Martial Arts Immortality: Start by Obtaining the Pixel Game

Book quality: Gray The sentences are unclear, the logic interferes with each other, and the author's common sense is extremely low. For example, those who make a living by fishing don't have anything like a fishing rod, which takes a long time and yields little profit. They usually use fishing nets, ground cages, and most importantly, small boats/floating boards. Details determine success or failure, and Laqua definitely deserves it.

I think the cool thing about this book is that the protagonist, with a weak body, gains benefits through pixel game simulation and hides behind the scenes without any danger. The copy of Qiu Shan Guan is very well written. The protagonist is in the village and has not shown up. No one else knows about the protagonist. Most of the Qiu Shan Guan skills and secrets are known to the protagonist. But since entering the city, the protagonist has moved from behind the scenes to the front. First, he recruits a killer who does not trust the protagonist and starts to kill the protagonist. Then, because of this killer, he involves the leader of the organization, and the leader is a woman (the protagonist can obviously avoid this risk, but the protagonist does not) and then accepts this woman as his niece or something. Fall into the cliche and cool point 📉, exposing yourself to the enemy's sight.

After reading Chapter 63, I suddenly felt that it was boring. Before I changed the map, there were Blood Evil Alliance and Tianya Hai Pavilion. You, a small county town, have more dramas than the imperial city. It is so filling.

Chapter 99 was not on the shelves, and then I rewarded 2 points for the paragraph and became the first book friend... It seems that the employment situation is grim, is it because many people are writing books?

That's it, there's nothing to see

The heretic copy will not look good when it comes out.

The main function of the golden finger is to predict what will happen the next day. The protagonist's development is neither slow nor fast, it can only be said to be a bit inexplicable. The main body is a classical upgrade (essentially brushing values) by brushing opportunities and information. But for the latest few pictures, additional plug-ins have been made. It seems that they are going to change the pictures directly. It can only be said that this thing does not have a complete mechanism. If the values ​​are brushed, it can only greatly increase the plot. So he obviously does not want to brush the plot by doing this, and it is probably going to break (You can read it when you are in a book shortage, recommended for newbies, not recommended for old bookworms)

This book actually has many advantages. As an improvement on simulation writing, the author's protagonist's use of cheats focuses on the acquisition of information. Compared with the stupid way of death caused by various suppressions in order to slow down the progress of the simulation novel that both wants and wants, the protagonist's initiative to die for information seems very clever. ————————Another thing that stands out to me is that the relationship handling with Li Dashan, the "son of luck", is very awesome! Obviously the protagonist is actually a nanny, but the interaction method described is not like other protagonists in time-travel novels who are scolded for licking the child of luck, being a nanny for the child of luck, etc. This aspect is handled very successfully! ————————For me personally, the biggest poisonous point of this book is the part where the big bird is curious about the protagonist. In my opinion, being forced to face the power of a supermodel at a young age is highly toxic, even if the protagonist benefits from it. After all, in my opinion, the protagonist's survival in this incident depends entirely on the author's plot, not on the protagonist himself. This kind of frustration is difficult to wash away. ————————There is another "problem". Some people may think that the protagonist's journey is too smooth (except for the plot of facing the big bird), and feel that the success of each operation of the protagonist is a bit ridiculous. In my opinion, and I am not a master, the satisfaction of the plot must be given priority, and I may even sacrifice part of the logic and rationality for the sake of enjoyment. The coolness is like the saltiness of a dish. It is the foundation and a necessary condition. As for other logical and rational writing styles, it is the presentation of the dishes. It is a sufficient condition for becoming a god, and it is not a priority for ordinary authors! If you are unhappy and there are logic problems again, that is a problem!

The plot feels fragmented, and the end of the previous chapter and the next chapter are inconsistent. The realm is not very clear, and a lot of nouns are used but they are unclear and too cumbersome. The event did not unfold but the level rose too quickly, both the enemies and the protagonist.

It's a shame, it would be more interesting if you could get the items in the simulation

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Has the author played Misty River and Lake?