Cultivation of Immortality Is of Course More About Choice Than Hard Work

I can't stand it when my younger sister is a true legend and my brother is a handyman. I wonder if a pet like this core true legend has a higher status than most people in the sect, right? Do you want to have a soft meal, but also want the protagonist to upgrade from the bottom? Then you can't write that Ning Qi'an and Mo Yu got separated for some reason before the Immortal Sect came, and Ning Qi'an was taken away by the Immortal Sect. Mo Yu followed the clues and joined the sect by chance, and finally met the heroine after crawling around at the bottom?

A little girl who is seriously ill, Choice one: spend all the money on her treatment, the consequences: being targeted and beaten to death. Choice 2: Act as if you didn't see it, consequence: keep your wallet, and your cultivation level will increase significantly in ten days. Meet the white fox that has been trapped in a trap Choice 1: Save the white fox, the consequences: ten years later, the white fox will drain the essence

🤔I feel like the male protagonist's upgrade speed is a bit slow after getting the top spiritual root, and then the moon girl masters the golden elixir.

1. I can understand that the author wants to show your grand world view and the fierceness of the battle. There are many forehands and backhands, but your writing is like constipation. Write a little here and a little there, and write a little in this time period and a little in that time period. What do you think? 2. Just use the right amount of jokes, don't do it so deliberately, it will be a drama. 3. The protagonist can see the malice in others' eyes, but cannot see Ning's love. Even if the protagonist can't see it, why do you want me as a reader to see it? Take off your pants and fart.

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Damn it, really c I really can't see a refreshing novel now Most of the novels on the monthly ticket list always give me the feeling that I have read it, it feels like a book has been written many times A routine, a template, but it can be on the list There is an old saying, it is impossible to always be a primary school student, but there will always be primary school students It is always boring to write novels with formulas, which makes people only read I feel like vomiting Like a greasy pork chop, it tastes just a little bit the first time, a bit greasy the second time, and makes me want to vomit the third time This is why old bookworms like to read daily introductions and new books On the contrary, they don't like to read that kind of food. Platinum author I had the same feeling when I read Suicune's books before, but every subsequent book was written like this, and the amount was large and filling, which made people happy But in the end, it fell into a formula In short, this book is good and interesting! ! ! !

Why the hell are you saying I won't update the chapters I just bought today? Get your money back! ! ! ! ! !

Several of the books I've been reading these past few days have suddenly ended. Is everyone preparing to do something great in 2025? Well, I wish you happiness.

When you first described the manifestation, you didn't describe it in a feminine way, making it look like an old man. When Luo Yao came out, you said it was a more feminine spirit. It was too dramatic.

Why are there three men in the character list? GAY text?

I would like to ask if the protagonist doesn't create his own skills, and many of his powers are great ways. I feel that the protagonist relies entirely on skills and cannot realize by himself. If he only relies on golden fingers, the protagonist does not have his own insights. He relies on various skills in the middle. I feel that the protagonist is just walking on the path of others, and he will also be the resource of others when he grows up.

The author's setting is very comprehensive, which is much better than many short stories with illogical logic, and the writing style is not bad. However, due to the lack of updates, the author does not grasp the rhythm very well, and always delays where he should speed up. For example, when killing Meng Dingsheng, he insisted on dragging on for several chapters. I think two chapters at most will be enough.

The more you look at it, the more it becomes more and more detailed, full of elementary school students' slapstick, and the author seems to have no outline.

It's a rare good book. It's a pity. I wish the author can do well in the exam.

In the latest chapter, I guess if the next chapter has a twist or not, it won't be good.

Alas, the male protagonist was not well developed and felt like Goldfinger's puppet. It was boring to read and a pity to discard.

The pace is too slow. I'll read it again after I've accumulated hundreds of chapters. I started stocking up just one step away from forming the elixir. I accumulated fifteen chapters, thinking that I would be able to form the elixir within five chapters. But in the end, it felt like I was even further away from forming the elixir.

Such a boring plot, even after four or five days of drinking water, I'm done with it

I think it's still very interesting, please give it a try, author

Your self-created killing move is too awkward, so you added two special effects of drawing the sword, but the swordsmanship is not of the swordsman style. Is the domineering style of swordsmanship paired with the White Tiger Killing Way like this?

Is this a group portrait? Three protagonists?

It was poisoned to death. At the beginning, my sister took it seriously, and the protagonist worked as a handyman. Later, he absorbed the spiritual roots into ethereal spiritual roots. It was awesome. In the end, no one wanted it, and he was still a handyman 🙂

I saw that this novel of yours had never entered the house three times. I really ran out of books to read. I was at a loss, so I opened your book and took a look. After taking a look, I knew that I was not wrong. Can't you think about it? I just don't understand, why can't you write Goldfinger? The top-level adventure ended up making you join a sect and become a handyman? Let's not talk about how abstract it is to write a sister like you who goes to heaven and the protagonist runs on the ground. Why don't you write your script first and then write it? You haven't figured out the logic yet.

If you really don't know how to write a novel, then don't write it. You just made your golden finger extremely big. I tell you, no one will scold you. It's better than this situation. What's the point of copying a template? Don't use the word "writer" anymore.