I Am a Repaying Fox in Tokyo

There are bad people among the masses. A brother distributed welfare to everyone, but the villain organized it. Alas, I posted the new group under the introduction.

Why doesn't this mechanism enter the factory? As long as you enter the factory, isn't that a debt of gratitude that cannot be fully repaid, and a love that cannot be fully repaid? Every breath is a gift from the boss?

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The author is very rhythmic, you can read it if you like it, and the writing is still readable. If you don't like the rhythm, moisturize early

Don't make readers feel frustrated like other Japanese authors.

Forget about spells, I can bear it But can you Fox Fire not use it like a fireball? Fire wall, rocket, ring of fire, fire armor. Even if you combine the breath of the sun with the sword, it won't be like a constant fireball. It can't even break the defense It's so cool. Can the author give me some words? Will this change? If you don't change, I'm fine. I'm just leaving. But can you inform me first? I don't want to waste money.

Skeleton soldiers! How shameless!

I had previously invested 10,000 points in this book, but later I had a completely bad impression of the book. The first part he wrote is pretty good, but the later part feels a bit awkward, especially after The Crow Flies to the Second. Not to mention the running story, the main plot is never good, so be careful if you want to read it.

I just finished reading the free chapter of this book. Let me briefly share my personal feelings. For me, this book is full of the duality of divine history. Let me start by saying that I think it is good. This book is very good at creating an atmosphere. It gave me the feeling of being alone and warm when reading Friends. Unfortunately, the stretched part is too covered with history. The first point that makes me feel uncomfortable is that the fundamental method should be given but not the protective technique. If this book focuses on warm daily life, and there won't be any conflicts that require Tao-protecting techniques to resolve, then ok, I can accept it whether or not you give Tao-protecting techniques. But the problem is that this book contains these contradictions. I won't talk about commissioned adventures. It's definitely needed. Otherwise, what's the use of just a foxfire? The most outrageous thing is the content about the 80's on campus. I still haven't figured out what the author's purpose was in writing these 80's scenes. If you are talking about creating conflicts, then you must solve them quickly? No! After writing this episode, I immediately changed the plot. Do you plan to go back and forth to disgust people? Warm daily life and Campus 80 are really separated, that's all. Above

. . . . It seems hard to repay kindness

A beauty with animal ears appeared in front of a certain scholar. Scholar: Fairy, what are you? Beast-Eared Girl: Do you still remember how you kicked a wolf away and saved a fox 10 years ago? Scholar: Ah~ fairy, do you want to repay the favor? How can this be so embarrassing? I have always regarded money as dirt. Beast-Eared Woman: Oh~ Actually, I... Scholar: But if I only care about my own integrity and insist on wanting nothing, I am afraid that I will trap you in the injustice of the fairy. So, if you want to give me a few hundred thousand taels of gold or live in my house and sleep with me for a few years... Then I will have to do it. Beast-Eared Woman: Actually, I... Am the wolf you kicked away back then! I became a monster today and I came to take revenge! The wolf demon grabbed the scholar's head and smashed it on the ground. The scholar kept bleeding: white fox and scholar, right? Isn't it true that foreigners control women? A dead harem, right? Fox Knight, right? When the scholar was on the Huangquan Road, he said to Xie Bian and the others: Why are you stopping me? If you didn't stop me just now, I would just beat the shit out of that wolf. Do you believe it or not? Believe it or not? ! Xie Bian: Haha. Fan Wujiu: Interesting.

Don't write so many descriptions of great hatred in light novels No one wants to read it I want to read more interesting and enjoyable plots End the two or three chapters of battles, depression and so on quickly Let more enjoyable plots happen This is the right way of light novels. Jpg

Is the development of the main character too slow? It took more than half a year to write and it's still the end of the story.

Write a good repayment letter, don't be awkward, write it according to the original idea, gather all the wishes along the way, and the monsters and benefactors can pray for the protagonist to become a god. In fact, according to the original idea, there is nothing wrong with being a Kokujin God. There are some things to do in order to improve your character.

I have never quite recognized the idea that pills can be made into several grades. . Golden elixir itself represents perfection. The idea of ​​how many grades of elixir can be achieved is contradictory. Because it is not perfect, how can it be called a golden elixir?

I repaid a favor in the first 4 chapters, and then I didn't see the second repayment in Chapter 55.

Those who come to burn paper incense are waiting in line, 1st floor

The first few chapters of Moon Witch almost persuaded me to give up, and the dialogue made my scalp numb. It suddenly occurred to me that this kind of light novel travels to Tokyo, and either collects rent or goes to high school. . . . .

The latest two chapters feel a bit too hasty. The world view around the protagonist has not yet been explained, but suddenly other gods are involved and even end up personally. Also, the world view of reincarnation and the underworld is a bit too crowded. Personal feeling.

What I want to say is that this subject matter is really good, and the writing is great, but can you put some thought into writing a copy or a daily routine? Stop making jokes all day long. The foot stinky jokes come out every few chapters. I don't know, I thought I accidentally entered a forum. The more I read, the more I read it. I feel a bit sick. People spend money to see the author write the story well, not to play with the word count all day long. The story is much more important than the other things.

The fox skin hides the dog meat, and the watch stands on the archway

The author has something to say, is it better to do more or not to do more? Sit-ups are the most torturous.

Why are sit-ups always on my tomb list?

After raising her for a long time, she said yes, but she deserved it. The emotional scenes were too draggy. Is this how the harem works?

It's actually pretty good... I've subscribed to it 😭😭😭

Just some meaningless complaints from the author

Haha, do you want a monthly pass? I won't give it to you. I've been cut off for a long time. I'll ask myself. Now I'm going to update chapter 10. I'll give it to you if I get the votes again.

Is the author going to update it? It's a very nice book.