Start Exploring the Unknown at Hogwarts

In ten chapters, from Muggle to "potions master", from a blank piece of paper to "writing a book". I've read a lot of Harry Potter fanfics, but this is the first time I've seen something so awesome. Ten chapters, did the protagonist study for a week? January? One semester? Or a year? How many potions books have you read? How much potions theory did you learn? How many medicinal materials were processed? How much of the medicinal properties do you understand? How many potions have you prepared? Just put a little salt in the iron pot when cooking? He slapped his forehead and came up with a standardized potion preparation, which shocked all the professors. Can he bring back hysteria from his past life through time travel?

It's pure nonsense. At the beginning, I said that I still need to know which period of the Dark Lord. I thought I just traveled through time. But when I turned the page, I saw that it has been 8 years. You have traveled through 8 years and you don't know what year it is? Or should I say that I can't remember the plot? Isn't that disgusting?

Too many settings are unreasonable, and if they are not in line with the public, it is just your own imagination.

Written in an extremely arrogant manner, the magic world in 1991 was shocked by a simple unit of measurement. For those who didn't know, they thought it was primitive people. Just based on this poisonous point, I think your book can be reopened

Why is this thing even included in the daily guide?

I was speechless after reading the introduction. Either become the Dark Lord or counterattack the magic world.

This is a boring and cliche novel. Start receiving mail-shopping-enrollment. The content is not novel at all, but the protagonist is still systematic and powerful. It cannot be said that it is not good-looking at all, but it is definitely not a good grass. For some people, it may be acceptable as a work that can be added or subtracted during a book shortage (but I basically endured it until a few chapters after enrolling, then directly opened the table of contents and looked at the chapters that interested me and then gave up the book🤣)

In the first chapter, he died of poison. Following the outrageous death method of keyboard electrocution, he died of wound infection. This is still bearable, but he still doesn't know the time period. The calendar is the same as the decoration. This is a bit of a curse. You don't even know the time period. What's the difference between you and the aboriginals?

Go eat Oreos yourself🔨🔨🔨

Is the author just starting to try writing? I hope the rationality of the subsequent plot can be better arranged.

After reading Chapter 134, I found that it is not as unbearable as the comment section said. I have my own whims and whims. Of course, there must be some poison points. It just depends on the poison resistance. You can see some stitching of fan plots in this book, but for some settings and details, there are many that are not in line with the original work, which is a huge poisonous point for more serious people. For example, how to take Fuling Elixir, one bottle at a time? There are some setting details that I won't go into. In short, there are no problems with big things, but a lot of small things are ignored. Then there is the plot. Some are hard to dent, hard to stitch, and some are handled more smoothly. Of course, there are also some very strange ones, but you can still read it without being too serious. After all, the writing style is not a big problem. The poisonous point is the hard-core plot part. When the protagonist is involved in the key plot, or because of variables, it needs to be "original" or stitched into the new storyline of Voldemort and Horcruxes. Most of them have strange poisonous points. For example, when stitching together other fan plots, I inexplicably ran away to calculate diaries and learn black magic. It was as if I had a collecting habit. The books, magic, Ravenclaw gifts, etc. Included in the memory palace seemed fake. Isn't that enough to digest and absorb? Can't get enough of Nick's legacy? When stitching together the plot of other people's fan books, can't you sort out the extent of the settings you have added to the protagonist? I can only say that I have read too many hp fan books, and there are many cases of stitching and borrowing, but I hope the author can think more, and good stitching is also an ability.

The introduction is too vague and doesn't express anything. What is your selling point? How do you attract those readers? And there will definitely be people who are not good at the early stage of this book review. Either we should be rational and try to change it, or we can ignore it and go our own way. No matter if we succeed or fail, others will not get anything, but it is easy to persuade many people to give up if we reply one by one.

Change the cover. If you have a good cover, you will be more popular.

Although I haven't read your book, reading the comment circle reminds me of how I was bullied back then. I hope you can relax your mind and look at readers' comments, and calmly write the work you want.