Across the Heavens, Starting as Bronze Superman

Shen Nong is here again. After reading it, let me tell you my thoughts after reading it. It has nothing to do with the heavens. The name is hanging sheep's heads and selling dog meat. The plot is all campus vulgar routines, and has a strong campus Long Ao astronomy flavor.

In more than twenty chapters, two vicious incidents occurred: one was that two perverted teachers raped a primary school girl, and the other was a group of social youths gang-raped a female teacher. As expected of the protagonist, anything can happen to him

Are they all trivial things, or are they malicious for no reason? With a superhuman physique, such a big plug-in is only used for these? Do you know how strong the learning ability of a superhuman physique is? Why use such plug-ins to learn knowledge? Needless to say, the benefits of learning knowledge to the protagonist are putting the cart before the horse.

A person who transcends everything. I have read a book about Superman. In that city, only those who dare to commit crimes can just shoot laser eyes. Look, who dares to commit crimes in that city? You actually dare to kill people. Why don't you dare to set such rules and engage in such disgusting plots?

Yesterday I discovered a very poisonous Wudi novel. . . The protagonist travels to the earth in parallel time and space. As soon as he was born, he knew that his golden finger was the superman system. In the following ten years, the system continued to load over time, and the protagonist relied on the Superman system to perform heroic acts. The protagonist's abilities and powers became more and more like the Superman in his previous life. Until one day when the protagonist reaches the age of 18, the protagonist's strength has reached a level where he is not afraid of nuclear bombs and his attack power can destroy stars with one punch. The protagonist decides to be a god on earth. Unexpectedly, after the protagonist publicly demonstrates his ability to ignore nuclear weapons and crush a continent with one finger, the protagonist naturally becomes the ruler of the planet. In the following chapters, the protagonist transforms human society according to his own likes, dislikes and morals. During this period, hundreds of millions of people probably died. . . Later, the protagonist discovers that there is also a mysterious power on this planet, but of course it is nothing to worry about compared to his own superhuman system. . One day, a person who calls himself the "Dynasty of All Realms" organization suddenly appears in the protagonist's world. The opponent asks the protagonist to surrender, and the protagonist kills him with one punch... Then the leader of that organization, the emperor, crosses over and the protagonist defeats the opponent with 70% of his superhuman power. When the opponent sees that the protagonist is not He immediately ran away, but at this moment the protagonist, who had been silent, suddenly asked the protagonist to capture the opponent's system. Unexpectedly, the protagonist said that no one could order me, not even the system, and directly refused the system's request. The protagonist is stupid if he cannot recognize the reality and is ungrateful. If the protagonist is really wary of his own superhuman system, he should do everything possible to master the power and abilities outside the system, but the protagonist has no thoughts and actions to master abilities outside the system in the past twenty years. Enjoy the benefits of your own system calmly. The most disturbing thing is that the defense and attack power of the protagonist at chapter 60 are no longer afraid of a nuclear bomb. As a result, the protagonist at chapter 100 is learning martial arts in a certain martial arts world.

Judging from the introduction, the author has never understood the setting of Superman. Bronze and silver belong to the creation period of Superman similar to Kamen Rider's Show and Heisei era, and gold belongs to Superman's special form. So if you expect it to be a good fan work, you can go ahead. If you understand the setting, it doesn't necessarily mean the writing is good, but if you don't even understand the setting, the writing is definitely not good.

The protagonist is always an afterthought, and can never keep up with the time of others hurting others. Either the ability is blocked or because he doesn't want to care about what you are going to do later, and he wants to control it but lets it happen again.

Why people don't like the police in movies? Isn't it because everything is solved and the police arrive too late? This is pretty good, after all, most of the events have been perfectly resolved, but have the events in this novel been resolved well? Innocent people are insulted and good-hearted people are tainted. Even if the protagonist kills the perpetrator, can it change the fact that they are humiliated? The author may think that punishing the villain is more satisfying. The worse the villain is, the higher the punishment is. But people only see that the protagonist is like the policeman in the movie. He is late and has invincible abilities, but he has no insight into the evil deeds. Delayed punishment, delayed justice. The protagonist kills a group of villains who have completed their evil deeds perfectly, but does not stop and punish them before committing the crime. This kind of protagonist makes people feel disgusting. Although there are so many evil things in the world that make people angry and make people despair, the protagonist also has his own life, and it is impossible to be completely immersed in fighting the crime, but since you want to write this kind of plot, you must at least write this kind of plot well. It is also a plot where evil is rewarded. In "Tokyo: My Super Power is updated every week", the protagonist will appear immediately before the crime begins, and use desperate means to let the sinner die. This is cool. In such a plot, even if the reader actually knows that the sinner has done countless evil things before, they still won't feel that the protagonist is a waste because the protagonist stops the atrocities in time and tortures the criminal. But in this book, you wrote the crime process in such a disgusting way. The protagonist tmd waited until the criminal was satisfied before he came out to solve the problem and kill the criminal. So what's the difference between this and the police in cliché movies? This kind of thing is also worthy of being called the protagonist? It's really not pleasant. Maybe some people with strong endurance may think it's nothing, but readers with more sensitive hearts will really feel disgusting. I really feel sick.

Another pretentious dragon, an arrogant and patriotic superman, the plot is really rubbish, and he even made a disgusting scene of a time-travelling baby

Very rubbish! Very rubbish! ! ! Long Aotian's campus urban essay! ! !