From Being a Righteous Boy to Becoming a Heavenly Master of All Dharma

After supporting it for 100,000 words, I couldn't stand it anymore. It became worse and worse after it was released. Just like that baby book, it boiled down when it was released. I thought it was an invincible series at first, but it turned out to be a weak one. The protagonist kept building an invincible character, but one of the villains ran away again and again. Every time, the protagonist is given a big slap in the face, but the protagonist has no way to do it. In the latest chapter, he almost had sex, and then ran away again. Next time the protagonist upgrades, will he cheat and give the protagonist a slap in the face again? 🤔 Let's put it this way, the Venerable is just like Li Tiangang, who is always disgusting and adds drama. It is foreseeable that the next few hundred pictures will almost be forced to create conflicts and disgust people. Brothers who like to watch Invincible Flow can leave and run! This book is only worthy of being collected and dusted, skipped and read, and will be deleted without modification in the future. The tickets given are just like feeding the dogs.

A common problem for new authors is that the quality plummets after being put on the shelves, and you can't read it anymore.

The writing style is online and follows a stitching path. From Lao Xu's Shushan to the original version of Huanzhu, the author should have read them all, but he should not follow some of the old tricks of the early years of online writing. At that time, the entire circle was young, and the author of the second grade wrote the second grade story for the readers of the second grade. , But today, 20 years later, with the explosion of information, there are various poisonous opinions in the comment area. It's not that you can't write like this, but everyone's awareness has improved a lot. After all, the world you write is based on reality, not a cyberpunk erected out of thin air.

I don't know who the bad people are!

The country is too weak. A villain from Southeast Asia has turned the country upside down. If it weren't for the protagonist who had to defeat him, and then a delegation from Japan came, it would have been like facing a formidable enemy, and the protagonist would have had to take over.

What I wrote at the beginning is so embarrassing. What kind of ancient routine is this? Seriously, who would offend a Taoist like you? You really don't worry about anything happening to you! Even if you are stingy, you won't give it away and then pull it back. This means you don't have to be a good person in the local area, okay?

The villain is the one who is destined to be the one, and the protagonist has the upper hand and is manipulated. You don't have to think about it in the later stage, just do B's all the time, so that the protagonist can run into obstacles everywhere. You can't win against others even if you're cheating. If it's a game, just go to bed. What are you playing?

The theme setting of the novel is okay, but the author's words are not serious, and his words and deeds are not like a Taoist priest. Instead, he looks like a small gangster and a second-rate person.

It's not bad, but I feel that the official handling is a bit awkward. They can't be so stupid, or just rob them directly. Drug hypnosis requires your basic skills, and there are many methods. There is also a place where it is said that someone else has shown extraordinary performance, so the follow-up official has not responded. The pace is fast and slow, and the tone may not have been set yet.

It's extremely poisonous. I was scolded for helping out kindly, and then I helped with a shameful expression. Isn't that mean?

The beginning is indeed a bit cheesy, but it gets much better later on. Come on, there are not many good books about spiritual energy recovery.

The comment area has been ruined. I think the writing is okay. The plot development has gradually become smoother. The transition between lines and chapters is a bit acceptable.

Author, haven't you noticed that 80% of the people around your protagonist are women? Especially when the woman named Chi appeared, you went to the extreme to screen Pan An!

The authentic Crooked Dragon King series, the protagonist deliberately pretends to be cool. As long as the author is not embarrassed, the readers will be embarrassed.

Why don't you call the police when you encounter a trafficker? Why do you have to go to the police yourself? This is a proficiency system, not a merit mission system.

I finished reading it in one sitting. The protagonist's brain is normal, his logic is self-consistent, and his mood is consistent with his character. Worth having

Any girl comes and you go up and lick it. How shameless is it? It's only about 10 chapters and a female Taoist priest who has no connection with you is quickly riding on your head. It doesn't matter. She really licks it.

Author, I came in after reading your profile, but what I saw at the beginning was not a quiet and inactive place, but a lot of bullshit, and all kinds of pretentious and slap-in-the-face plots that were poured into the readers' mouths.

The cliche Taoist priest shows off his saintly appearance and is a cliché. The protagonist has neither the heart to practice Taoism nor the Taoist demeanor. Everyday, he just uses the magic skills obtained by Golden Finger to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger in front of those who doubt him.

The plot is too old-fashioned. I hate the infinite matryoshka dolls of the Venerable. It is very boring. I know that I will kill him in the end, but it keeps jumping around. It is really disappointing. If I am not following the update, I will skip a lot of the plot in the middle.

The first chapter is poisonous, his grandmother has accumulated virtues, you reminded her. He didn't believe it. Is this your fate? If you've already been reminded, just let him go. Also describe psychological activities. I have to take care of him again. What kind of way to practice?

After watching this disgusting batch for a long time, I feel disgusted with the male protagonist over and over again. Just stay at lv.4 For the rest of your life.

A middle-aged boy who talks a lot of foul words and behaves like a mentally retarded person!

I gave up immediately after reading Chapter 12. This chapter is really poisonous. The fortune teller predicted that Qi Yong was so angry when he committed a crime that it caused things to change. The smart way is to fool him. He is incapable of taking action, so he can just send Qi away and call the police directly. Like the protagonist in Chapter 12, this approach is too shark-like.

It's written by someone who hasn't seen a woman in 800 years. Yes, she's so shabby. She deserves to be a eunuch. She's rubbish.

20 The old routine in front of me, with all my skills, still living so frustratingly

Even if you become an immortal, you still have to ggyy, and whoever makes a mistake will die.

Is this a mess? What a pity

It's been three months since I stopped updating, and this book is so eunuch

What's wrong with the author? I haven't updated this book for a long time.