From Destitute Scholar to Immortal of the Martial Path

A new book has been opened. It has weird folk customs and the theme of cultivating immortals. Can you please support it~

The writing is relatively smooth, and the plot doesn't have any bad points, but the plot rhythm is too tight. From the protagonist's time travel to Chapter 31, there is not even 3 days. It seems too tiring. The best way to relax is to relax! The protagonist's cheating restrictions are too great. If you open a cheat, most of your life will be lost, and you will die soon. Then the plot will force the protagonist to kill demons and destroy ghosts to extend his life. It seems that the fun of pretending is gone, and the protagonist becomes a donkey hung by his lifespan.

Come on, write. Save it for later. I'll read it later 🌹🌹

Hmm... Huh?

The bitter and bitter beginning made me feel uncomfortable.

The person who was invited to the throne from the Pope left a paw print.

The Shen brothers only settled the merits of the boss, and the protagonist turned a blind eye. I got drunk on the way to the interview for 2 chapters.

The plot arrangement is too tight. There is really no need to start with a bitter hatred. Just forget about arranging time travel and arrange family members, but in the end they die and disappear? There are many things that can be redeemed later, and explaining each one is not very good.

The beginning and the plot of killing the pig demon in the county government have been changed to make it more exciting and compact. If you are interested, you can watch it again, but it will not affect the subsequent plot.