My Talents Will Evolve.

Don't you think it's troublesome for you to have +1 proficiency in root bones in your profile? Isn't it okay to have root bone +1? All I can say is that your profile is very impressive. If you want to attract people, change your profile.

Talents and physical attributes are more suitable for growth

I've only written about twenty chapters now, but it's very good. It feels very good that the interaction with Mr. Lin seems a bit crazy, the ancestors. But thinking about it, you know that you are in a different world without any kinship, you have no worries, you still have the power, and you can easily become an ancestor. The interaction, bonding, and mutual banter with the NPC Lin Shao and his teammates are very well written. Regardless of whether it's serious or not, what I saw made me want the protagonist to accept the current teammates (meaning to go through a few more dungeons together).

I think the biggest shortcoming so far is that there are too many dialogues, too long-winded, and a lot of them are unnecessary.

The creative plot is okay, but the writing is too detailed. It's so detailed that when you go to the toilet, you have to open the door first, then take off your pants, squat down, wipe it with your right hand after pulling it, and then pick up your pants and go out. It's a bit watery.

It's okay, but thanks for the detailed description, it's a bit watery.

Don't tell me, you cut it as soon as I finished tipping and voting.

Awesome! I guess it belongs to some author's trumpet, and he cuts it so skillfully.

The writing technique is verbose and slightly poisonous

Knock Master Lin and Jiang Hong to death. A rich but powerless young man, an ordinary office worker with a good reputation; a crazy native from another world, a morbid (murder, dissection) dreamer in the future world; super powerful and calm-minded. We have the same hobbies - improving our strength (having fun) and embarking on a wonderful journey together (killing people, setting fires, looking for secret objects)

No, buddy, you cut it without saying a word? It's really yours

The bones are so proficient that when cooked, they turn into sauce-flavored pork ribs, so fragrant

The introduction is a stretch, and the setting is also a stretch.

Has the author experienced it personally? Has he reported it to the police station?

I like the plot of the protagonist and Mr. Lin teaming up. After this dungeon ends, will the protagonist meet Mr. Lin again?

The other characters talk too much nonsense and there is no need for it. If it is just for water numbers, then it is purely self-destruction.

There is too much nonsense. Many plots and introductions may be important in the eyes of the author, but are completely unnecessary in the eyes of readers. Except for the first few chapters, I skipped large sections after more than ten chapters. After more than ten chapters, it became a chapter-by-chapter skip.

I asked why it wasn't updated, but I saw it was finished. Sure enough, the things that have been cut off are not the original ones no matter how you reattach them.

Unknown boy has red hair?

This tm is dying again, rnm refunds the money

The author's account has been canceled, how can I still delete comments?

Outrageous. Not only did I cut it off, I also logged out of my account.

The book is finished as soon as it is put on the shelves. It looks very ugly when eaten.

Cut? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Fortunately, I am a hamster and haven't subscribed yet 😅

No matter how hard you meet someone, he will fight to the death, and he will probably fight the younger ones later. This is very discouraging.

That's outrageous🔨🔨🔨

At the end of 2025, you recommended to me novels cut in 2024