He Was in Jihu, and He Became a Demon Disciple at the Beginning!

After reading a few chapters, the most annoying thing to me is that among the thousands of evil demons, a group of people can always see an ordinary protagonist with extraordinary temperament who stands out from the rest. To be honest, unless you have 10 million heads, you are just a weirdo. Your basic characteristics are none, and it is useless to even let others remember your qualifications. To use a more practical metaphor, would President Berry notice a homeless man sleeping on the street in a remote town? I won't talk about these anymore. It's really hard for me to imagine that an ordinary person would attract so much attention. I can't think of any other reasons besides pure narcissism to the point of being self-righteous and worthless.

Why do you write about evil demons participating in the Desire Contest? This is so poisonous! Moreover, Belloba actually doesn't like the evil demon disciples. She only supports Azuma Daozhang because she wants to have fun and sees his corruption. So I thought why not write about normal time-travelers participating? In addition, demons are basically guaranteed to win when they participate in the competition. They are all the same. . . The golden finger I was given was too strong. . .

Either the author has not read Jihu seriously and is too lazy to read the original work when writing fan fiction, or the author has never been to high school and his English is poor, or it is both. Otherwise, you won't have to enter a boost incorrectly several times in a row.

Don't let him be persecuted by those byds. Even Jinghe and I are wondering, are these Nitian really my teammates?

The smell of dog licking is so strong that I can write two chapters every time I eat with a woman. Is this a human being?

These Kamen Riders from Ji Fox Tokio are so ugly. Why do so many people write about them?

[People in Japan become lackeys]

700,000 Words are still in Jihu. I want to know what else is being read?

More than half of the chapters are explained and stated. I can't see much advancement of the plot, and even less if it's exciting. There is a lot of room for improvement.

The knight story basically has more than 100 chapters, and it will basically be full of water in the future, which is normal.

Either write more, or use less nonsense. You can't even explain in one chapter that it's all nonsense. You are the leader. There is no content in the first place and it is played out of context. Where is the other person?

Warrior of the four oceans, ancestor of the Water Dragon King, Neptune

The author must be the ultimate veteran of Tieba, and his level of professionalism is not ordinary 😁

I agree very much with the third floor.

It's the evil god who can completely destroy people in the future, and even the future god gold can't defeat it. The protagonist has swallowed the seed with the power to create the world. How long will it take?

Here are some pictures. I still don't have a reference for the protagonist's armor, and some of the transformations don't feel immersive 😢

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When I see the back, I can only say that the Pacific Ocean is not as watery as you.

Why isn't this protagonist called Zurich?

It's too watery and not interesting. The plot has been changed a bit but not completely, and it's not that exciting either 😒😒

Haha, you are a demon disciple for one day, and you will be a demon disciple for the rest of your life!

The author might as well have written about flaming swords, electric light swords and the like. I keep writing about sword slashes and big swords, but I feel like I can't tell which Kamen Rider it is? After all, the specific names of the Kamen Riders in the Holy Blade series are too homogeneous and difficult to distinguish. And then there are 11 Kamen Riders, who can tell them apart?

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Recommend a book that is decisive, sharp, and full of joy: "Old Man in Time Travel Picks Up Rags and Survives by Making Bad Movies" is hilarious...

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What significance does this novel have now?

It's a pretty good Kamen Rider fan novel. I kept asking for monthly tickets and recommendation tickets, but in the end I paid by mistake 😡

Can the author write another novel in which the protagonist is reincarnated as Nezha?

Looking at the catalog, I saw that a polar fox has written more than 300 chapters. I admire him. No wonder he has no achievements, Poseidon.

The author could write a Kamen Rider Gabu where the main character is Ima or Erki's younger brother.

Why do you feel that the writing is so long-winded?