We're Reborn, Who Still Doesn't Know a Few Shortcuts?

Why don't you update your old book?

Another abandoned book? You're really something, both of your books flopped.

It's strange, the writing feels quite smooth, but there are too many people in this genre, resulting in insufficient exposure and poor initial performance. It's hard to persuade the author to persevere. I can only say that the satisfying moment comes a little later, and some impatient readers might give up. All I can say is that I'll give you my monthly pass and wish you good luck. Because I listen to audiobooks, I rarely comment, but I hope the author sees this.

The male protagonist, Luo Feng, is reborn, and the first thing he does is lead his best brothers to tear apart the scheming woman. His series of actions are so skillful that they leave readers speechless! The plot is full of exciting moments, and coupled with the author's smooth and vivid writing style, this rebirth novel has truly raised my expectations to the max. I can't wait to see what happens next!

The order of the opening paragraphs is incorrect, making it feel very disorganized.