The Beginning of the Collapse of the House and the Super Hero Are Among the People

I can't stand reading about Tinder Man. It has been suppressed in the past, and the death of the whistleblower was completely useless. Killing a killer only led to the plot. After the end, there was a reflection; on the other hand, the hot man was crazy about his face, partying and killing people. Before I started playing, I was crazily updating the settings for Black Flame. It was about my parents' past and my record against weirdos. I would only stop playing for a long time after starting to play. The first beating: Like a stabbing, the author directly cheated the hot man - he woke up and was alive. Co-authored: You are not a hot guy, you are a Nika, right? After the victim dies, the protagonist begins to reflect again. The second fight: Nika came back after killing a bunch of people in the hospital. The protagonist was still half-disabled. He stopped while he was still playing and was directly fucked offline. This wave is a tribute to Ichigo. The third fight: Huo Man killed a wave of heroes and came back. During this period, I didn't know how many times I thought about the protagonist's appearance, but the protagonist was still sleeping. After the hero dies, the protagonist finally appears as a monster and promptly stops the villain from illegally infringing on the protagonist's female friends. This is called a differential pattern. It's all because you can't beat him after turning into a human, and you still have to use black flames. I thought you didn't have this skill. I stopped watching after that. I heard that people's heads were robbed😐

The protagonist's thoughts are worthy of his suffering. But on the other hand, the protagonist's level of life depends on the author's ideological cognition. The characterization is okay, there are a lot of psychological descriptions but not too obtrusive, but the Japanese comic style is too heavy. But there is one thing that has not been handled well: the rhythm of the article is monotonous and the aesthetic fatigue. Regardless of whether the emotion is positive or negative, there is an audience for each, but there is only one emotion that is undoubtedly a failure, especially negative-emotional abuse writing. Pure comfort writing/pure abuse writing was eliminated more than ten years ago. Nowadays, even moderately advanced online articles will intersperse humorous jokes or plain/heartwarming daily stories into the main plot, not just for the sake of word count. Come on, the first book is already very good. If you practice more, you will be able to make a living at the starting point.

The protagonist is a traditional superhero, a very rare online protagonist in this era. After reading the latest chapter, I was basically not happy. The writing style does not look like a novice, but it is always suppressed and happy. I don't really understand the idea, but I will not persuade it, otherwise it will be said to interfere with the author's writing. It's quite tiring to watch, I'll take a closer look and hope it feels a little better😅

I couldn't help but feel uncomfortable watching it, and it made people numb. The main character was deflated all the time. I thought the flaming genius was the main character during this part. The protagonist's dagger was a nail clipper like Hawkeye from One Piece. He stopped at 3 seconds and slashed at the back of his arm and then to the chest. The flaming genius didn't even take a long time to be like a normal person, but he was still upgraded. He can heal wounds with flying flames, kills several A-levels and B-levels easily, and still wants to find a woman. The protagonist turns into a weirdo, poses and talks, and slowly tortures him to give him a chance. The flaming genius begs for mercy and waits for time to prepare to run away. There is also a weirdo organization to help him, but a golden fox head comes out? This reminds me of a certain snow leopard. Then you are laying the groundwork in the first ten chapters.

It's good to watch, there are some routines but it can also be said to be a classic. Although the main plot is easy to guess, I followed it unknowingly and watched the latest one. The ability to catch people is good. There are no major shortcomings. The only two things that I am not satisfied with at the moment are that it is a bit forced to be sensational (it is written to be sensational but cannot be sensationalized), and when it occasionally uses funny lines and events, it does not fit well with the context, background and characters, and it feels a bit forced. I feel like the author's writing is not very funny, but the serious and passionate part of the book is pretty good. It may seem suffocating in the online writing field, but the book is actually quite good.

This novel is not suitable for people who want to relax by reading novels. The main theme of the background of the novel is first suppressed and then expanded. However, maybe the author's writing method is that it is not refreshing when it is very depressing. (It is usually very depressing, so fighting will feel good, but at the end of the fight, you can still get your head snatched, so the beating is not in vain)

The author's writing skills are very good. Although the plot is cliché, it is well written. The characters are well created and the emotions are arranged well. But I read online novels to kill time. The trace of violence hidden in the novels made me feel uncomfortable. Life is already depressing enough. Why do I want to make myself unhappy and suffer? 😅

I specially ordered a chapter to complain about it. I just saw Chasing Flames and fell into coma. Did the protagonist fall into coma at every turn? Am I reading an alternative Genshin Impact novel?

If this awkward plot persists within ten chapters, you can get out of my bookshelf 😌😌

When I saw Sha Lieyan all the way, it really made me laugh. The author Wen Qing is sick. He really doesn't treat readers as human beings. 1. The introduction of the villain Lie Yan, which has been foreshadowed for dozens of chapters, even specifically allows the protagonist to bid farewell to female fans, saying that he will expose Lie Yan's true face as Ye Jian, and previously specifically described Lie Yan's habit of recording videos. I thought I was going to lure Lie Yan away and use the time stop to sneak in and steal, but it turned out to be a frontal attack... And I won... The narrator said that Lie Yan was weak because of drinking. So the question is, why does the protagonist know that Lie Yan can drink? The plot that has been foreshadowed is not used at all, and the plot that is not foreshadowed is improvised. 2. The more people die when blocking the flames, the more clownish the protagonist will look when his mentality is shaken by the flames. The character completely collapsed. The protagonist's only concern is his sister, not to mention that her sister is already taken care of. He himself also made a decision before setting off - this is a counter-conquest war that may break his body. Then what is he hesitating about? Being able to kill the killer with a surge of murderous intent involves the brain, but when facing the real murderer's flames, he becomes timid and begins to cherish his own life. Since you care about yourself so much, why would you come to attack Lie Yan? If you really want Lieyan to escape, then let Lieyan explode completely, describing the super specifications of S-class. However, the author chose the worst way to deal with it-making the characters violate the logic of their actions. For a long time, other heroes can fight hard, but you can't. The justice that the protagonist insists on is a pure joke. 3. Lie Yan was able to shake Zhou Yan's mentality with his mouth escape and cursed Jin Hu. Later, when he met Jin Hu, he immediately turned into a clown. He couldn't even think of such words as "Hei Yan, who you once framed, has turned into a monster. He crawled back from hell. I almost died in his hands. Sooner or later, he will take revenge on you. If you want information, you must protect me!" He is also an anti-hero who wants to do whatever he wants. He is portrayed as a sinister and arrogant character who is fierce and vengeful. He just wants to talk to everyone he meets and make the protagonist's information known to the world. As a result, Lie Yan kept silent about the black flame's transformation into a monster under the author's instruction. Maybe it's because it can't handle the development of the story where Jin Hu knows this information in advance, so even the logic of the villain's behavior has to be distorted. I want to write something different, but the plot and characters are completely inconsistent.

This book is indescribably awkward, and the writing cannot be said to be bad. The writing before the protagonist turns into a weirdo is quite good. The plot is quite exciting. The plot begins to collapse when the protagonist comes out of the sea. If I have to evaluate it, I can only describe it as long-winded. The lengthy descriptions and sensationalism of the "protagonist's justice" are really boring.

Author, you have spent more than 40 chapters in the last few chapters to explore the depth. There are too many private things, and it is like being in a circle for self-pleasure. It is better to just click on it and push it down and say a few words to make it more impressive, instead of talking about it in a self-centered way of chatting for a few chapters. You are writing for excitement, but there is actually no content. . .

Author, please remember that depth is not that important. Most people like to have fun with a bit of depth, rather than depth with a bit of fun. This book has the potential to be popular, but it is only a potential.

Is it appropriate to write dozens of chapters about killing a villain and then let him run away and let others kill him? You should simply narrate the story. Even those excellent novels with hundreds or thousands of dollars will not have such ink marks. The first part is clearly well written and the subject matter is also very novel. The later part is getting more and more lengthy. You can completely condense the content and write dozens of chapters.

It's rare to see a Madonna play such a leading role these days.

In fact, the author himself knows that the plot routines he designed are all based on those from 10 years ago. He prefers to write more thoughtfully or more delicately. But when you write this, you must know what your results will be. In today's social background, people's hearts are like this. Whatever path you choose, you are destined to be in which circle, and you will naturally be rewarded accordingly. There's not much to say, I hope you'll subscribe more.

I skipped through and read the latest chapter. I have to say that the author is talented. Maybe comic screenwriters are more suitable for the author's writing style, but other than that, the author's content is a little too arrogant. There is a male protagonist who seems to have free will, but is completely pulled by the environment. A beautiful but completely invisible vase girl in the main plot. The Lord, the villain of Novice Village who appeared out of nowhere and was asked by the author whether to let him live before he died (eventually died inexplicably at the hands of others), the vicious female supporting character whose character is visible at a glance, plus the S-class heroes who inexplicably turned into hidden villains, together they formed the content of the novel that is inexplicably cruel and burning with unclear meaning. The protagonist, an orphan who traveled from the normal world, would not know about superheroes if he did not have the conditions. Anyone who knows about superheroes should know something about the Internet. However, in the text, he suddenly turned into an image who likes to yearn for heroes but does not understand the dangers of society. No, buddy, what were you thinking when you wrote this protagonist? You are writing about a pure human being, not a cybernetic primitive who was fed into superhero books. The heroine, an inexplicable young lady, participated in a human experiment with a very high mortality rate as soon as her brain became hot. The role of the awakening prophecy was to predict that a sports student who played Genshin Impact would participate in the human experiment. During the fight, she didn't even see a ghost. After the fight, she started to reverse the case for the protagonist and improve her own abilities on time? This is really brave and smart, smart and brave. The Golden Fox, a traditional green tea character, can be written to be so annoying, but as a supporting character, she can accurately poke the readers' anger almost every time she appears. I have to say that this is also a manifestation of the author's profound writing skills. S-class heroes, I don't know if the author has read too many anti-hero stories or is a metaphor for something, but anything involving S-class content is bound to be bad. The boss of the Novice Village survived for more than 50 chapters, but in the follow-up, it was said that he had pretended to be the protagonist before, the golden fox was pretending, the machine suddenly rebelled, and the philosophical talk was unclear and suspected of being ruthless. Then let's talk about the plot. The author has his own ideas, and the content is not written for readers to read. In other words, the author writes things to please himself before pleasing readers. This makes some content that originally had some problems become extremely acute. For example, must one or several girls be involved in order for the protagonist to be motivated? Does the heroine have to be so stupid that she looks like she stepped out of a novel to make her appear real? Do you have to make the S-class people either bad or have conspiracies to make the protagonist appear great and upright enough? The boss must be dragging out the content like an unbeatable Xiaoqiang until the readers are bored and want him to leave immediately. But the author is still thinking about whether to take him offline? But fortunately, these problems can be covered up in the author's writing that turns corruption into magic. As long as everyone doesn't think about it, it is an undoubted good book.

Byd, why are you so naughty? It won't be like this later, right?

The writing is quite good, the plot arrangement and the writing are pretty good. There are foreshadowings in the content, and the emotions it arouses make me feel like I used to watch a tokusatsu drama. If I keep this level, I should have good results.

The author seems to be writing about a hero who is actually an idol, or the most popular Internet celebrity. Combat power can be converted into business ability. I thought it was a frame-up like Baihutang offering a knife at the beginning, but it turned out to be rumors and a short essay. MD is amazing. As a person The hero has been active for several years and has saved at least tens of thousands of people. Rumors and injuries have all been denied. Are you fighting the dark forces or arranging a few high-scoring online dramas? Why are you so uninfluential? There is no sense of disobedience at all if you switch to the entertainment channel now. I suggest the author delete the word "Chaoying" in the title.

The writing is really good. Don't listen too much to what is said in the comments. Just follow your own thoughts and rhythm. I don't want this book to become a mindless and unfinished novel. Come on 👍

Purely new books, like my own children. It is very important to follow up on the new book, although the current data of this book is already out of date. I also made plans to get through it, but you always have to have dreams. Tai Sui himself knows that this novel still has many shortcomings, and is willing to accept various opinions from readers.

I can only say that you are okay with the various opinions and feedback put forward by a large number of readers, but you have always been tough and refuting, which is indeed worthy of this achievement. What makes me surprised is that you are surprised by this. In addition, there is a person in the comment area who is always criticizing others. He will criticize everything others say, and will let others shoot him at every turn. I thought the author didn't care about grades and was just here to experience life. Is he afraid that the author's income is too high? If it weren't for the deacon, I would have thought it was a black man. It's quite abstract, but don't say I'm not qualified. I paid to subscribe anyway. If you don't like this comment, you can delete it. Don't try to bully me😅

I also regret not reading the comments. I was so upset after reading this book, so upset, so upset.

There are definitely people who like to watch this type of genre, but the audience is small. You might as well just write it as turning into a weirdo and then turning black, destroying all extraordinary things, and just recreate the black robe. It will definitely be more popular than it is now.

It's beautiful, and it captures the hero I imagined. Be it the protagonist or the villain.

I'm just reading the first ten chapters💩. I can see this book and after reading ten chapters, I can say that I'm a shit-eating king. I'll check to see if there are any changes in the subsequent plot and follow up with comments.

Watching it for the second time, although it's 💩, I really want to know what the ending is.

It is relatively cool, and there are many shortcomings, but the author still wants to persevere. The first major event in the novel has many shortcomings, and some chapters may be slightly revised when there is time. We welcome readers' specific and effective opinions. In addition, readers who are interested in the direction of the plot can also participate in the discussion [Copy the book review, that's not true] The settings of some supporting characters can also be placed here, and the author will adopt them if they are feasible. Because there are still many characters appearing on the stage. Then it's about the main plot line. In fact, there are many lines in the direction of the plot at the end of the first major event Line A is a complete weirdo, an anti-heroic road to the weird society. Line B is half human and half monster, but the identity of Black Flame Will is exposed and Lie Yan identifies him as a participant in murdering the audience. Black Flame Will is completely reduced to a super criminal. Line C: Transform into a monster, be captured by the flames, and be sent to a shelter later Line D: Learn to be human and reverse the transformation into a monster. That is the main line chosen by the author in the end. Because there are no other readers' opinions, and because I am really unhappy with the writing at the beginning of this book, the first three development lines may be darker, so I chose line D However, this line does not mean that the protagonist is in the lawful camp. Everything is possible.

Is S level a strength level or a title? In terms of strength, there are only about ten of them. Now two are dead and one is useless. The two are preparing to cause trouble and the progress is too fast. Dragon Fist was suppressed and then broke through and returned to S, but it was said that there were a lot of A-levels waiting to grab the position. Very incomprehensible.