Shrouding the Heavens: The Mythical Demon Venerable

It's pointless to arrange a fateful enemy for Zhe Tian. It should be because all the geniuses of an era are enemies. What's the point of arranging an inexplicable old enemy for you? I can't wait to kill you, this piece of garbage has a bright future.

In the original work, Immortal King Ao Sheng still needs to see Shi Hao and the Liu Shenfa mastered by Shi Hao to confirm that Shi Hao will be his enemy in the future. This Lukong is an Immortal II or an Immortal III. He has no causal relationship with the protagonist and has never even met him. He can accurately deduce the protagonist and even his position. Brother, the Immortal King is not as good as you😅. Are you really not an Immortal Emperor in the game?

Hmm... Reading this novel, it's like I'm controlling the character to play a game. The protagonist has no brains at all. It's really a shame for Huangtian Emperor to meet you. It said that the divine ban was opened for the first time, and then it was said that it was the first time to open the divine ban? They were almost beaten to death, why not just start before the fight? His wife betrayed him, what on earth was he doing? Isn't it reasonable and enjoyable to read novels? Reading your novel makes me feel unreasonable, uncomfortable, and inexplicably aggrieved.

It's okay to have an old enemy, but I don't feel like writing your old enemy well.

I haven't read it yet. Since he calls himself a demon, he is also labeled as a decisive killer and a villain. If he is really labeled, he can read it. But after I read the introduction... I found it not very interesting and not very attractive. They all write about demons. I think it would be interesting to write about the villain route, but no one writes about them. They all say they are demons. In fact, they are no different from the righteous ones. They are basically all in the decent camp without anything new, and I am tired of reading them. It would be interesting if we did something different and wrote about a Dark Lord who follows the dark flow, but no one seems to be writing about it, which is a pity.

The devil in my heart is the kind of devil with monstrous, domineering, powerful and unyielding temperament. It has nothing to do with good or evil and only depends on the position. The reason why the ruthless emperor swallows others is because of the struggle on the road. Everyone who walks on this road is an enemy. What are you, no matter whether you are an enemy or not? You are a completely evil cultivator who slaughters cities and destroys countries at every turn. You are no different from the evil supreme beings in those restricted areas. Countless sages and great emperors of the human race died to protect the human race. Wherever you go, you even slaughter the common people and mortals of the human race. My three views are relatively normal. I really can't stand it.

They have been mindlessly promoting Wu Shi and others. The descendants of the Immortal King can still be suppressed by Wu Shi. This is also 6. Immortal weapon transformations and chaotic bodies may not be able to defeat the descendants of the Immortal King. Can your family, Wu Shi, defeat the descendants of the Immortal King? Doesn't it take the descendants of the Immortal King too seriously? What's even more funny is that the granddaughter of a quasi-immortal emperor can even tie with Wu Shi. Good guy, Shi Hao and Ye Fan are not that awesome!

In the front, the protagonist's strength is so fast, but in the back, he finds various reasons to suppress his fighting strength. In the fourth life of the protagonist, the Lingbao comes out. After more than 100,000 years, the Lingbao is ready to transform into the fifth life. The protagonist is only in the fifth life. Hundreds of thousands of years later, the protagonist is in the sixth life. Emperor Zun has just been born. As a result, Emperor Zun is considering the fourth life, and you are still the sixth life. I have lived for almost a million years, and I am only in my sixth life. I really know how to suppress my fighting power. What's the point of keeping fighting to keep up with the plot? And you have to know that the protagonist is a time traveler and has a reference. He shouldn't change so slowly. Look at how slow the transformation of Emperor Zun and Immortal in the original work is. Part of it is that there is really no way ahead, and there are no fellow Taoists to refer to the transformation method. The slowness of transformation is understandable. Typical examples are Duan De and the God Emperor, who spent millions of years transforming into immortals. Most of them were either sleeping or crazily stacking their lifespans. There is also immortality, which is stuck in time to come out and bathe in the blood of the emperor. It takes millions of years to become an immortal. Emperor couldn't beat his peers when he first appeared. Even if the opponent was the protagonist, how could he be so good at someone who is millions of years older than his opponent? The process of becoming an immortal probably takes a long time. But the people behind are changing faster and faster. Wushi, Wu Ren, Ye Fan, etc., When people transform, in addition to their extraordinary talents, they also have the transformation experiences left by emperor-level people before them to refer to. For example, Ye Fan learned from a ruthless person how to transform into a chaotic body and live out the next life. Those who have a reference can save millions of years of detours. They don't have to keep crazily stacking their lifespans, sleeping crazily, stuck in time, using long years to explore the road ahead without reference, and become immortals in the world of mortals. It is completely understandable. Can your protagonist be the same? With so many reference answers in my mind, it actually takes millions of years to become an immortal? This is the trash among the protagonists! ! !

The endless reincarnation of the ancestors sacrifices the spirit and returns to the human realm. Author, are you kidding me? Have you ever read the perfect original work? If you haven't read it, don't write about Immortal Ancients. It's written in such a bullshit way. In half an era, you become an Immortal King giant. You think they are all the protagonists.

The writing is very childish, arranging an old enemy on the road to enlightenment. The opposite party does not break the protagonist's Taoist heart, but instead talks about sleeping with the protagonist's woman like an ancient playboy. It's like a cup of flavored coffee. It's coffee but it tastes awkward.