Planeswalkers: from Hogwarts to High

Seeing Howl's Moving Castle, the protagonist is too ridiculous, too arrogant, too arrogant, thinking that he has a system and can do whatever he wants. The contract is signed as soon as it is signed, and the gods meet as soon as they are asked. The reason is that it will be released when they return, exposing their true soul, body, blood and all concepts to the eyes of another great being. The great being or the gods can see everything at a glance. They grabbed the protagonist and refined it instantly. I really wanted to abandon the book when I read it. I was really angry The protagonist faced a great being who knew nothing about anything. He didn't know whether his thinking would be distorted. He didn't know whether he could see the future or the present. He didn't even know the true name of the great being. He could only Calling them gods, I don't know where they got the confidence to do the deal. I don't know, people as powerful as planeswalkers + systems are being hunted and self-destructed. As long as the great existence is an external god outside the world that draws the power of the world, or a true god of this world who can induce and imprison the mind so that it cannot issue a return command, how can it escape from the world with only a system with a repair rate of only 15%? The main character is really stupid and arrogant, I'm really angry

I don't know what I'm writing next, but the protagonist's bloodline has awakened, and he can blow up his nose three times, five times, and two times, and he's still playing house in school and becoming a hero.

The subject matter is interesting, but I don't know if the author can persist in writing the book until it is finished.

I was attracted to the planeswalker, but the protagonist is too stupid. One of the most buggy abilities of the planeswalker is to print cards. Everything can be printed, and it turned out to be a garbage system that collects energy to draw cards. To be honest, if you give me a spark, I can have the ability of an adult wizard during a vacation, and become the same level as Snape in a year or two. If I have a spark and follow the same path as other young wizards, what's the point?

The nanny story, the protagonist is the same with or without him, it's a waste of my time

Author, no website steals your book

I glanced at the catalog and the comment section and concluded that I was attracted to the Planeswalkers because I was trying to sell them. But it turned out that the review was over 100,000 words long and it was still some kind of mutated spark (weakened by a big chop). I just wrote about it as a fan of Harry. The Planeswalker brand does not suppress the war and I don't know how to write...

At first I thought it was food, but in the end, I was still poisoned. At first, I said that the protagonist planned to stay in the badger courtyard. At most, he showed a bit of genius and it didn't fit into the plot. But then, just a few days after entering school, when everyone else couldn't cast the floating spell well, he directly cast the spell silently and without a wand. Is this a bit of genius? Is this low-key? Voldemort had never been so high-profile when he was a child. Also, he singled out a group of snakes and held out his wand. Didn't he think he was conspicuous enough? Also, as I said, I don't want to get involved in the plot. Good guy, I just went over and cut the giant monster into pieces, and let everyone know that I was so flamboyant and low-key at the same time. What's the difference between what I was doing and shitting in the square? I can't bear the smell of Long Aotian. Whoever wants to see it will see it. Let's go.

Small details are not enough. First, the original protagonist is an ordinary person who is only eleven years old after being reincarnated. How did he have the confidence to pretend to deceive wizards who have lived for tens or hundreds of years, and pretend to be a person who knows nothing? The protagonist's eyes will be brighter than usual when he draws a lottery... The book package contains twenty kilograms of gold bars and a bundle of pounds, which is also speechless. The appearance of the book package is different, not to mention the sound of rubbing when walking. He said to be careful at the beginning, but he did something like this later.

It feels a bit weird. In the fairy tale world of Harry Potter, if you know the plot, you are very safe inside the school. As a planeswalker, the protagonist only needs to learn magic, potions, collect cards, and magical animals to participate in the plot appropriately. It's like something is chasing the protagonist and has to force him to become stronger. It feels weird when watching it.

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Simply create a general image of the protagonist

I joined Hufflepuff to be low-key, and then I did all the high-profile things. What a contradiction. More than 30 people from Slytherin besieged a first-year student, and even if they lost, they thought like a fool that the protagonist would be punished. Slytherin is characterized by ambition, shrewdness, and not a fool. Why are there more than 30 people besieging the protagonist? Forced wisdom.

Turn Hogwarts and Jungle into land cards 🙂

The author's writing is too rough, and there are many small flaws in it, but he still doesn't correct them.

It's quite boring. It's a bit like the brainless cool article from many years ago, except for the stallion part.

Don't have a female protagonist. The planeswalker is a wise man and don't write it as Teddy.

It focuses on a person with a split personality, right? He says he doesn't want to participate in the plan but actively participates in the plot. He keeps a low profile and is the enemy of the whole world.

Well, the food is tasteless, run away, the first chapter will be shown to people🤮,,, run away

I really can't stand it after reading Chapter 8. Your protagonist needs to keep a low profile and disguise himself, so you just put everything in your own storage space! ! ! ! ! ! Get an empty box! Get an empty backpack! The weight and state of carrying things are different! Do you have to set up a bunch of bugs for yourself and then the plot characters can't find out that you can give the characters wisdom? ? ? ?

I originally wanted to say that there was something wrong with the protagonist's family background, because it was impossible to have a family in the Soviet Union where the grandfather lived in the Soviet Union and the grandson lived in the UK and had a butler. Then I thought about it a few years before the disintegration, then it would be no problem. The protagonist's grandfather is the predecessor of the Russian oligarch, an existence called the evil dragon who took a bite out of the wealth created by the Soviet people over the decades after the collapse of the Soviet Union. After all, it has assets and a butler in the UK before it is disbanded. But how could such a person be targeted by the KGB? Or maybe the protagonist's father is Compaore of the Soviet Union?

Harry Potter, original martial arts, cyberpunk, what does the author think? Being able to write these three worlds into one book.

A good start, then diarrhea throughout the whole process Suspected to be a studio put together by multiple people

Moreover, he has some bad views. He ignores Harry's weakness and thinks that Harry cannot be of help to him, so he decisively distances himself from him and then maliciously teases him (even directly hitting the pain point of Harry's heart). This approach is not only cold-blooded, but also morally corrupt, and it is very discouraging.

The subject matter is good, but the author is not good. He wants to write in a very high-level way, but the writing is too awkward and makes other people look too stupid. He wants to imitate the writing methods of great masters, but his own foundation is not good, and the writing is completely different.

Come on, author, you have ideas, perseverance, and room for improvement. Give this book an ending. I have had some fun with this one, haha, and I have accumulated a lot of experience. The next book will be better, but don't give up writing a book😂

To be honest, it feels like it was written by a studio