The Steam Age: I Ascend to Godhood Through Corruption

Either give it a golden finger. After reading twenty chapters, the protagonist is like being slipped away. There is no progress at all. One person can step on two feet.

The setting in this category can be considered very careful, and the plot can also feel clearly studied and designed, but the problems are also obvious: 1. The protagonist's characterization is messy, and the psychological description is scattered. If you want to create a three-dimensional character, you must use a lot of pen and ink to stack it, or focus on psychological activities in some chapters or use a coherent plot to highlight it. The author gives people a feeling that he wants both, but does not do any of them well. 2 The whole book is clearly in the third person, but it follows the perspective of the protagonist throughout and does not give anything beyond the perspective. The advantage of the third person is not used at all. Many plots are taken for granted without explaining the specific circumstances and the logic behind them. For example, the whole world knows about the protagonist, but every time a part of the truth is revealed, there is no foreshadowing and no explanation of the matter. 3 The climax is completely boring. The reason is not only a little problem with the writing power, but too little foreshadowing. , Your previous plots have not served your climax, so even the climax is very boring 4 The secondary characters are given little writing, and the plot is only given when they are getting along with the protagonist. It is still the same problem. The advantage of the third person is that it can cut out the perspective and give the reader information only from God's perspective, but you did not use it when shaping the supporting characters I can see this so far, I hope the author can work hard, I personally feel that this book is among the best in related themes.

Author, I want to ask a question. After the protagonist was tricked out, Dany had already started stabbing the protagonist with a knife. Although she didn't stab the protagonist, the protagonist was not cruel to Dany? Are you starting to care about each other? Logic? Novels require logic

To mediocre people, we are mysterious and unpredictable. Fallen. Decay. It's chilling. You cannot understand where we came from or why we are what we are... Until you realize that we have not fallen, but have ascended. "

The strange wind blew in front of me again, collect, collect

To be honest, it's okay but not as good as I imagined. It's a bit weak and indecisive for me.

The unfinished parts of this book will be filled in in the new book. In addition, if you are interested, you can check out the content related to the Seabird Project on Tomatoes, which is an interlude of this book.

I have read a few of them and they are okay, but they are a little lacking. Please give me a monthly ticket to support them.

After reading three of them, I feel quite immersed in it. When did the author update it? I'll catch up on the third update, but 200 chapters is still a bit too little.

The concept is quite clever, and the character creation is also good. Thank you to the author.