Behemoth Universe, Starting from Kong Skull Island

Even if I say it's a cool article, he's not happy about it. If I say it's not a cool article, he's completely brainless. My evaluation is just a piece of shit.

Brother, what kind of AI do you use to write? Can you teach me? I also want to make fool's money.

I saw dozens of them. Really... If the theme of this book were not giant beasts, it would definitely be very, very miserable. It doesn't matter if the writing is not good, the plot settings are really impressive. A dragon is like a python. Let's not talk about the abilities of giant beasts in those science fiction works. You just don't have any basic abilities as an animal? The first one at the beginning is that the snake's vision is very poor, and it relies on its sense of taste to distinguish directions and animals, etc. Second, the ability setting is too stretched. A dignified dragon has no abilities at all, just a battery function. If the electric eel evolves to your size, it can beat the protagonist. If you don't have dragon abilities, don't rely on dragons, okay? The more you look at it, the more uncomfortable it becomes. The third one is the evolutionary ratio. You will have to live or die if you evolve into a dragon. I can't imagine how difficult it will be for you to evolve in the later stage? Eating everything in the inner earth is not enough for the protagonist to become a dragon? Generally speaking, the writing and plot settings are overwhelming. If you abandon the behemoth trend in this book, you will have to rush to death. I rarely give people bad reviews. Most of them are because I can't bear to delete my books. Your book is one of the rare times I have written a review about it.

Well, a little suggestion. The protagonist is 85 meters long, which is a bit larger than a water tank. It is too thin, really too thin. Think about a python. If it is eight meters long, what is the diameter of its thickest part? I looked at the information and found that the 14-meter-long Titanoboa could reach about one meter at the beginning.

To be honest, after seeing the author's idea, I suddenly wanted to write a story about the evolution of the golden-horned giant beast larvae through the universe of Godzilla 😁😁

Why do they all worship foreign things? At 100 meters, I said I couldn't beat Godzilla, at 200 meters, I still said I couldn't beat Godzilla, at 300 meters, I still couldn't beat Godzilla, at 400 meters, I still couldn't beat Godzilla, and at 500 meters, I still couldn't beat Godzilla. After developing thunder and lightning, the protagonist still cannot beat Godzilla. If Godzilla eats 20 times the amount, the protagonist will have to increase the amount 15 times. The protagonist only dares to cause trouble with us in his childhood. They don't even dare to go to America to cause trouble. I was speechless looking at it

Living in Banghu, I thought this was a normal novel, but it turned out to be a brainless novel. I saw the protagonist 3.7 Meters long snake fucked a group of rats. They were still larger rats, especially the rat king, whose body was more than one meter long "not including the tail". The protagonist did not want to do anything but fucked it. . . How reckless. I thought the protagonist had some idea at the time, but you came up with a 3.7-Meter snake that burst out with the breath of a wild beast to control a group of rats? The following is even more outrageous. . The 3.7-Meter snake swung the King Rat, which was over one meter not counting its tail, more than ten meters away. An ordinary mouse would die if it hit it. . . This is just QJ's knowledge. You really have no idea about weight. . . It is unknown whether the protagonist weighs 20 kilograms. How did he manage to throw the Rat King so far away? Can't you write one or two meters? In order to prevent me from smearing the author, I also checked it out. The 1.2 Mickey mouse weighs about ten kilograms including the head and tail. If the body alone is more than one meter long, it will be heavier In the end, the protagonist killed 97 mice. . . You must know that the mice written by the author are large and small, with the larger ones weighing more than ten pounds. . What the hell. . . I can't complain. With this size, I can rush into a group of large rats and kill them, really. . You broke my perception that two fists are difficult to defeat with four hands. The same applies to the protagonist. . . Your protagonist does not have a 360-degree perspective, and the rats will not die one by one. You flick your tail and kill more than a dozen rats, and then the rats become cowardly. . . Does the author write a book without reading any information? To be honest, just this size difference is quite outrageous.

If you can't write an Eastern dragon, just write a Western dragon. If you make something that looks different, it's like a four-legged snake.

Author, you think the word count is fine, but how many times have you said it, don't write such detailed data if you don't have common sense, it's disgusting! There is also the fact that Godzilla has his own nuclear regeneration in his body. You are already a dragon. Which Titan monster wants to go to a nuclear power plant to absorb electricity! ? At most, you'd be hungry to eat a nuclear bomb. The electromagnetic storm outside Skull Island has unlimited current and electromagnetic power that is not enough for you! ? In other words, you are the only one who writes about Behemoth Universe, otherwise no one will read it.

I was really confused when I saw the latest pictures. What did the author think? The Titan beast does not generate energy by itself, but only absorbs it.

You can read the novel, but the author really has no common sense. A snake is not poisonous and has no power to attack. Isn't it nonsense to compare its length with other titans? It is impossible for a snake that is one meter long to beat a cat that is half a meter long, or even a cat that is five meters long. If a snake is not poisonous, it is a waste. It is impossible for a snake that is 100 meters long to beat a handsome guy that is fifty meters tall. , If you don't add some special abilities, or add a huge strength talent to the extraordinary body, it will feel inconsistent from beginning to end. Snakes are not poisonous, they are just useless creatures. Even those five-meter giant pythons have no ability to hunt a wolf or a monkey.

To be honest, the Chinese dragon can only be used as a totem. I really can't imagine how to fight in close combat. However, in all novels, the Chinese dragon is physically strong and good at close combat.

Just slowly increase your level of evolution here by one or two percent. Goodbye👋🏻

I hope to evolve in the direction of Tiamat, of course I'm talking about appearance.

He is already a dragon, but he still can't fly. Alas, he can soar into the clouds and ride on the mist, drive away thunder and create lightning, that's how powerful he is! You, at best, can be called a python dragon!

No, man. Don't you need to learn about biological basics when writing about exotic beasts? All based on imagination? Does length represent volume? Food won't rot if you kill it? And the tiger's body becomes weak when the opponent is shocked? I've never seen any animal sit still and wait to die.

Write the male protagonist as a dragon, and don't give him skills or small spells. Just write it as a titan python.

Water... Chelulu talked back and forth... Water over and over again...

It's awesome to have a collection of 20,000 pieces that can be considered a high-quality product! There are so many people criticizing the key comments. How did you do this?

The tail of a rat is slightly shorter than its body. Not counting the 1-meter-long giant rat, the tail is about 1.8 Meters long. Judging from the fights between snakes and rats I saw when I lived in the mountains, snakes are no more than four or five times longer than rats and are no match for rats. Rats often eat snakes, and rats are as good at catching snakes as African flatheads. You are a 3.7-Meter snake, but when you see a 1.8-Meter giant rat, you can't help but tremble all over and run faster than a rabbit. Do you still dare to rush forward? I'm afraid I'm going to deliver takeout! ! Unless the snake uses magic.

Making fool's money🥱🥱

What I want to say is, there are three books serialized, how come they are either written by AI or written by others?

It's unfinished. From chapter 200 onwards, it's an upgrade to the monster-fighting style. It's a pity that this subject matter

White Dragon

I feel pretty good. Why do so many people say it was written by AI?

Dragon

No, how could I finish this book if I kept it up... I thought it was about astronomy, starting from the universe of monsters, and ending with the system of Mythical Classics of Mountains and Seas, so I would have to write 800 chapters anyway.

Use precious land to enjoy "The Chronicles of Ghidorah"

I've already voted for you every month, why don't you hurry up and get better?

Western monsters in Eastern skins