Class Change for All: My Class Is Rebel

Sun Wukong was also a rebel when he wreaked havoc in the Heavenly Palace.

The author's writing has many problems. First, the class division is different from the order of white, green, and blue that most people are familiar with. Instead, it is white, blue, and green. Also, the protagonist has a high-level job but chooses an ordinary job instead. Normal people really can't do that.

It's really well-written, not misleading, but the first three chapters are enough to make you want to quit.

Holy crap, if you made it like leveling up in a game, that would be one thing, but this is just endless dungeons, rebel talents, and you're not organizing refugees and villagers to revolt? What kind of rebel are you? It's a waste of time…

No, since your profession is a rebel, shouldn't you recruit a large group of people to rebel? Then you could advance your career to become a rebel king or a rebel leader. Otherwise, you're just fighting alone. Tell me, what kind of rebel fights alone? You need to gather a large group of people to revolt, that's what makes a rebel. What kind of rebel are you, wandering around alone?

You really shouldn't revise Chapter 4, it's so cruel! You could at least change it so the protagonist offended someone before, but now people are inexplicably teaming up to attack him.

Revise Chapter Two and add the third section on job skills to the job selection section. Otherwise, you'll lose a lot of readers. Choosing a common job over a rare one might seem like you're trying to portray the protagonist as having the magnanimity of Boss Chen, but to us readers, he's either mentally unstable or a reincarnated gambler.

The first three chapters are already screening readers.

A profession rated as "ordinary" (white) possesses extraordinary characteristics and talents; is this system some kind of idiot?

To write about rebels for the sake of writing about rebels, the table of contents just looks like ordinary monster-slaying and leveling up—is that what you call rebellion? If you actually killed everyone in the inner city, I might respect you a little more; otherwise, you're just a complete clown, so low-class.