I Never Came to Compete for the Throne

After reading all the chapters so far, it feels a bit interesting. I think there are two points I still want to say. 1. The protagonist team travels as a group. In the beginning, the story is about rescuing people, exploring the world, and even finding teammates. All the plots happened within a few days. The plot is relatively compact, which I think is okay, but one thing is that I think the time progress of the plot development still needs to be grasped. The early plot is understandable, but the later plot is still the same as the early one. I don't know how many words are needed to develop to the later stage. If the author has an outline, ignore this point. 2. Since we are traveling with the game, we can briefly introduce the characteristics of the game played by the protagonist group, what is the level and strength of the players, what abilities and strengths the protagonist group currently retains when traveling to other worlds, what is the position of each member of the protagonist group in the union, and what is the position of each member of the protagonist group in the union? What is the character? How different is the level of the equipment carried after time travel compared to the other world? Although the protagonist group's fighting, spells, and treasure props confrontation have different realms, which often results in a crushing game, but sometimes it is still difficult to reflect what the protagonist group relies on to achieve a crushing game by relying on one realm division alone. This is just my fragmentary thought. I am too bored at work, so I can just talk about it if I feel it. Many things are too vague in the book, and the sense of substitution in the plot will be weak. Occasionally, I even feel a little unable to substitute or understand. After all, the plot has just begun, maybe the author wants to reveal it slowly. The world view is huge, there are many forces, and there are many protagonists. This is a great test of the author's writing skills. I look forward to the later content.

Bros, please help me. It's time to start operations. Thank you bros.

To be honest, the writing is really great and the style is very good. If you keep it up, your grades will not be bad. A blind guess, the twelve missing people have woken up and gone out in the past, the world has been affected by them

Brothers, please give me more opinions😫

I'm a newbie and don't know anything. I'd like to ask you all for your favorites, favorites, and recommendations to help me enter the signing stage as soon as possible. I will definitely transform into a Code Parlu and live up to everyone's expectations. Please! Help the kids! (Hold my head and cry)

Why haven't anyone from the guild joined yet? I feel like what I'm most looking forward to is the talent in what position who will wake up next.

Should I say it or not? You really dragged on this battle for a long time. The article is too long.

The subject matter is quite good, and the writing style is also good, but if you don't save the manuscript, don't hesitate. By the time it's published, there won't be many people around. See for yourself, even if you delete the last 8 or so chapters, it won't affect you. Your enthusiasm will be extinguished directly.

It feels like watching a 3D game, it's okay, it looks good

I can't finish writing it, I'll finish it and send it out tomorrow. I'm so sorry!