A Trip to the Three Kingdoms

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Brother, I spent about half an hour and carefully read the chapter you posted. I don't dare to give my opinions seriously. Here are a few small suggestions: 1. You pursue retro style in terms of writing style, and you are overly pursuing skills, which is relatively unsatisfactory. I am a Chinese language and literature person. The double master's degree in history is a bit difficult to read, and it is not very friendly to readers of online literature, which mainly focuses on fast food literature. 2. The portrait of your character is not very clear, and your life in history is not obvious, so it is difficult for readers to form a cultural resonance. 3. The author's goal is unclear, and readers are not clear about the future development trajectory of the protagonist, so it is easy to abandon the book. 4. The update is too slow. As a new book, it is difficult for readers to have confidence that they can complete it.