The Uchiha Who Walks Infinitely

The author seems to have not determined the protagonist's walking route from the beginning He has laid a lot of abandoned foreshadowing, and the research on some of the content is not rigorous The previous process is that the protagonist rises up, kills him in seconds, and his teammates flatter him Later, the solo walk directly becomes a plot account, and the battle takes seconds No It's not enough to say that the gap is too big. It's just like Madara that he dances with the opponent for a while and then crushes and kills him. The number of words is still high Some plots are instantly killed, and you have to go back and see what period of seconds it is. It is understandable that the audience in the book cannot see it, but if the reader reads it once, he has to go back and look carefully to find out how to kill...

A decent book, six out of 10! The shortcuts and cheating methods of the game have been eliminated, while the excitement of rapid growth of the same character as the protagonist has been retained. This has also created some negative effects and overdrawn part of the foundation of this book. In order to keep up with the difficulty of the protagonist, the final boss of the dungeon has been strengthened. It can only be fought against generals and soldiers, while the protagonist can fight the boss alone. If you follow this line alone, it will form a routine template, and you won't get far! I don't know if other readers are like me. What they want to see is the protagonist driving a skeleton Susan, using adult mode to bully the children, solve a series of problems, and finally the conditions are met, and the final boss comes out and we fight together. It also increases the participation of teammates. Although it is very pleasant to do it simply and crudely, but! But it's much less watchable! Some additions! There is a lot of lack of character linkage, fullness of characters, and emotional fluctuations. The humanistic environment of different worlds, the description of scenery, and the use of world backgrounds. Very few!

Isn't this too difficult? All the players are new. It's their first iron-blooded battle with the aliens, and several people died. Shouldn't the start after the team is wiped out be to clear the game? Then the second game is to kill the ghost king in the Xuanmen of Heaven and Earth. How can a person who has survived the first game normally win? If the protagonist doesn't have his own faults.

The abilities obtained from Naruto and other worlds cannot compete with fantasy powers at all. They can only continuously strengthen fantasy abilities and techniques. In this case, what is the point of early strengthening? They are all covered. It doesn't feel like Infinite Flow, like a meat pigeon game. And now, the protagonist has not used the abilities acquired in the previous world to develop his own path. Instead, he keeps updating his skills and bloodline. Doesn't it seem like the protagonist only has plug-ins and no ideas of his own? A leashed dog can be played with this enhancement.

When you were debating whether to work alone or on the Tenjin team, I suggested the Tenjin team. There are many benefits, such as having other teammates to back you up, and praise, etc. However, working alone does not have the characteristics of the main god space. Readers are used to the writing method of having teammates in the previous dozens of chapters, and then you choose to go alone. The key is that there are many such Zhutianliu novels, and this one is as good as yours. The success of Samsara Paradise is because of originality. What did you write? Conferring the title of God to the Great Desolate River and covering the sky, is there going to be a battle to destroy eternal life or something like that? Entering these worlds and interacting with teammates is not bad, it is interesting, but now there is only one protagonist, which is equivalent to ordinary time-traveling fan fiction. There are many Zhetian Fans fighting against Po Po Fans, right? Miss you? Boring, unable to keep up with the times, following the trend without being original, such as Black Myth Wukong

It feels very depressing to watch the protagonist's logical behavior. For example, when it comes to your teammates, you are the boss, let alone raising pigs, but they are all unruly and smart, so you can't build a team according to your ideas? Those who are disobedient will die if they are not obedient. If it were not for the aura of the protagonist, this idea of ​​strengthening the team, each with its own characteristics, would not go very far. If you meet a perfect match and strengthen the team, just G😒

Is there really anyone in the world of Lord God choosing Ripple? 'The biggest feature is only Vampire Special Attack, and other aspects are mediocre. I even saw someone who wrote Yamcha learning Ripple. Is it really that good?

To be honest, the best place for the protagonist to show off should be in various worlds with a Japanese background. Especially Susanoo directly becomes a god as soon as it opens. Do you understand the value of Takamawara's messenger and Suzhan Mingzun walking in the world? Even the emperor has to come and kowtow 😁

Author, please open a comprehensive comic with unlimited personal streaming next time. I feel like it's not suitable for writing about multiple people. The whole writing is too space. It's fun to watch the protagonist, but it feels disconnected when watching other games. The protagonist improves his strength too quickly, or the gap between his teammates and the protagonist is too big. It feels too disconnected, especially when playing in a group.

I don't know what's going on, but I feel like I haven't looked good since I became a god. When I arrived at Zhetian, I was completely confused. I had read Zhetian's novels before, but I had no impression of many of the settings in the novels. I felt very confused and had no sense of immersion at all.

This, after reading the novel for so long, is the first time I see a saint on the list of gods 😅

Teammates like Pigfoot are not even pendants. It can only be said that with teammates like them, the space does not look like the protagonist's stand-alone game.

I read it in one go, but I feel like you can't go beyond 300 chapters. Now at chapter 52, the protagonist has a single-eyed reincarnation eye. If he is not stressed, the protagonist in chapter 30 will be Liudao. After writing two more copies, the protagonist should be invincible. Basically, it will be 50 chapters, and 10 more chapters. Basically in his early 200s, if you follow Shuangwen

After I felt the King of Fighters, I couldn't stand it anymore.

The protagonist is well written and accounts for too high a proportion. This is an advantage, but it also results in the fact that there are no two supporting characters with a sense of presence, and it seems unclear why teammates have become stronger. Especially the one named Ye Mei, who exchanged for enhancements and has some mental talents. She has not opened any level 3 gene locks, nor has she cheated like the protagonist. It would be understandable if you secretly unlocked a level 3 gene lock for her, but nothing has been opened. Why did she become so strong? It's amazing how many thousand-year-old demon kings said she can control her. In the future, either write about this kind of protagonist and push it all the way, or write more about the performance of teammates, and let them secretly go back to do some branch lines and arrange some small hooks. I have been waiting for the protagonist to return to the Hokage to equip himself, but he has already reached this level of strength. He has not returned yet. It will be useless to be stronger in the Hokage world. Unless he goes outside the planet, go back before the team battle, and then let the main teammates also go back and become stronger

The upper limit of Hokage is not low, and you can turn to immortal cultivation later. After all, natural energy can be regarded as another way of saying the aura of heaven and earth.

I remember watching Naruto fanfics ten years ago, Itachi was still a relatively positive character. After all, the Will of Fire would kill everyone for the sake of the village. How just. In the past few years, from the Weasel God to the Weasel, is it because the readers have grown up and no longer believe in the false "Will of Fire"?

I feel like the author is suitable for writing system comprehensive comics, but what my teammates wrote is completely useless.

The presence of the protagonist's teammates is too low and too weak. After the return, the teammates will probably have a lot of reward points. Author, you have to carefully plan the positions and strengthening of the protagonist's teammates If you change teams, it is recommended that the protagonist triggers some mechanism to force the team to change. As compensation, the Shazhou team can increase the points in the next few world enhancements What are you planning to change for the S-level branch plot that the protagonist has retained? After the team battle, you can make up another S-level branch plot. I hope it can be changed to something serious to strengthen the combat power. Don't stress the combat power.

I was thinking, isn't the Predator stronger than ordinary people, and can't he just kill a jonin casually?

It is recommended not to appear in a novel world like Zha X, because it is all based on oral pleasure. It is not as intuitive as animation, film and television, nor has the popularity of Journey to the West: Conferred Gods. Setting the background and combat power will definitely cause controversy, and it cannot be written well.

Passing by

My evaluation is very good. The plot has no conflicting points and the writing is not too poisonous. The writing is surprisingly good and the author's writing is somewhat good. The lowest is a premium guarantee. Okay, if you work hard, you can go to Sanjiang. There aren't many special features in this book, and it doesn't follow the space of the original ancestor. Friends who like unlimited streaming can come and take a look, it's really good.

Dude, at least there's an ending. It's such a pity. The battle was originally written quite well.

I'm tired of reading these worlds when writing Infinity

The male protagonist has worked so hard to improve, but you, the author, are better off. You are seduced by beauty, and the updates are like an old cow breaking a car and strolling at a snail pace. The protagonist cannot stop. The less updates you make, the fewer votes you get, and the fewer votes you get, the less money you make. Author, you should learn from the protagonist and make hard progress 😡. You are an inherently evil author, you will definitely regret it! 😡

It's the 27th, where are your updates and new books 🔪

I don't know if it's because the finale is approaching and the progress feels a bit delayed, or if it's because of slow updates? It feels like the progress of the plot has not moved after a long time. I guess the ending will be almost finished after finishing the game.

Thank you for your support, please read it every day~

How about the Immortal World? The combat power level in it is not low. The group of guys in the foreign land have countless ancestor gods and many half-step stone kings, as well as several living stone kings. There is a passage connecting to another world on the highest level of the clan artifact. There is a group of emperors and emperors who have ascended to the extreme realm, but they can only hide in that small world, and they will be captured when they come out. There is no living space for them to train to death according to the rules. The stone tablet method is the pinnacle of physical training, and there is also a spiritual breakthrough path to the True Ancestor that is comparable to the King of Stonemen. The opportunities are as deep inside, and there are many weapons as psychic as Zhetian. The materials are also very extraordinary. You can take them and integrate them into your own weapons for training, and you can also plant a large number of trees and bear fruit to eat.