Thank You for the Invitation. People Were Very Busy During the Colonial Era.

The atmosphere of adventure and pioneering in sailing is full of high-quality food and grass! Come on, write what you want!

This is not a normal historical novel, but a systematic historical novel. This kind of novel should not be placed in the historical category. It is more suitable to be placed in fantasy than here.

The logic of the plot is not very good, and it suddenly seems very law-abiding. Just like in modern times, the ownership of a ship requires a ship certificate. The next chapter feels like it is back to the era of real lawlessness in large-scale navigation.

It's still pretty good-looking at the beginning, but it feels like it's getting worse later on. The main reason is that the pace is too fast, and there's too little time for development. I'm either fighting or on the way to fight, and the protagonist's aura is too heavy. Many times I face invincible powerful enemies, and then the protagonist's aura It's too blunt to break the situation, and then it's a fight on the sea. As a result, instead of pursuing a larger tonnage, larger artillery, and a larger fleet, the protagonist still uses a small broken ship. For those who like giant ships and cannons, it is really unacceptable 😅

I have become a free knight, and I have a lot of pounds on my body. In addition, I have the ability to recognize people, I still have a group of initial team members, and I also have the appreciation of the Earl. Boss, is it time to consider getting a ship for a long voyage? There's no need to always overpower the protagonist, right? Or should we say that the day it is put on the shelves is the time to set sail? ? ?

There are too many female supporting characters, and all I can say is that she deserves to be the protagonist of the novel! Working as a seaman in the colonial era, you had poor food and clothing, hard work, no guarantee of safety, low status, and no money. It was so miserable, and you also had a harem of beautiful women to accompany you!

Everything was normal before it was put on the shelves. After it was put on the shelves, it held a battleship in hand and punched people flying more than 40 meters. The opponent was still a person who believed in evil gods and could communicate with ships.

There are too many women. With so many women on board during the Age of Discovery, you had to use the system to allocate sailors. Normally, no one would come despite the amount of money it would cost to recruit people. Don't talk about the Age of Discovery. Now go for a walk along the coast and ask how many women were on the boats.

Looking at it in a mess, there are so many women, even if they don't choose this reason, how can so many new characters jump out without any warning? To put it bluntly, it is just a slave ship. Do you think it is an NPC? Random refresh? Earth OL?

So well written! ! ! It's time to kill, it's time to fuck! ! !

I've reached chapter 48, but I haven't seen the main theme yet. Is the protagonist planning to pursue transcendence? Or establish a territory? Or dominate the Atlantic Ocean and become a great pirate? It's no fun just making money and traveling to make money all day long! Since you have written extraordinary content, expand it into a sailing adventure to pursue extraordinary things! Since this is the era of great navigation and colonization in the 17th century, we can also do things in the Americas! However, I have already written nearly 50 chapters, but they are still flowing and have no theme. How can I retain readers like this? It is tasteless and a pity to abandon. After all, it is a new theme, ugh😔

I suggest you modify it. The shipowner who has not been seen for several months at sea suddenly appears. It is really outrageous. Did he never leave the cabin before? You don't need to even have the captain's son, it's too much of a show. You can rebel and kill the captain and become a pirate, or you can stop working and recruit people to do it yourself. Ordinary sailors can refresh from time to time. After all, there are still a lot of people on the ship.

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Update once a day? Are most of the crew members with you female? ? Planning to go out on an adventure on a boat (bed) where you are the captain and the bed captain? ?

The writing is quite good, but the Virgin is the one with any important plot arrangements in the follow-up? I pretended to be dead three or four times in a row, but I'm still alive and well. What do you think, clear author?

The protagonist is ruthless, pure breeding... I have seen the previous one, but I have never seen the author so impatient 😅 Even the development of hegemony has become a branch line 🤔

I haven't read it yet, I came here for Wild Gold.

I thought Dumas became extinct at the starting point

Two female supporting characters appeared in the first few chapters. Now all the male characters in the novel are dead, right? Or is it better for females to thrive in the pirate position?

The book is good and the writing style is good. The Age of Discovery is a bit extraordinary, but it is too imperial. It is too imperial 😓

Who is this thank you for the invitation? Seeing that he hasn't appeared yet, is there any evidence of the mastermind behind it?

This book seems to have this silly and cute feeling of fighting between left and right. It's very twisted. I hope the author can adjust it so that the protagonist does things more neatly. Don't use 'additional narration' to confuse people. Those who like to read it must know something about a claw and a half scale, so the author can unfold it from the perspective of the story.

Surprisingly... It's pretty good-looking?

1——It is best to note the system text in the introduction, otherwise the comment area will explode 2——The system has systematic benefits, because normal people are in a low-end game before time travel, and you will still be in a low-end game after time travel, otherwise you will lack a sense of substitution, so it is normal to open a cheat device to reduce the difficulty of the plot 3——Before time travel, it is inevitable that you are at the high end of society It has the characteristics of being older and more experienced, but doing childish things after time travel will make people lack a sense of substitution even more (the lack of a sense of substitution is conspicuous - the novel, the son-in-law & the TV series, the feeling of the son-in-law, the business boss & the little boy, I almost vomited when I watched the two works at the same time) 4 - Of course, even if it is a system text, the functions will not be added later. Add too many, otherwise it will be like opening Wushuang and it will be boring 5 - A major feature of most historical texts without a system is that they single-handedly control the history of the world and dominate the world. > 6——The author's trick is not bad yet, it is just a display of character characteristics and loyalty, which can effectively reduce the number of words. Historical texts always need to describe some characters' characteristics in large lengths. The pace is slow if you describe it. If you don't describe it, the feeling will be too low for readers to get the expected effect. The author currently has restrictions in this aspect and it is just right

So far, the book is very interesting, and I can't stop reading it. The voyage has a bit of fantasy, which is as conspicuous as a husky among a pack of wolves. The only disadvantage is that there are too few updates, so it is difficult to maintain books. . .

It's well written, but the details of the exchange between men and women are missing, incomplete, and almost meaningless.

Damn, I didn't pay attention. It turns out to be a beast. No wonder there are so few people watching it. I can't stand it anymore. It's best to keep it for half a month to a month before watching it.

Hurry up and update

The writing is really good, but looking at the number of comments, it's best not to be a eunuch.

The author has some satanic plot, but it's a bit dull now