Homely and Safe Restaurant

Doesn't this protagonist need to take classes to get into college?

What do you want to write about in this work? When you serve a dish, for no reason, a bunch of people will praise it once and twice. You have this routine for every dish. What do you want readers to see? How to describe a delicious food? Aren't you bored after watching too much?

The author is actually more suitable for writing short articles such as "Midnight Canteen", which has several chapters and one story. The author's thoughts are more delicate, but... He is not very experienced in online novels. After reading dozens of chapters, I found that the story is very incoherent and I like to focus on details, such as: black wooden chopsticks. There is a feeling of plainness in the whole article, without any ups and downs. In short, I hope the author can write a novel that she feels comfortable with and that readers also feel comfortable with.

These college students don't have to go to class, and there should be a lot of messy things at the beginning of the freshman year.

Is the author just starting to write? I obviously like the content, but I really can't stand it. The writing style is too strange. It can't really be written by AI 😅. When writing about guests using chopsticks to eat, the color of the chopsticks must be specified. When writing about the hero's little niece, she must be referred to as a child. There are even four or five children on one page. It's so weird...

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! I would like to recommend a book that is decisive in killing and full of joy. "The old man in time travels to pick up rags and makes a living by making bad movies" which is hilarious to the heavens...