Joy of Life: Starting Out as Fan Xian's Teacher

Have you bought a house? Have you bought a car? Married? Have children? Do you have enough money for baby milk powder? What about money for school? Has your child bought a house? Has your child bought a car? Is the child married? Have any grandchildren? Has your grandson bought a house? Has your grandson bought a car? Is your grandson married? How can you sleep? Please update quickly.

I can't see the protagonist's needs, such as why he wants to become stronger, why he wants to be an official, and what his ultimate goal is. There is not much text to show it. Originally, the golden finger can be used as support, but the sense of gain from the golden finger is not obvious. There is no initial value. If you add it, it feels dispensable. After reading the whole article, I have no problem with the character design, but I personally feel a little awkward about the portrayal. I feel like I have no desires and no demands. Because there are no needs, there is naturally no satisfaction brought by meeting the needs. The full text relies more on the relief brought by other people's recognition of the protagonist. Then there is the goal, it is best to be clear and it can be regarded as a phased achievement. When advancing the plot, add some progress reports appropriately, which may create a sense of satisfaction. With this support, the "water" problem can also be easily solved. The above is just a personal representation. The writing is pretty good, but some humble opinions are dispensable. Congratulations on this excellent book! Don't spray!

What everyone wants to see is you interacting with the characters in the plot, using the system to become stronger and showing off to the good guys, and pretending to be smart and slapped in the face with logic. Look what you did after you entered Beijing. You forced extra drama. There is no logic and it is uncomfortable to watch.

Good guy, everyone who copied you has copied it. As expected, you can still make money by writing fan fiction 🙂

Those who write about Qing Yunian's fandom all have misunderstandings about the Grand Master in it. Grand Master Qing Yunian can conquer a country by himself. The masters of the seventh and eighth grades below the Grand Master can be killed by 1-200 with one sword of the Grand Master. The most powerful crossbow in the army has tens of thousands of arrows. What is the concept? Luo, the destructive power of the Grand Master is more than 10 miles in radius, and there is a human-made nuclear bomb. The protagonist of the novel has inherited the level of Ximen Chuixue and can cut out 40 meters of sword energy. He is capable of being a Grand Master 😅. The Grand Master of Qing Yu Nian can kill hundreds of people with one move.

The protagonist's combat power upgrade is a bit slow. Fan Xian's has already reached 90%, and he's only at level 5.

If I were you, my mentality would be shattered. The book I finally wrote would probably cost two to three thousand a month, and the person who ranked first on the list would have ordered tens of thousands of orders... I guess it's because you were slower and didn't have to copy anymore. Now you're starting to make a mistake 😭

I think it's quite interesting. Starting from the original novel, there are no epilepsy-like or democratic demands in the TV series. The plot and character arrangement are reasonable, and the protagonist has a high degree of integration with the world. Unlike other novels where the protagonist suddenly jumps into the plot like a joke, and the further exploration of the world is also very good and feels very real. That system is really difficult to deal with. If you don't plan to write about astronomy, the system will be a failure in the later stage, and the system settings are not very good.

Good guy, the author is so miserable. This book was less than Qianjun when it started. If it moves next door, it will be directly sold by Tianyi. That person can earn at least 500,000 yuan in royalties from Tianyi. The author should quickly find an editor to protect his rights.

I suggest you go to Luozuo to write. There is a book there that imitates you and reached the top of the rankings.