Warhammer: Expeditions into the Multiverse from 30K

Recently, I saw the Star God Dantioch violently beating wild beasts, and I suddenly felt like giving up the book for no apparent reason. The setting of Dantioch becoming a Star God is very boring. The most valuable thing for a person is courage, not the power gained in this way. After reading along the way, I feel that most of the better parts are similar to the original work, and there are also changes to several original bodies, but after the changes, the explanation is quite boring. And the most important point is that it has always been stuck in the throat. The protagonist's sense of existence is puzzlingly low. It does not mean that the protagonist has a great influence on the world background setting, but that the narrative center and spiritual embodiment of the story are almost not in the protagonist. Maybe the author If you think that making the protagonist the focus of the story means making the protagonist kill all kinds of enemies, the story will be broken quickly. However, the characteristic of Warhammer has never been an awesome setting, but the courage of human beings to still choose to face all kinds of difficult and difficult choices. But did the protagonist face any difficult choices? No, the protagonist even wants to escape the galaxy at first. All of the protagonist's actions have almost no cost or resistance that requires him to make a choice. What's outstanding is the characters in the original work, because they have choices in the original work. The part about traveling through the heavens was also disappointing. Wolverine became an Astartes and was almost insulated from his original life. The Transformers universe was also handled poorly. In Battle of the Gods, a fragment of the God suddenly came to solve all problems. After that, he was ready to return to the Warhammer world. But has the problem of the gods been solved? There are so many divided universes, just rely on these few universes as the basis, and don't explore the reality of the gods, just go back to this? You didn't contact Adam when you got back? Finally, I would like to say that this book is very weak in terms of scientific and technological imagination. The author may have only seen the Three-Body Problem and likes to collide with it. Providing special equipment to the empire is also very abstract. Thundercloud-class battleships, Tengu mechas, and Apocalypse tanks are just these three. Is this called the God of All Machines? Why not give White Scar and Blood Angel various Macross models? Why didn't the Mobile Suit Corps from the Gundam series participate in the Battle of Betagarmon?

Overall, this is my favorite Warhammer fanfic. The author can just write at his own pace. I will support all orders.

It depends

I think the writing is very good It is obvious that the main character will be the main character when he travels through the multiverse later At present, it mainly describes the Astartes and the Primarchs and others without any concern about the body There is no need to brag about the so-called golden age.

The author just wrote the basic cloud hammers to speed up the progress according to the original idea. If he speeds up the progress of such an important and grand plot as the Terra War, there is still nothing left to write.

If the author means to write a group drama, as far as my personal preference for group dramas is concerned, I don't want the protagonist to have strong combat power or good luck. I just hope that the protagonist can have a role in every incident, play a role of the protagonist's own personality, and make actions that the protagonist has personality. Even if it is not decisive, even if it is tragic or wrong, he must exist so that I can have a sense of involvement.

It's so funny that I originally came here to watch Expedition to the Multiverse, but when I read the Warhammer chapter, I wrote about 600 and nearly 700 chapters, so I immediately closed the book and blacklisted it to make it clear that I was using pork as mutton.

I really don't understand it. The other parts are obviously well written, which shows that the author clearly knows what the readers want to see, but when it comes to the plot of the National Church, he always describes it in the most disgusting direction, never omitting any details, and insists on inserting the feces tube into the reader's esophagus with his own hands, filling each reader's body with feces until the fecal juice fills the stomach and returns to the mouth. It is blocked by the lips and gums sewn on the feces tube, and then overflows from the nasal cavity, allowing readers to deeply and thoroughly experience the taste of feces. You know, most people are tired of being stupid, not to mention stupidity that deviates from the character in order to advance the plot, which will make people either question the author's writing attitude or the author's writing level.

The author used 600 chapters to educate me about Warhammer's Horus Heresy. I was already bored, and I felt like I was being teased by Tzeentch. I didn't see anyone fighting in the multiverse, and he didn't even fight in the Warhammer universe. The protagonist described by the author is just a witness to the experience of the Warhammer universe. This is more like a popular science article about Warhammer. In this case, why should I waste it? There are videos for free on one site.

The protagonist's personal abilities and way of thinking are not worthy of his status. As a continuation of human civilization, he should have the judgment and decisiveness like Luo Ji. He should understand what should be given up and what should not be given up. But in actual performance, in the negotiations with Guilliman, it was completely at a disadvantage, and the direction of the negotiations was led by Base Liman. He easily gave up his original plan to leave the world of Ultramar 500, and was deceived by the original body, so he reached cooperation with the original body. This means that he can be persuaded by anyone to abandon his original plan. This means that as an executor who retains human fire, he is a very unqualified existence. He is a very weak person. And the execution of plans for the preservation of human activity cannot be carried out by a weak man. Even if weakness is relative, for the continuation of civilization, relative weakness is absolutely not allowed to exist. Regardless of whether the other writings are good or not, there is a serious mismatch between him and his identity.

It's almost 3 million words, and the plot has really become more and more toxic recently. It was just a cesspool before, but now it's running straight towards the septic tank. There is no more writing on the God of All Machines, no writing on the heavens, and no writing on the original body. I finally finished writing the birthday celebration plot. I thought that the introduction of the Zhutian plot was to save the Warhammer World, but what happened? Just demolish the latrine and turn it into a septic tank. How about swimming in a cesspit? It's true that the protagonist has developed technology for so long and developed such a good impression of a bunch of Primarchs, and then what? What is the protagonist doing? The protagonist hangs up in a manure pit! ! ! 🙂

What you wrote earlier was pretty good, and it was almost time to time travel. But damn, you wrote more than 600 chapters of Warhammer and you didn't even mention how good it was. The problem is that there's no point in writing it later. Why don't you write more than 60,000 chapters about time travel, buddy. If you haven't written yet, why are you reading? If other novels were written like this, they would have been abandoned long ago. What kind of good guy only wears it after more than 600 chapters?

Well, the impression given to me by the male protagonist is: "Focus on the overall situation, it doesn't matter how many people die, just keep the human race from becoming extinct, and escape to the rear to develop on your own." The male protagonist is the executor of the human survival plan in the galaxy, and I am just an ordinary person on earth with normal views. I don't agree with it and can't be involved. Excuse me for saying goodbye...

How powerful were you in this golden age? If the Golden Age had been so violent, there would not have been the birth of Slaanesh, and all human colonies would have lost contact on the spot. No matter how many planets we took, we would not have returned to the feudal era and the era of technological barbarians.

I can only say that the author's idea of ​​demons is too awesome. A 21K state-of-the-art high-tech product was invaded by a random demon. How much do you look down on human beings?

The author very deliberately designed the protagonist to have no psychic powers or top-level scientific research capabilities, and his combat power is almost non-existent. This is not very logical and affects the perception.

... The latest chapter is really a bit outrageous, because you have stopped criticizing Guilliman so little. You really treat Big Blueberry as some kind of baby, don't you? Have you really forgotten that he is the Primarch and the God of War, and have you really forgotten how long he has been a politician? Because criticizing so little people means giving up the responsibility of the entire human empire, you really write Guilliman as a giant baby.

This book is my own ideal fan creation. Apart from the poor viewing experience caused by my lack of proficiency at the beginning, the subsequent books became smoother and smoother as they were written, and became more and more beautiful to read. The author created while trying to maintain the original setting and tried to change the original plot. Because I haven't taken the time to read all the novels belonging to Yunzhui, I can't say that the settings written by the author are completely consistent with the original works, but as far as I know so far, the settings are perfectly consistent. The kind of fan creation I most want to see is this kind of change based on respecting the original settings. As for the specific content of the changes, people have different opinions. The author has changed the fate of many people in the general plot, but there has not been much change in the overall trend of major events in Warhammer. Some people may not like this kind of plot, but I can accept it myself. After all, it is difficult to directly reverse the outcome of the Great Rebellion when there are four gods. Another point is the issue of the author's title. He wrote about the multiverse but is still writing about Warhammer 30k. But now that I have seen it, I have forgotten that this book is about the multiverse. Even because the plot is so exciting, I hope I can keep writing about Warhammer and not write about other worlds at all. Generally speaking, I think it is a very good Warhammer fic. The one I like most now is Nirvana.

There are ponies to share the burden, and the Emperor's condition is much better than in the canon history. There is no trace of the Black King in the canon history. How come you, the Black King, have begun to affect the physical universe? The Emperor can suppress the Black King after being worshiped for ten thousand years And this Spring of Terra is too childish. You gave in with a gun to your head by the Battle Sister? I'll go back and start messing with you directly It's okay if I dare to destroy people directly. It's okay if chaos eggs appear on Terra. If the state religion works together, it's possible to temporarily control the situation, but no, how much foundation does Elfriedi have? How much power do you control? A little battle nun is nothing. There are so many forces in the solar system that are stronger than you. With so few cards in your hand, you write them like a five-finger mountain. It's full of pressure, right?

The author's writing style is good, but the special code does not include the protagonist - wake up, what you are writing is a starting point Warhammer fan, not an official GW novel.

What about your qualifications as an immortal? A golden age ship said that the invasion was invaded. I saw that the protagonist has done something now. If not, he just participated. When will he meet the emperor?

In the early stages of the plot, it was normal for the protagonist to hide in the world for four or five chapters. Then when the protagonist came, he would sigh something like, "Fate is unpredictable, and you can't help yourself." The plot is also very rigid, like a tourist in the original plot. It's okay to skip to read the chapter names. It's better to just call Warhammer to watch the movie.

Roboute doesn't sound as good as Robert, just like Marvel's Coulson doesn't sound as good as Coulson, and it's also different from the official translation

The protagonist's behavior is a bit disgusting, dragging a world that was basically peaceful for ordinary people into the flames of war. Those gods need cannon fodder, and they also need those mutants and some strong men who have nothing to do with ordinary people. When the protagonist comes, he directly drags ordinary people into the flames of war. He talks about liberating mankind and turning other universes into Warhammer cesspools.

It's so well written, we need more good books

It's good, although it's very confusing, but it made the emperor get off the golden throne and tie the pony to it. This huge change is worth watching. It's definitely possible to jump and watch.

What is the protagonist doing? Fighting, developing military industry, what about humans? Love life and death?

Qu is really too underwhelming 😡, will we be in the qu world in the future?

What day is today? Several authors have asked for leave.

We promised a sequel, but why haven't we updated it yet?