Zongwang, the Taoist Priest Under the Revival of Spiritual Energy

The most important thing about a comprehensive network is growth. Growth must be incredible, but the rhythm needs to be controlled well. It cannot be invincible at one time, but invincible at the same stage. Using a game analogy, the birth point is full of growth attributes for the pleasure of crushing. But it's not like using Wind Spirit Moon Shadow. It takes seconds to hit everything, which makes people feel boring. To be more precise, I would use Baldur's Gate 3 to describe it. If I want to have fun, I will open mods that increase all attributes by +1 and give expertise points when upgrading, and cooperate with various expertise mods, instead of driving Wind Spirit Moon Shadow from start to finish in seconds. And because it can be played online, you can also experience the thrill of a master bringing out cute things. The master guides the newbies basically just by chance and will not form a team for a long time. Because Meng Xin can't keep up with his growth, long-term team formation will look like a drag, so just take care of him occasionally. If you meet a boss of the same level, you just agree to occasionally team up to play a difficult game. At least I have never seen a wealthy person in a domestic web game team up with another rich person for a long time to play a difficult game. In addition, the comprehensive network style will have a player interaction style of visiting the forum, including various comments, messages and replies. Hope it can be of some reference to you.

There are no compulsory tasks for brownnet. You are just a fake system disguised as a brownnet, but it is actually a system. And it also distributes mandatory tasks. If the system disappears if the tasks are not completed, then the player is a puppet. You, a player on the brown network, are not called players at all. Have you ever seen a game player with such a mandatory task? You should belong to the main god of reincarnation, the kind who will be wiped out if you can't complete the task. Don't wear the skin of Brown Net. This kind of system task, as well as the limit on the number of failed copies, will no longer have that flavor.

Boundless Mana can be a talent rather than exclusive to the camp. In addition, the effect of Boundless Mana feels like adding 0 is the right choice for this name. After all, many protagonists in the version of cultivating immortals have ten or even a hundred times more mana than others when practicing Qi. This is either due to their skills or their personal physiques. You must know that all the protagonists in other comprehensive networks are extremely abnormal.

When writing this, you must be able to write vivid fighting scenes, which is similar to online games, because most of your early stage is full of battle scenes, and a small part of the description of the protagonist's abilities. Now the author feels that the protagonist is injured in the fighting scenes. The protagonist dodges an attack. There are no other descriptive words. What was the protagonist beaten? How hard was it? Was it hit by a small pea, a stone as big as a fist, a 300-ton truck, or a meteorite? Shi Tianliang's irritability is empty without any description, and it's not enjoyable to watch. In my opinion, the main plot cannot describe the mastermind in advance. The protagonist is a little shrimp picking up hundreds of millions of fist-sized food under the waves of great environment, great destruction, and great recovery. Even if he is selected as a bait, he can only design a side story, meaning, rather than telling the whole story, just like a human being who glances at the feeling of ants carrying food.

There is an indescribable feeling, like the feeling of early humans taming AI, so weird

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There is a reason why it is not popular 😒😒 Zongwang has never had mandatory tasks. Aren't you just like the reincarnation master of the system? 😒😒 The original writing is not good. Dare to write rubbish emotional drama, the description of women is a mess... If you don't have diamonds, don't take the porcelain job 😒😒 Don't have any self-knowledge 😒😒 Do you think writing a book is just for fun? Anyway, let's take it step by step. How to start learning from the basics 😒😒 Is it possible for a newcomer to write emotional roles for women? 😒😒 I'll speed up the progress and watch. After reading the following chapters, there is another problem. The description of the protagonist's power makes people feel too fake and empty at first glance. The character description is untenable, has no sense of involvement, and is too fake 😒😒

It feels very boring to add weird elements to everything. There is also a chapter that is all about eating in the real world, which is too watery.

Taoist priests have always been spell casters. They always send soldiers and horses under the altar to do anything. I hope this Taoist priest can have soldiers and horses under the altar.

The theme of Zongwang is very weird. How can I put it, the taste is right, and it is normal to be cumbersome. It is mainly because of the taste that it is like Zongwang. Take your time. I can only say try more.

Author, did you start the chapter in reverse order? The opening scene is a battle between the protagonists, and then the protagonist recalls why he participated in the battle. This kind of writing is easy for the author to throw off.

I counted it at the beginning and waited for you to open a newbie gift pack for 9 chapters. I recalled the memories over and over again, recalled the attributes of various recall skills, and wrote all the memories at once. Like this, as long as you write more memories and more flashbacks, then you can be so good that it is still in the process of being recollected on the shelf. If the concept is not in harmony, bid farewell.

I just read a dozen chapters. First of all, the writing is too confusing. The main character's activation of the comprehensive network is too confusing. It gives me a headache. Then, the main character is too pretentious.

What you are writing about is Zongwang. Why do you keep adding the Ke type? You can wait for the protagonist to become awesome and go to the world of Ke type. Don't talk about the Ke type when you are weak at the beginning. It's hard not to talk about it. It's not easy to write about that stuff.

Taoist priest is a professional name. Why do we need to add place names to the subsequent two professional names? ? ? Author, don't you think it looks strange

As mentioned before, the novice copy died twice, and then died again in Chapter 14. This is the real game. The protagonist really has no brains. He clearly knows that this is an extraordinary game with high difficulty. He doesn't remember it again and again. And the protagonist is so stupid. Why doesn't he choose a berserker or something like a mage? The game operation is not as good as other people's games.

Twenty chapters updated in one go? 666

The writing is very messy and does not have the flavor of comprehensive network! !

It's so awkward to read. The plot is okay but it's uncomfortable to watch.

It's the woman part, it's so stiff, Shui's handwriting is so good

The writing of the previous plot is too weak and I can't change it. I have devoted myself to writing the later chapters. It's my first time and I didn't write a lot of them well. I'm sorry.

I just read the first few chapters and saw that the equipment gives one hundred mana. There is a small problem. I don't know if the author has set it. Generally, the higher the value of energy and constitution, etc., It means not only an increase in quantity, but also an improvement in quality. If you don't cross this bottleneck, your number will be this much. If you don't go, the maximum value will increase after you have passed through it. At the same time, the numerical consumption of spell casting will also become smaller, and the spell casting intensity will increase The bonus value is meaningless. Your soldier consumes 20 mana to cast a spell. If you become an immortal, it still consumes 20 mana. Didn't I become an immortal in vain?

The writing is so confusing, the plot suddenly jumps forward or backward. It makes my brain hurt to watch.

Again, you have to have choices and taste, after all, you are the protagonist!

It should be okay for daily driving, as there is basically no lag. It is better than saying that I use daily driving, food, and data hydrology. The free chapters haven't been updated yet, and there won't be much content in the city. It also gives the protagonist a change in his self-centered mentality, with a sharp weapon in hand and a murderous intention. If there are many people who say they are not adaptable, I will try my best to mention it later. If it's okay, I'll add some more.

I feel like my writing has gotten better recently, and I still have some saved manuscripts on hand. I plan to spend some time overhauling the previous free chapters. If you are interested, you can read them again.