Lu Mingfei: Your Name

Good guy, Eliyi used Lu Mingfei's body to throw her aunt over the shoulder.

You are worried about your own defense, your own anger, your own sorrow, Zhao Menghua's confession has nothing to do with you, Chen Wenwen and him are in love, and you are sad again.

I just saw a similar idea a few days ago, it's great, I can finally see it 🙂🙂🙂 We see how lucky Dragon Clan fans are, we can see everything (

It's even more useless than the original work.

Why can Lu Mingfei be such a loser? You are already in Eli Yi's body, and you are being chased all the way with a trial? In the first few chapters, the anger was burning. After the anger burned something, Zhao Menghua began to suppress it, first suppress it, then suppress it, and then suppress it, right?

In the original work, Zhao Menghua was an arrogant retard, and the Zhao Menghua here is even more of a sb with a shrunken cerebellum. Every time she appears on the stage, it makes life worse than death, because then you have to listen to his retarded speech and his amazing wisdom.

It looked good at the beginning, but it changed at the beginning of Chapter 40. It felt like the plot turned into a painful literature as soon as it started, Guo Jingming? Moreover, Chu Zihang's background supplement was also a bit wrong. Is this still the Dragon Clan?

Hehe, it's well written, I like it very much. I feel that the author posted on the wrong platform and should not have posted at the starting point. Pain literature was criticized badly at the beginning, especially from the perspective of the male protagonist.

I usually read books, even online articles, quite carefully. But I can't stand any of the supporting characters in this book. The appearance is inexplicable, and the communication is also inexplicable. Considering the amount of supporting characters in the latest part, the number of words should be at least doubled and the writing should be spread out. Take Ryuzo as an example. Among all the families, first Tachibana Masamune, Minamoto Chisei and Eriki appeared to focus on descriptions, and then held a meeting to point out the existence of the other five families. Then it is divided into two parts. One part is an internal meeting of the family, with a small amount of communication between the parents, and the main character is quickly shaped by "letting the characters express their opinions"; the other part is the protagonist group and Angers interacting individually with different parents in different locations, where they fill in their life background. Finally, the actions of parents are mixed in between each major event, as a side foil. How many supporting characters are created in a whole book of Jiangnan? The author wanted to write about two families in just tens of thousands of words, which is a bit too ambitious and too short-handed.

This book is both qualified in terms of writing style and creativity. It may have some flaws, but the flaws cannot be concealed. I don't know why I always see people finding faults, and even some questions are incomprehensible and have explanations in the next sentence. He insists on asking them in this sentence, even with a gun and a stick. This is a light novel, not a children's picture book. Every sentence will be told to you in context. Think about it before typing. Put it into the background of the story to see if there are any problems and whether it makes sense. If the above is offensive, please forgive me. This book really feels like the author is writing it seriously, so please be merciful.