Emperor Xihuang

The name Fuxi is useless. It doesn't convey the spirit of Fuxi at all.

No wonder I'm still at lv2. I feel like I'm no longer a novice, but I still can't finish it. Author, you have written so many books. Have you ever summarized how to get more people to read your books?

After reading eight chapters, the protagonist received 10 yuan from a kind person, looked down upon other people's charity, and threw away 7 yuan. As a result, he was temporarily unable to make money, and wanted to get back the 7 yuan he threw away. However, the 7 yuan was picked up by several people. As a result, the protagonist was treated as a pig by the few people who picked up the 7 yuan (without the halo of the protagonist).

The title of the book and the naming will ruin you. Change the name of the prehistoric world to other world names, such as Dahuang, Zicheng, etc., And then change Fuxi to Zhang San and Li Si. Anyway, you are all original, why bother to use this shell of the prehistoric world? Don't want immortals, gods, demons, the Three Pure Ones, etc. There are a lot of original characters, just like the ancient times, neither fish nor fowl. Also, don't write such a cool chapter in the first chapter. What about innate gods and demons, about taking the essence and blood of hundreds of tribes, killing four ferocious beasts, switching to another path, and calculating the secrets of heaven. But after reading the comments, I found out that you are still just a golden immortal. The path of Pure Yang is not easy to practice. You change paths inexplicably. You abandon the identity of the Dragon Ancestor at the beginning. After calculating for a long time, you find that you can't abandon it. Then what do you think? Then he licks his face and wants to use the luck of the Dragon Clan to cultivate immortality. He will not abandon the pure Yang origin, nor can he abandon the Dragon Ancestor origin. He also relies on other people's luck. Are you trying to understand the cause and effect, or are you trying to increase the cause and effect? ​​How can you find other paths to replace the gods and demons? You can practice other things, but the source must still be pure Yang

I really like reading your prehistoric articles, keep up the good work👏

The difficulty of Nuwa's conclusion is 1, and the protagonist is 100

Just from this introduction, I know that it is rubbish, and the pattern is not high. The ethnic groups in the prehistoric era are definitely more than trillions, trillions, trillions. This good guy has hundreds of tribes. There are two thousand ethnic groups on the earth, let alone the mythical world.

The author has written so many books, but still doesn't he understand the poisonous point of having too many female supporting characters? Especially the evil points of accepting a female apprentice, having an affair with a female supporting character, helping her become stronger, and delivering treasures to her, don't you understand? Without these, many people will definitely read it, but the author will always have these poisons, and the readers will be poisoned by these female supporting characters.

Your writing has fallen into a bottomless abyss now. First, if you want to change the protagonist, there will be no sense of substitution. You are not that kind of writing about native people yet. You might as well just write about rebirth. Second, you are decisive and like a holy mother in not killing. There is no way to write about the prehistoric world and just to seek the truth. Third, the book you wrote is not like a novel at all. It is like an outline and a setting. It has no passion, no excitement, and is ordinary. In fact, in the prehistoric novel where thousands of people are fighting, there are so many things that can be written, how much passion can be written, but no author can write that feeling.

It's not that you don't intend to monopolize the Western Continent, and you have a good relationship with the Sanqing, why not unite the Immortal Dao forces of the Sanqing to fight against the Buddha and Demon forces, which can also achieve the results you want. I can't think of why you need to cooperate with the Dao Ancestral Mu, and even when there is a conflict with the Dao Ancestral Mu, you have to heal the Dao Ancestral Mu, and the Dao Ancestral Mu has nothing to do.

At least it's better than Xiaobaiwen's Chronicle Read it carefully It's the kind of setting that requires a lot of effort, 😑 grand, although I think some of the settings in the first chapter will be invisible by the 100th chapter_(:з∠)_

The level of pressure is too great. When will I be promoted to Daluo?

A and B Tiangen, the lineage of ghosts, the ancestral dragon of the East Pole, long life and immortality. The peaceful sun and moon, in the golden bowl tomb, the treasure of Emperor Shi, the great Buddha Krishna. For six days, the chief lord has retrieved the record of crime and has the power of life and death, the emperor of Fengdu. ... Nine secluded places are winding and scattered, emerging one after another, opening up the abyss of chaos. The blessed land, the cave, the world, the universe, dimensions, dimensions, all are heading toward death and eternal silence under the shroud of boundless darkness. The magnificent supreme will watched indifferently as the roars and wails of countless creatures in the world came. A wisp of will came, crushing countless ant-like creatures and ending everything for them. The darkness that swallows everything is still expanding. Killing is not the end, death is not the end, and nothingness is just the beginning. Individuals are small compared to the world, and the world is small compared to the universe. Similarly, the universe is also extremely small compared to the boundless chaos. Sacrifice the small and preserve the large; sacrifice the small and preserve the great. This is correct in the eyes of most people and in the eyes of the supreme will... https://www. Qidian. Com/book/1041427115/

I can't understand more and more what the author is writing

It can be considered that someone has written orthodox mythology.

It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away, there's nothing enjoyable about it

It's well written, but it's all bad reviews. It's more novel than most prehistoric novels.

I would like to give the author some advice, don't accept female disciples, don't accept the Holy Mother, especially female disciples are extremely poisonous to those who don't have female protagonists.

Recommend a novel - Peerless Tang Sect: My Dragon King Simulator (formerly known as Peerless Tang Sect: My Simulation of the Dragon King Legend)

It writes four different images: the orthodox mythological Heavenly Emperor Kuang or Haotian God is the supreme (Sun God), followed by the Five Elements Gods (Zhu Rong, Gonggong, etc.). This is the result of the worship of nature. Fuxi inherited the Qing Emperor and also served as the acting Heavenly Emperor. There is also the authority and function between heaven and earth represented by the gods, which is far from the immortal power compiled by Taoism. The Three Qing Dynasties only appeared after the Tang and Song Dynasties, and they could be eliminated by the ancient court (such as destroying Buddha and suppressing Taoism.). They have no authority at all, not as far as Haotian. At least every emperor who ascends to the throne has to sacrifice. By comparison, the immortals are inferior, including Sanqing.

I can't understand more and more what the author is writing

I can't understand what the author is trying to write.

Most of the comments are unnecessary to read.

May I ask, is there no heroine?