A Wandering Rogue in Republican-Era China

He really traveled through the Republic of China, brought martial arts skills to Japan, and went to Japan to assassinate the Japanese elites who were attacking the Chinese side, and then assassinated the Atomic Godfather to make World War II more bloody.

,,,, What a fire burning opium

The dialogue between the characters is very weird. What I want to read is a novel. Can it be written more normally 😴? No drama or translation accent. It feels like I am reading lines, not life-like at all. Oh my God, my dear friend, I'm going to kick this author's ass with my boot. Oh my goodness. Come and see, my friend, for heaven's sake.

Personal suggestions are for reference only. When writing about the Republic of China, it is best not to get involved in either party or get too involved in the general trend of the country. Just write a dashing knight-errant. When encountering injustice, it is best to draw your sword for justice and just throw away the trouble. By the way, you can also go to Shanghai and Xiangjiang to meet the influential figures of the times. It is best to stay outside the times rather than blend in with them. As for national affairs, it is natural for ancestors to take the lead. It's an insult to write. Later, if there is no need to write about the Republic of China, we can change the map. The suggestions for martial arts level are concise and clear, and do not divide into some messy proficiency levels. It's okay if you don't know how to master it. All that stuff about superb levels is bullshit. Any skill will become rusty if you don't practice it for a long time. You can recover with more practice. This is the principle of never leaving your hand. Every time I see the author arranging a series of proficiency levels, I feel sick about what is small and what is great. Shouldn't it be a matter of yes or no? What would you say is the difference between Dacheng and perfection? It's just that the adjectives are used differently. At most, you won't be able to attend the meeting and then become proficient.

The creativity is very good, the writing is awesome 😓 Knowing the danger, he always uses a knife and a gun The protagonist is not a fool, right? Martial arts also include long-range concealed weapons, right? Hidden weapons can kill people at night without anyone noticing No safer than stabbing someone with a gun.

What is the meaning of writing about Lucky Student? On the surface, it is to take in a little brother, but in fact, it feels like the protagonist is just a nanny.

After reading a few chapters, the golden three chapters were mediocre. But he kills decisively, strikes fiercely and doesn't beep too much. At present, the golden finger seems simple. You get soul points by killing people. You can recharge two silver coins to buy cheats. The soul points can be upgraded to increase the level of cheats to improve your physical fitness.

Where is the prodigal son of the Republic of China? He has been helping the Communist Party to fight against Japan. This is also called a prodigal son!? Just call the Republic of China to resist Japan.

Chapters 40 and 50 seem awkward.

When writing about three people, the author had to describe them from head to toe. When the protagonist took a shower, he also described them from head to toe. It was too literary and too watery. There is also a protagonist who can assassinate and compete with enemies. Do you think you are writing a published martial arts novel? 😅😅😅