It's Broken. I've Become a Character in the Card Pool?

The author couldn't even get a monthly pass and asked me to read other books to support him 😅

Although everyone says it's bad, I really like the author's pace. I've given you my monthly votes. I'll try to vote for you 5 or 6 times this month. Come on and write well ❤️

I would like to ask, is this a son-in-law story, where the protagonist is just supporting his wife?

Author, let me tell you, there is a big problem with your novel. Send me the follow-up and I will show it to you.

I really like reading this kind of thing. I really liked it when I was watching Lost. It is a semi-invincible novel. As long as it is well written on a daily basis, it will be fine. However, the updates are too slow. It is never enough. It is not enough. It is not enough.

You can skip the first 10 chapters, as long as you pass the names of the people, and start reading from chapter 15. Some minor problems occurred later, or the previous settings were not good. For example, why the male protagonist can command, how he knows the magic technique, etc. The novel is not bad, but when I read it, there were some conflicts in small details, and there were some comments to make up for it, so you can read it with confidence.

Similar novels are published every time, about playing games and leading beautiful girls to fight for the world, and then failing. A hundred or hundreds of years later, the male protagonist is reborn and entangles with the perverted beautiful girl again The routine is almost exactly the same, that is, the beautiful girl's inner perversion is too high, she is jealous, and there is no plot of domination. Of course, this is one of the disadvantages that this type of novels cannot get around, but it is also an advantage. After all, if you don't watch beautiful girls fighting each other, how can you watch the male protagonist commanding strategies? What ability does the author have to write strategic content? Then when you meet the second heroine, or when you fight with the second heroine, you start preparing to put it on the shelf. It's all a routine When the second heroine comes, you will taste whether a novel is a good novel. If the updates every day are all about the suspicion and fighting between the heroines, the male protagonist will be like a waste and the expectations will be greatly reduced (after all, which author has a wife) The ability to mediate palace disputes) Then the third heroine came and began to profile the first and second heroines. The expectations began to disappear, strategic rule was basically not written, and a bunch of game terms were placed on the writing. The male protagonist gradually became the background of the female protagonist. Readers began not to want to subscribe, and the author had no choice, so he started Sesese. Of course, to a large extent, Sesese will exist after it is put on the shelves. Then gradually readers of the novel became uninterested and began to stop reading. The number of subscriptions to the novel gradually declined. The author began to depict the Facebook version of the heroine, and the flood began to flood the gold mountain. Then, soon after, the update was discontinued and the eunuch was replaced. That's it. I have read a lot of such novels. The disadvantage of such novels is that "the male protagonist has superb commanding and strategic capabilities and harem coordination ability", and the female protagonist's love is based on these two, but the author cannot write them. These two parts are not something ordinary people can write. The author will definitely focus on the heroine's self-strategy and the suspicion and struggle between the heroine (after all, time has passed so long, some heroines are crazy about love, and may engage in psychopathic settings), and then break down the heroine's illness. The plot will definitely develop like this. But if you watch this kind of thing too much, you won't feel it. After all, the protagonist can only talk or rely on settings. The interesting heroine's character setting will gradually reduce the facial expression as the plot develops, turning the previous heroine into a harmless little white rabbit (reflected in being harmless around the protagonist, as if the hero has turned on a cheating device). After watching the first two heroines, readers will feel that they are the same, and they will know what they are going to do when they see the heroine appear...

You say it has content, but it only introduces the world view and background in a dozen chapters, and there is nothing much to talk about other than the recognition of the wife. You say there is no content? This kind of emotional tug and pull with the wife in the previous life, even if it is as smelly and long as the old lady's foot wrap, is still very emotional, and there are so many wives. This is a contradiction. How should you write this later?

To be honest, this book really has a very warm feeling. It's very enjoyable to watch, I hope he can finish the book.

The author only needs to keep updating in the small dark room, and we readers have a lot to consider. Jpg  The book currently only has 20 chapters, and the signs are pretty good. The title and synopsis are okay. It looks very attractive to the second dimension. The theme is quite interesting, a time travel mobile game. Although this kind of subject is poorly written, but the writing is good, many people still read it. Although many people in the comments said it was bad, I feel okay, haha, I have a bit of a party, the character It would be nice to have more characterizations, game mechanics, etc., Some people say it's bullshit, but I'm quite happy to see it, just pretend that Brother Fu has nothing to do to play games. Besides, it may also be a game made by the world consciousness. The protagonist and the former bonded spirit are not delayed, and the handling is very good. Some young writers just can't wrap their heads around the corners The post-apocalyptic wasteland-style youth romantic comedy is also quite interesting. There are only 27. The number of two-dimensional games is normal. The more the better, but I am afraid that the author cannot grasp it and can portray each one clearly. If there is no face blindness, the whole book should be just right. Everyone should be worried about this However, some people in the post said that they want to make a dark and cruel plot again. My evaluation is that it can be done. After all, the overall framework is a game turned into reality, or adapted from the reality of the epic world of Qi Ling. It is normal to write something real. After all, it is based on this kind of Eryou game world. You have to write it well. Even if it is an 18 plus game world novel, readers themselves can give you twists. It is better to do it yourself. It is a bit difficult to avoid lightning, but after all, it is a world of order that can be solved by just one mention, although it looks a bit bad at the top. This is a novel in which the protagonist is a savior. It is better to have a flexible moral bottom line. The novel has not been developed too much so far, so it is difficult to evaluate. After all, it is a macho savior from another world and a heroic spirit with a hard-to-break personality. He saves the world and saves the world. If we really want to talk about identity, don't be ridiculous. Can we really say that all human beings in the world are one family? You can't have a hot face but a cold butt. Otherwise, it feels like the senior executives of this world have to stand on the high point of morality and point their fingers. Jpg I hope to see a flexible moral bottom line in the novel, and the protagonist stands on the high point of morality and points the finger. Everyone is tired and just want to have some fun, such as: You are arresting him, why do you want me to get out of the way. Jpg (laughing) After all, this is the second game, and the favorability is already maxed out. It's not too much to add some color, right? It might as well be a little embellishment, too frequent and aesthetic fatigue. It's good if there are a few home runs in one volume. The sex can be less, but the protagonist can't be a eunuch, Shura field and so on. Everyone has tasted enough, it's time to serve some hard dishes As for Lei, I'm not very sensitive, so I just found one. If you want to be sexy, the protagonist is a heroic spirit, and the body is made up of raw materials. I can't say, but I feel that there are many people who will point at it. I feel that the raw materials are used as nutrients to materialize the soul. This is a good saying. You can learn from this I played a game with a similar theme: Doomsday Wasteland, defeating the apostle and all things polluted by him to save the world. Unfortunately, the protagonist is a bit stupid, or he is just a tool man. He only knows how to witness the development of the world. I hope the author's style is bigger and not like some era versions of Sewer Long Aotian. Same, go around putting out fires like a rescue team. There are so many versions of legendary contract spirits. It's not too much to gather three to push the human race. Of course, after unifying the human race, push directly. It's basically meaningless. It depends on the author's performance, but at least don't be a thug. At least peak mastery 27 SSR pushed across the world and almost won against several fallen worlds. Although it was operated on a mobile phone, the information and some specific contents were all true. The author also used this and SSR's favorability as a plug-in, so it wouldn't be so profitable To sum up, it is difficult to write novels these days. Many studios are working on assembly lines, and there are a lot of pretense and slaps in the face. It is no fun to read, but it still occupies a large market. Although the author's novels are still interesting, the current flow rate is hard to say. Everyone has different preferences. I can only say that the author is working hard, and he will try to read as many as possible. More to the point, sometimes large quantities can retain people, but now there are only 20 pictures. It's hard to say. If it's really not enough, I'll understand. I just hope that the author won't fucking lose contact by then, and at least leave an outline to escape. I am an author who forces the party and really can't lose contact. At least there is a beginning and an end

It's such an excellent novel. It's a pity that the author gave up. My guess is that the reason for the low number of subscriptions is as follows: 1. As a starting point, writers with too few words, to be honest, really don't dare to read it. I can only say that it is a prophecy. The author should be prepared for worse results in the next book. After all, readers will be more demanding on writers with criminal records. If possible, change the vest. 2. The choice of subject matter appeals to too few audiences? In fact, I feel that this subject matter has a large audience. Maybe the editor is not very optimistic and does not provide many resources, so there has been no recommendation for this book? Will the author write about the city in his next book? Farewell, the audience is smaller, urban novels have long been out of date, except for rebirth novels, but the author should be good at writing rebirth novels, a bit like "Reignited". 3. The pace is too slow. At 450,000 words, I feel that the development of the plot is really slow. Delicate writing is a good thing, but not everyone can accept it. I can only say that the author has done a great job in filling it with water. 4. I don't know. Based on my many years of experience in reading novels, I shouldn't. This book is really good. I think the author should really persevere, or this kind of subject matter is too difficult to control and I can't continue writing

Let's change it a bit. The number of bonded spirits used to be 42 was too many. This number would really make people feel uneasy.

Are there any men who don't want to play? What! As a man, I entered the second game and was played by a female NPC? Then I have to play

I ran it around with AI and it can be used as a reference. The actual description is mainly based on the description in the text

It's so embarrassing to be slapped in the face. Invisible disguise is the most deadly. It feels like a forced set! So retarded.

This is the first book that makes me feel confused and incomprehensible.

Nowadays, we don't dare to pursue books written by new authors. The probability of being eunuchs is too high. Then, no one pursues the books and they support the authors and they can't wait any longer. A vicious cycle begins.

I just read Chapter 18 and I think it's okay, but sometimes I feel inexplicably awkward. I always say that the protagonist is the master of Akaashi's field, but the readers are not here for Akaashi. It should be because the author's writing style is a little immature. I hope it can be better.

The setting and touching writing style are both familiar and unfamiliar yet novel. It can be said to be a treasure. However, Miaoyou is a little flustered. Please keep updating the author.

The writing method is very familiar, it should be a trumpet. I personally think that this kind of subject matter is very attractive in the early stage, but it becomes more difficult to write in the later stage, and it is easy to end up unfinished. Then the 27 female protagonists have too much appetite. It is recommended to modify it, otherwise it will be easy to die.

Alas, it's really a pity. The writing style, subject matter and the portrayal of the heroine of this film are all in line with my appetite. I didn't expect that I would die after not watching it for a while 😭😭😭 I really like the subject matter of this film. (Brothers, if you have similar meal replacements, can you recommend them? A good person will have a safe life₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑) I can only say that the current starting point is indeed prone to a vicious cycle, and it is really easy for newcomers to enter the palace () Then I saw the issue of the number of female protagonists mentioned in the comment area, and it is actually not bad. Personally, I like all the female protagonists who have appeared in the article so far. I like the little fox very much, but the heroine I am most interested in is the little witch. I personally hope that the author can publish the outline, so that I can finish the story (⋟⋞). It's a pity that I didn't get to see the story of taking down the little witch. Finally, I hope that the new book will go well. Due to my personal preference for this work, I will continue to read it if I still have this number. (The heroine design of this work can actually continue to be used in the new book. Of course, this is just a selfish wish.) Don't cut it for the next one (T_T) After all, everyone's trust will be eroded. Once again, I wish the author Da Da's new book success 🙂

Take the contract, which is the success of the strategy, as an example. Chapter 40 strategy strategy Hoshimi. Not to mention confession, author, you really plan to write a thousand chapters. I can only say that the sea is all water.

I'm speechless. You're actually a eunuch. If you do this, I'll only read the ones that have been updated for five or six hundred chapters. I'll just stop following the new books. I'm speechless.

Change your waistcoat more often, lest someone expose it one day

When I came back from vacation, the sky fell. Why were the books gone?

What's the situation? I think it's quite interesting. Apart from the fact that the heroine is a bit weak, her grades are so bad that she needs to be cut off.

It's too slow. I wanted to keep it, but ended up losing it. According to the author, the first order should be 3k.

It's my first time to fully book, I was very optimistic about it, but I'm a little sad ❤️‍🩹

It cracked, and it just disappeared after just over a month.

So if the author doesn't open a new book yet, I will pull this book out of the bookshelf.