Jiajing, He Became an Immortal!

Watching Jiajing become an immortal, what kind of fictional history did it turn out to be, hundreds of years later?

The writing of the first battle was outrageous, and if this was a burst of around 1 million words, I would say it was well written. But when you write your first extraordinary battle, you haven't even laid out the world view, and you start to change the perspective and add this passionate chuuni style. The reader doesn't even understand what's going on with the protagonist's golden finger, so you switch to the second perspective. That's a movie technique, because the audience can feel it visually.

I read it in one sitting, it was very well written. You just put it in the wrong category. You should put it in the category of urban supernatural powers or light novels. There are many people who like to read this type of writing.

Jiajing became an immortal. The Ming Empire lasted for hundreds of years. There are also some modern items. Everyone here can become an immortal, but the path is different. The subject matter is still acceptable. I have seen the update of the second volume and I feel it is written well. You can go and take a look.

After all the teammates have been defeated and defeated, and then the protagonist makes a comeback, this routine should be used on the big BOSS, not on the small Lao Luo. On the first mission of the freshman year, one teammate escaped and three teammates were disabled. The protagonist closed his eyes there. It felt unreasonable. Please don't delete the comment. It's unnecessary.

I'm a high school student, and I'm ranked 55th on the fan list with all my reservations. Will I be unable to persevere with such a small income?

The author's writing is very good, and it is definitely worth reading and subscribing. Recommend a book: Mental Patients Have More Happiness "Old Man in Time Travels to Scavenge and Survive by Making Bad Movies"

When you gave this name, I thought it was Jiajing, but when I clicked on it, I found that there was no Jiajing.

I thought Daowen's Sky-Mending Technique could turn back time just like the Sky-Mending Technique in the Perfect World It's quite interesting, but the plot skipped too much. Has the author awakened the Crimson King?

It's really uncomfortable to read this in paragraphs. It can be written in one paragraph, but it has to be divided into more than ten paragraphs. It's disgusting to watch.

It's incoherent. Is it deleted or the author didn't write it clearly? There are often inconsistencies between the previous one and the next one. It feels like a lot of plot is missing and a lot of pitfalls were buried in the early stage. However, when charging started, there was no one to fill in the pits in the early stage and the pitfalls continued to be buried. Interesting? There are so many paths that I have to write about monkeys, but I don't quite understand it. Obviously there is a celestial eye and a way to mend the sky, but I have to take the most rubbish path of five-color stones. What is a monkey in mythology? It's just fun for the big shot. Moreover, writing about some women is really nonsensical. Inexplicably, they appear one after another, and they inexplicably like the protagonist. What the hell are you capable of? I haven't read it since then. The writing is really messy. The road is written in a messy way.

Who is the big girl mentioned in the article?

In the article, when killing King Rong, the fire in the heart will give Tao Wen, Kung Fu and merit, but why only merit will be given when killing other people afterwards.

It's not like I'm criticizing it, I just think the character arrangement is unreasonable.

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The author's setting is similar to a life simulator, but it doesn't feel easy to write.

In the Hong Kong comic, Zhu Yuanzhang is the leader of the Ming Cult. In the world view of the Hong Kong comic, the mortals who practice martial arts are essentially martial arts cultivators, but most of them have not even reached the threshold. The main character Zhu Yuanzhang in the sixth part of "Legend of the Emperor" learns "Mingshen Martial Arts" which is also very interesting. It is one of the top martial arts for mortals. However, people with innate yin and yang qi or pure yang and pure yin constitution can practice faster and stronger 😰. This setting is almost the same as the real immortal cultivation method. I wonder if the protagonist in this book📚 will be similar. Hong Kong comics "Legend of the Son of Heaven", "Heroes of the Spring and Autumn Period", "Dragon and Tiger Gate", and "The Mysterious Weapon (Nangong Wentian)" are all the same world view, just in different time periods 😁

This Ming Dynasty has been ruined by you. Did you write it? The style is similar.

Can the protagonist arrange to learn the techniques of real immortals (or can Jiajing, who became an immortal in this book📚, learn the techniques of immortals?) I read that there is a villain in the Hong Kong comic "Spring and Autumn Warriors" who practiced the techniques of the Jade Emperor (Supreme Great Luotian) and the martial arts of the Heavenly Emperor. A mortal who had been cultivating for decades hung up Houyi Xuannv and a group of immortals and beat him up. It was so terrifying. Or Nuwa's "Huntian Baojian", Guangchengzi Xuanyuan Huangdi's "Innate Universe Gong"... There are also the eight magical skills in one person and the eight Taoist magic spells, which are very practical and powerful😎