Medieval Warhammer: I Am Really Not a Chaos Lackey!

It should be said that this is a good fanfic. The biggest advantage is the smooth writing style. The reading taste is close to the classic DND novel. As for the plot, it is worthy of discussion. In the early days, the caravan plot was criticized the most, and was criticized by many people for lacking a main line, but in my opinion, it was not a big problem - Drizzt's story also had no main line, and was completely a travelogue. However, considering the setting of the time traveler, the style of conduct cannot be pushed by the times like the aborigines. It can only be said that the criticism is not completely unreasonable. In my opinion, it might be better to postpone the caravan plot. After the protagonist has been messing around in Weibei for a while, it may be better. This way, he can have basic blue and green equipment, and the relationship with the supervisor will also be improved to a certain extent. The shortcoming is also related to the caravan plot mentioned above. Due to the lack of the Sinian Army Book at the beginning of the plot and the promotion of the plot of Miaoyingsese due to readers' requests, the story in Nanli did not unfold, and some background displays were missing. It was a bit like an RPG running a mission without reading the text. In general, it is well written. Considering that GW plots often include archery first and then target painting, and there is also a lack of excellent medieval warhammer creations at the starting point, this book is considered outstanding.

I have seen the latest, and there are no major shortcomings except that the update is slow. All major events have basically been participated in, and there is no hard-core gw groove for important characters to win and die. Although a lot of passers-by died It is a bit of a hidden danger, the four gods have not been cut yet, and the new chapter shows that the author has not forgotten this setting In fact, just pretend that it does not exist or find an excuse to let Long Aotian and Dragon Emperor initiate and paint. Using this setting as an excuse to pick up girls is actually useless after you have picked up a girl. With the rune ax of the dwarf, and after the Meow Shadow initiation, I haven't seen this setting work for hundreds of years But I can remember it for such a long time, and I deliberately introduced it in the latest chapter. I guess the author has already planned how to solve it, so I am looking forward to it I hope the author will not be brainwashed by the formulaic tragedy of GW Groove, and I hope this book can have a good ending with a beginning and an end Overall, it is still the best medieval fan book I have seen in 25 years By the way, since the harem is not YW, in my heart, it is one of the best Western fantasy works in 25 years.

Good news, good news, you traveled through time. Good news, the four godsgive you blessings Good news, the god of courage gives you strength, the god of life gives you longevity, the god of hope gives you wisdom, and the god of art gives you charm. Good news, just defeat the lackeys under the Dark Throne now. Bad news, Krieg also sent 2 legions.

How did the protagonist's ability come to be noticed by the Four Gods? Even Archaon still had to fight one after another before he was recognized by the Four Gods, and he was already very powerful before receiving the blessing from the Four Gods. He only received the blessing from the Four Gods after he was very good at fighting. Once the protagonist's power, Khorne, does not bless him, he will He can't even compare to ordinary people, and the protagonist has never hone his own martial arts. The four gods and the gang of fun people don't want to watch anyone who is not strong enough. Moreover, even with the blessings of Khorne and Erotica, the protagonist's ability is only at an average level. Anyone who fights will be left half alive and seriously injured.

Meow Shadow actually understands "red tape" very well. In the official novel, Yulong relied on red tape to identify the change spirit who became Meow Shadow. At that time, the change spirit had perfectly made a full set of tea ceremony (and complained in his heart that it was too complicated (you are a change spirit)) but In the end, Yulong only used two fingers to serve the tea instead of three. This was a courtesy to his servants. If it was the real Miaoying, he would be furious, but the changeling spirit did not, so Yulong (the soul!!) Took action (and used the arrow retreating technique during the fight to deflect the teacup thrown by the changing spirit).

Seeing this, I suddenly realized that the protagonist is following the route of Mr. Li Wei and Li 😁 dedicating himself to the female boss with his useful body. Even the massage methods are exactly the same 🤭

The protagonist is holding the script of the Fallen Blood Dragon.

It all came from Sese. After I ordered it, I found that the scale was like this. It's my money.

To be honest, the writing is pretty good, but the three-step, small-step, five-step, and one-step battle were too tiring to watch. I didn't even have the motivation to open the recent Kislev battle. After each battle, there was no positive feedback to significantly strengthen the protagonist, which made it a bit uncomfortable to watch. Just like at the beginning, after finishing the fight, you can use corrosion or any other method to add a little ambiguity to adjust it, but the rhythm is quite good.

Why do you keep fighting? From a small soldier to a subordinate supervisor, there is no slowdown at all. The fire brigade goes from one place to another, and its combat power depends entirely on the K and S plug-ins. The plot of Biaolong is also very strange. They say they are cautious but they directly lead the troops, and they let the protagonist directly "treat". They say they are not cautious but they keep testing.

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When the protagonist uses the blessings of Khorne and Slaanesh, doesn't he feel wary at all? Just use it so naturally? He doesn't seek out or train other abilities, and just relies on these two blessings. Doesn't he have something in mind? Doesn't he know what these two things are?

It feels like just fighting non-stop along the way, the protagonist's combat effectiveness can't be seen to be significantly improved, and the protagonist has gone through many hardships along the way, but the caravan has not encountered any problems. I watched it for a long time and didn't know what the protagonist was going to do.

I bought Hammer 3 because of this book, but the mod is no longer usable and cracked.

I ordered it all, hoping the author would do less personal heroic adventures and more military combat. So many types of troops.

Just forget about Eunuch. There are really not many books out there that can read Warhammer in the Middle Ages. It's rare to find one that's also a harem.

The update is too slow, the author is suspected to have been kidnapped by Slaanesh... I decided to book it all on January 11th, thinking I would read it later, but the author hasn't updated much yet...

In any case, there are too few novels with wonderful shadows. I hope the author will not give up.

After the Chronicles of Cathay came out, I learned why Miaoying was sent to the west, because only Miaoying was commanded by Yuan Bo (although he still took the initiative) 😄

Just like you can start a new game after winning the long-term battle of the game. If you can't finish the novel, you can finish it. I don't mind reading a new medieval Warhammer fanfic.

Why is he still the author of l1 with 1.3 Million words? Is it popular or not? Is the author engaged in charity?

Author, what's going on with your novel? In the past few months, you have been updating every two days, or even every three days.

It's very well written, but it's a pity that so few people read it.

And poor Shen Zhu's case is likely to be abandoned.

Come on, I'll read other books to support you

Update it 🙂

By the way, Miaoying is the only one among the existing dragon sons and dragon girls who does not have a dragon descendant, right? I was interested and looked up the translations on site b. It seems that she is the only one who does not have a dragonborn 🙂