Starting with Gold Hunting at the Bottom of the River, I Temper My Body into Sainthood

The subject matter is not bad, but the suppression is too harsh, and the pig's feet clearly want to develop in a low-key manner, but they drop the chain at the critical moment and pretend to be ruthless.

The writing is very good, but the protagonist is too depressed to be brave. There is also the fact that the protagonist can leave but never leave. While staying in the town, he is blocked by all kinds of trivial things and embarrassed by all kinds of little people. He obviously has to leave and just change his vest. He has to suffer the consequences himself. The sense of substitution is too uncomfortable

The slow pace is understandable. I want to write a long novel, but there is no need to make the protagonist so useless. . . It's so annoying to watch. Your writing style could have been better, but it's a pity that such a useless protagonist has really seen his end.

There are many ways to reduce your intelligence. For example, there are three combinations of adding points, and the worst one can be used. For example, I just put the things I bought in the shack casually, and forced my neighbors to help me voluntarily to prevent them from being stolen, as if I didn't think of putting them away.

What should I say? After killing someone, the immortal happened to have a relationship with his son, so he had to help him investigate and kept chasing the protagonist. What did he think? A strength that must be crushed every time? Then let the protagonist develop and then fight back? It's a bit disgusting, why not run the curtain? Also, if you make a little money, the whole world will know that you made money, which is boring.

There are antiques, remains, garbage, and sunken ships in the river, but there are no fish.

The protagonist is too stubborn, and everyone likes to bully the stubborn person. Everyone will know later.

Features of Starting Point: Starting from all kinds of dregs

The writing is quite good, the protagonist has character and brains, and although there are routines, they are used very flexibly. It's a good novel! Come on

The developmental Golden Finger looks particularly twisted in all kinds of extra scenes