. But the problem is that the young protagonist obviously has no feelings for his ex-wife and wants to fall in love. Why is he so coy in front of his senior sister? The other party proposed to change the name of the company, but the protagonist was afraid, afraid of his ex-wife? ? ? What the hell? They are divorced and you have no feelings yourself, so why do you still care about your ex-wife's opinion? Do people care about divorce? The protagonist of this novel is still entangled with his ex-wife like this. It will definitely not be popular. It can be done once or twice. Who wants to read it if it keeps going like this?

Originally, I was a little surprised and surprised when I saw the time travel to the future, but then I suddenly got involved in the time travel to the past. To be honest, I was a little disappointed. When I first saw Coming to the Future, I was thinking about how he would adapt, or what kind of waves he could make. It was quite interesting to think about it, but it turns out that there is a connection between the past and the future. This is logically unreasonable, and subjectively unforgivable. Traveling back to the past should be a parallel world, or the public's default is a parallel world. As a result, you have created a four-dimensional world, and I feel a little silent.

It's a bit interesting, but also a bit outrageous. Lao Deng is already divorced. Would he marry his ex-wife if he went back in time? There is always a butterfly effect affecting the future, and the future cannot communicate with the past. Maybe the God of War will return in a few days.

I am good at it and have a base of fans

The emotional line is written in the same way as Shi 😅, both of them divorced their ex-wives. The 18-year-old protagonist still cares about his ex-wife's feelings 🤔, while the 18-year-old protagonist is completely an old man except for being funny 🤤

After reading Chapter 50, to be honest, the more I read, the more disconnected I become. To give you a small example, you got divorced at the age of 38, and then suddenly you have so much property that you owned 20 years ago. So let me ask, does your ex-wife have no right to divide the property? Moreover, these properties in your hands do not appear all at once, but one today and one tomorrow. Furthermore, every time there is an additional industry, there will be corresponding logic and interpersonal relationships. How to deal with these? If you could change history, what would your ex-wife do if she didn't divorce you?

Look at this synopsis, does it look familiar?

The author continues to write about entertainment. Since he has written about tokusatsu anime, he can also write about anime adapted from novels into movies and TV series. In the early stage, you can still shoot the low-cost magical Dragon King and the King of War, the return of the master, the school belle coming down from the mountain, and the master and the overbearing president. In the middle and late stages, you can shoot low-cost sand sculptures, the world's most powerful martial arts master, the mysterious master, etc. Look at it and write about it. This is your strength.

I almost ordered this book, but the author kept writing about e-sports clubs that I didn't want to read. My patience was almost at its limit, and I wanted to delete it several times. I bought this book to see the impact of the past on the future, and the future's development of future industries, not inexplicable things like e-sports clubs.

The author can try traveling through Japan and draw comics like Dragon Ball, Naruto, and One Piece, which should be popular...

Go back and write special photos. Your writing is the only one on all platforms. Hurry up.

After reading a few chapters, I felt very awkward and not at all happy. Later, when I read the book review section, everyone had the same feeling. It turned out that it was written by a female author, so I completely understood. How can I say that a female author writes a male channel? There are not many that can completely bring the male perspective. I am very fond of female authors. The author is not biased. The male videos written by the author will turn white when sleeping are also very interesting. What can I say about this book? The setting seems to be different, but the content is indifferent. The current results are also here, so I suggest that the author should not write male videos from a female perspective, or write female videos.

Your book is difficult to write well, because there is a problem with the logic, and there is a problem in the first chapter. The impact of the 38-year-old you in the past, and the 18-year-old you in the future, is not clearly written, and there are big problems in how to deal with it. This subject is suitable for the kind of humor that keeps making monsters, instead of such a serious life and hard work. You will now realize that what you did in the past will change your future in minutes, and you can still live step by step.

The setting of the past interfering with the future is too buggy, and the thief will easily collapse in the later stage.

. In addition to the logical flaws, the protagonist's personality is also a failure. Eighteen years old suddenly turned 38 years old, lying flat and falling into the feelings of two women. There is nothing much to write except describing the modern life we ​​already know. Don't you have something you like at the age of 18? In fact, there is no difference between the two age groups. If something is too easy to obtain, you should write more interesting thoughts. Besides, you can't understand the two feelings yourself, so why bother getting stuck in it? Originally, in the future, I should face a sad son, a withdrawn son, and a son whose grades have declined. Where is my wife? You got divorced, and you agreed that your wife would come back to see your son. You solved the problem with your son, but you haven't even seen your wife once since the divorce, so you just took it over with your new experience? You have written your future self as a puppet of the past. The future is completely determined by the past. Your thoughts about the future are not important at all. So are you writing about your past or future self? In the future, you will only encounter problems and get stuck in them, and never work hard to solve them, because your past deeds will cover up the problems. Even the difficulty of delivering food is only half written, without a sense of reality. So what is the point of using your future self as the first perspective? In the end, what I wrote was just the image of a writer who was caught up in the difficulties of life in the past and always recalled the past.

I have been studying the introduction for a long time, but I just don't understand the meaning of the opposite direction and being reborn I am a person who can basically read the Weird Immortal City smoothly, why are you writing about the city? Directly switch to writing Dianwen, the protagonist is set to be illiterate, maintain the level of your introduction The possibility of becoming popular is higher

The implicit joy of rebirth is to make up for regrets and revenge. The golden finger is prophetic and a natural God's perspective. The so-called reverse rebirth is a failed setting in my opinion. It abandons all the joy and has no desire to read.

This book is getting more and more confusing, with a hammer in the east and a hammer in the west.

The ex-wife line can be downplayed, but it cannot be completely ignored. If it is completely cut off, it proves that the author has drifted away, and the book will become useless. The difference between pure meat and grade three

The starting setting is great, but there are too many words to explain this setting. No need to worry. Nowadays, the plot is too trivial and the storyline is not developed much.

Does the author have a new book, or has he written it under a new title?

After reading a few chapters, I felt like I couldn't get enough of it.

It was interesting in the early stage, but after it was released, it became weak. It was either the original wife or the senior sister. What the hell is a female college student suddenly coming to. Then I can't see the more complete main line, but it's still interesting, so that's it

Is your future self your own? Is your past self your past self? Who will be the main personality after time travel?

It looks a bit messy and the reading experience is not friendly.

Why is it over? There are still 50 chapters to go.