Dragon Raja: Who Is My Master? The Geo Archon!
龙族：家师何人？岩王帝君！
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 546k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- English
- Request a translation
Synopsis
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258Chapters
715Recommendations
7.9kFans
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Hilarious! Vision Bell leaves his shield, and Lu Mingfei is there tanking the attacks while grinding down King Bai's health bar.
Overall, it's alright. There aren't any major flaws, but nothing particularly outstanding either. However, for a Dragon Raja fanfiction, the biggest highlight is the lack of flaws, so I hope you maintain that. At the same time, I feel the daily life descriptions could be richer; they're a bit thin.
"On April 24th, I went to Tokyo Skytree with Sakura. The warmest place in the world is at the top of the Skytree." "On April 26th, I went to Meiji Shrine with Sakura. There was a wedding being held there." "On April 25th, I went to Disneyland with Sakura. The haunted house was scary, but it wasn't scary because Sakura was there." "Sakura is the best."
There's no time to mourn the past; a new Lu Mingfei has already joined the battlefield!
I looked around and couldn't figure out who the main character was for a moment. I thought it was Zhong Li, but after looking a little further, oh. Zhong Li is here to be a nanny; the main character is still Lu Mingfei.
Here are a few simple suggestions: First, the plot is rather bland and unlikely to engage readers. Second, while Zhongli might say "from a generally rational perspective," you shouldn't repeat that every two chapters; it feels too contrived and overly frequent.
A harem?
The guy next door has already completed the full set of illustrations, plus a gender-swapped version of himself 😎
Sorry, I have to go now.
This is utterly unreasonable! Letting two dragon kings go so blatantly is unacceptable. They can't be allowed to remain and risk running into Lu Ming. How can they suppress those who want the dragon bones, especially Angers? Will he compromise? Those are two dragon kings!
Your work... Has no major flaws, but it has absolutely no redeeming qualities either. Seven chapters in, and it's getting increasingly boring. I'd rather it started strong but ended weak, failing to attract readers. —Author Sang
I still have to go to the Kassel school, whether for a greater cause or for personal grudges, I'll just be used to slay the dragon. It's a dead end.