People Are Traveling to the West, and at the Beginning, They Become Apprentices to Zhen Yuanzi

He also has millet porridge boxing skills. It's crazy

At first it looked like a fairy, but now it looks like a martial arts

To be honest, the author's writing skills are very strong, but the writing is really average. Readers read the novel to see the protagonist showing off, not the author. The poems are really good, but there are too many poems in the chapters, which can make people feel embarrassed. Really, I would like to give you a suggestion, write less poems in it, it will greatly affect the viewing experience.

I haven't read the novel yet, and I don't know what the spiritual practice system is. I just want to talk about the origin of Zhenyuan Immortal. Zhen Yuanzi is an original character in Journey to the West, and he has strong traces of the inner alchemy sect. "Zhonglu Chuan Dao Ji" has a classification of immortals, which are divided into five types: heaven, earth, humans, gods and ghosts. Among them, the introduction of earth immortals is to refine a golden elixir and put it in the fields forever, and you can live forever. This is called land immortal. At the same time, the book also introduces Shimodian, saying that Shimodian is Xiayuan, the master of the five internal organs. Based on the Journey to the West, it is said that Zhenyuan Immortal is the ancestor of the Earth Immortal. He must be the one who is most proficient in the way of the Earth Immortal. He is the best at using golden elixir to "forever suppress Xiayuan", so he is named "Zhen Yuanzi". Then Xianyuan is the "Lord of the Five Internal Organs", so the way of Zhenyuan Immortal is The field is called "Wuzhuang Temple" There is also the location of the lower field, three inches below the navel. This place basically corresponds to the roots of descendants. This thing is to Zhenyuan Immortal just like the ginseng fruit tree is to Wuzhuang Temple (it can bear children). Therefore, Zhenyuan Immortal learned that monkeys push people down. After joining the fruit tree, he was not upset [Qingfeng paused, Mingyue bowed her head and said: "Master! Your old friends were originally monks from the east, a group of robbers, very vicious!" The immortal smiled and said: "Don't be frightened, speak slowly."] [Mingyue said: "I didn't fight, I just took it. Our ginseng tree has been knocked down." When the great immortal heard this, he was not even angry and said: Don't cry, don't cry...] Because he is the ancestor of the earth immortal, that's what he does. It is his special skill as the ancestor of the earth immortal to save the ginseng fruit tree and ensure that the aura of this place continues to circulate smoothly. (The evidence is that in Journey to the West, the monkey finally asked Guanyin Bodhisattva for help, and the Immortal Zhenyuan was so panicked that he hurried out to greet him. [However, it was said that the Immortal in Guanyin and the three elders were talking to each other. Suddenly, Sun Dasheng pressed his head on the cloud and shouted: "The Bodhisattva is here. Hurry up, hurry up!" Sanxing, Zhen Yuanzi and Sanzang masters and disciples all rushed out of the palace] [The great immortal bowed to thank the Bodhisattva and said: "Xiao Ke's deeds, how dare you trouble the Bodhisattva to descend]") According to the interpretation of the Neidan Sect. , Tang Monk has officially cultivated the Golden elixir here in Wuzhuang Temple. After that, he only needs to use the Golden elixir to suppress Xiayuan, and he can cultivate immortality. It is from this time onwards that there is a saying that eating Tang Monk's meat can lead to immortality on the westward journey. If the author wants to write a pure Journey to the West, then the protagonist's practice system should not deviate from the core route of Neidan suppressing Xiayuan, otherwise it will really waste a master like Zhen Yuanzi, the ancestor of the earthly immortals.

The protagonist is too weak, and as a result, he is surrounded by a bunch of big guys, which makes him feel frustrated.

Let me tell you this as I pass by, rubbish.

Brother Monkey, when will something happen?

It's very well written, and the text has a classic flavor like Journey to the West. At least I haven't seen another book like this on Qidian. Especially the various poems in it, I like them very much😁😁😁

The original Journey to the West and the current Journey to the West seem to have nothing to do with the human race. The strong ones are always the two characters of gods and demons.

Is it a pure journey to the west or a journey to the wild west?