Peninsula: This Is What It's Like to Be a Star

Entering the pit hy is a huge raging, and then the light and shadow are out of control from then on. In the past few years, I have read almost all hymn articles over and over again. I also went from knowing nothing about girl groups to basically knowing everything about them. Even boy bands. Then I wanted to write a book. So I started writing. Please forgive me for my poor writing. I don't know tj, I will keep writing. This book can be written by the second to fifth generations. Multiple female protagonists Tentatively, I will choose the only sister, and the rest will depend on writing. Thank you for your support, 2 updates a day, 4000 guaranteed.

Come on, as long as you write peaches, we are half brothers

I have read 20 chapters and have a few questions. Pig's Knuckle helped Fx produce a debut song. Doesn't it have copyright? Don't you sign the contract? Can't get royalties? It must have been at least a year from writing songs to the 20th chapter I saw of helping Tara write songs! There is no description of how much money was earned! He also works in convenience stores all the time, and writes songs for Tara without any description or process of signing a contract with the president of their company It's like a pig's foot is like a good person who doesn't ask for anything in return. After reading Chapter 20, Pigfoot practiced like crazy for his debut, and had to go to work, and finally ended up in the hospital. Although it was probably because he took a lot of sleeping pills at the beginning! Many details are not included. In the first few chapters, it was described that Pig's trotters were not used to eating Korean food, and they had to make their own Chinese food with grass feed and spicy cabbage for every meal. They didn't write about it anymore, as if Pig's trotters were an authentic Korean! To sum up, apart from the improvement in professional skills such as dancing, Pig Knuckle has not improved at all! Life has not improved at all

Write an outline carefully. The first volume has a lot of daily life, and the crazy pushing of the main plot in the second volume seems to be unfinished. The daily & career lines are balanced, and the daily life should be promoted. Sooner or later, multiple female protagonists will face the Shura field, and it will be more difficult to handle when there are too many characters in the back. The career line should be written in more detail, even if it is filled with information, it is better than quickly advancing the main plot to enhance the rationality.

First of all, it is a genre that I like, and I encourage the author to keep working hard, but I also want to make some small suggestions. Some of the small scenes are a bit pretentious, self-impressed, and the emotions are too sudden, without foreshadowing, and it does not feel particularly reasonable. The second one is that the overall feeling is that the protagonist's fan filter is too thick. I don't know if the author himself is a fan of them. Although it is not mentioned in the article. The level of licking, but sometimes it is still too flattering. When writing, it is recommended to be more neutral. You can deepen the emotions between the characters in the text. Otherwise, every time a character appears, I feel that the protagonist is naturally inferior to others. It is possible that if there is reality, this may be true, or it may be more serious. However, for a better reading experience, it is better to modify it. What I said may be wrong, it's just my personal opinion. After all, everyone's personality is different. Maybe I'm a special case, so it's okay to treat it as nonsense 😁

24 Years of Qri

Please write more about Shura Chang. The most important thing in Korean entertainment is the female lead.

Come on!

I will watch it if there are multiple female protagonists, and I can support it if it is released. If it is single, I will only support it from the chapters on the shelf 🙂. I am a fan of kpop girl group Boai, and I like all the pretty ones. I don't hide it, I just covet their looks and figures, I'm despicable 😏😏😏😏

I was just reading it, but unexpectedly it suited my taste. The writing is very good, keep up the good work!

Didn't you, the author, say that you would definitely finish it? More than three months. I haven't seen any movement from you yet. Are you still writing this book?

There are a lot of things I like to watch, and I really wish there could be a timeline to make up for some of the regrets in reality. But it feels too rushed, there are too many things that I want to do and do, and there are many plot points that can be explosive. I can summarize it in one sentence Well, after reading the introduction, which is currently 320,000 words, I feel that it can be extended to a million words (ignoring that some plots are too idealistic). There are too many groups and people, and the author wants a little bit of them all, but the writing is really not enough, and the characters are very thin. I watched it with a big filter. I really like watching Korean entertainment recently. In some plots, I was restrained from laughing I really want to say that the faults are not hidden, but my personal evaluation can only be a mixed bag. There is a lot of room for improvement Xiayu

Author, what you wrote is so to my liking, what you wrote is so damn good.