Hogwarts: the Obscurial in Azkaban

This introduction is actually quite discouraging, like a little villain who shouts "I want to live", is extremely self-centered, can deprive others of their lives with peace of mind, and has committed many crimes.

As long as it's not Hermione, that's fine

In fact, there is a bug. Harry Potter was over a year old when he rebounded the killing curse. If the protagonist was born in Azkaban, he would be 10 years old at most and cannot be in the same class as the savior.

The more I read, the more I feel that the protagonist is like Hermione's licking dog, who wants to get ahead of everything, and rushes to comfort her when she is angry. It is simply suffocating. How can such a family feud be easily forgiven and become good friends? Neville's operation is also amazing. Finally, I hope not to develop a love line so quickly. I feel uncomfortable when I think that the heroine may be Hermione. This The male protagonist of this book is not compatible with Hermione at all. The male protagonist is precarious and has lived in a dark environment since he was a child. His pursuit of life and Voldemort's pursuit of immortality are the same goal. Basically, if nothing unexpected happens, he is the third generation of the Dark Lord. Hermione's sense of justice and compassion are nowhere to be released. If she is with the male protagonist, it will be completely OOC. Let's take a look.

Doesn't it mean that I can't write without Hermione?

There are too many positive descriptions of the characters' psychological activities. And the use of "narration" is even worse than directly writing the so-called "heartfelt words"

I like Hermione so much that I have been stabbed in the back many times...

There is one thing to say, Daphne is much better to Thomas than Hermione; and regardless of family background, stance and three views, she is more suitable for the male protagonist and understands him better.

I read the introduction and thought he was a reserve Dark Lord. I thought too much. Really, according to the moral standards of the fandom, the protagonist can definitely go to Gryffindor.

The plot was well written, but I felt that the protagonist invested too much emotion in Hermione (not subjectively). Hermione stabbed her in the back several times and even helped her. The key is that Hermione didn't appreciate it. It was very annoying when watching this plot. What's more, Hermione will not stand on the protagonist's side, which seems a bit poisonous to me. At first, the protagonist got close to Hermione and others just to clear herself under Dumbledore's nose. Now she is becoming more and more like the heroine of Hermione... I can only say that if you, the author, don't know how to write emotional scenes, it's best not to forcefully write them. Besides, for the character of the protagonist, I feel that adding cp is a bit OOC. In short, come on, author, it's rare to see such a darker protagonist, I hope he won't be a eunuch

It's Yinxi, not Yinkexi. Tonks is a Hufflepuff, not a Gryffindor

Your writing is so bad, I don't understand what you are writing? Your writing is like a traditional Chinese novel, and the text must be mixed with some kind of judgment of the protagonist on the protagonist. Oh my god, it looks like a drama. If you want to tell a story, tell it. Why did you add so many words? It can only show that your own writing is particularly bad. In the previous section on the train, the character is completely determined by your own author's words.

As a young wizard, he didn't want to hang out with the protagonists to get benefits. He naively wanted to pretend to be naive in front of Dumbledore, secretly contacted Voldemort and Death Eaters, was ungrateful, and had no bottom line. He did bad things and even licked Hermione. If you are sure that your actions are reasonable and successful, learn a few small curses as black magic. What biting curses and gut-eating curses. Then there is the inexplicable lockdown every weekend. Are you sure this is reasonable? Just because he is a descendant of Death Eaters?

This book has been dead for so long that I was the third one to finish it.

Is it time for summer vacation next time?