
Family Cultivation of Immortality: Starting from Marrying a Wife and Becoming an Immortal and Becoming an Ancestor
家族修仙:从娶妻开始成仙做祖
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 104k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Cultivation Civilization
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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48Chapters
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The book is a good book. It is indeed a good book to write down. But it is too frustrating. The main character is already 20 chapters. It is really unbearable. Damn, I think everyone is not happy to read the novel and it is not for the main character to be angry. I have read similar novels, usually 20 chapters are not about taking off, and the main character is more or less mature. And the golden finger is not too big. Only by giving birth to a person with spiritual roots can you add a little to the spiritual roots. What about 100 children, even if you are a harem, you can survive until one child a year. Is 100 qi refining period enough to give birth to a middle-grade spiritual root? Another question. The protagonist is almost 50 years old, but he has really become a fertility machine. I don't want him to feel refreshed when reading the novel, but he can't be so depressed. I know the author wants to raise the protagonist through elixir refining and the like, but a third-level qi training is still poisonous. What is the strength? How many furnaces of spiritual power are there in the body, not to mention anything else. The real-world warrior king brought a low-grade melee magic weapon to the protagonist. I felt that the protagonist could be directly hacked to death. Of course, I said this because the main protagonist was suppressed too hard. It was really frustrating to watch. The writing was okay. The writing style was also good. It wrote part of the feeling of cultivating the immortal world, but it was very frustrating.
I have read Chapter 8, let me know what you think
I found that you read very little, and I felt something was wrong, because you wrote the first chapter very well. In the eighth chapter, I finally found the first poisonous point... They have already married two wives, and they actually still care about the third one? Is this reasonable? You can obviously handle it better here, for example... In this world, everyone has wives and concubines, marrying new ones and forgetting the old ones, which is already acquiesced, but the protagonist said that he must feed everyone with his own hands, ah, legs. Does this excessiveness better reflect the character of the protagonist? Has the protagonist changed his energy? The way you handle it now... At least to me, it seems baffling and inconsistent.
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Don't keep reading, dear readers, early reading is very important. There are two updates every day at around 0:00 and 8:00. It's really not easy to write a book, so please keep reading! Please read it! Please read it!
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My book is about the flow of descendants, and there are endless descendants. It is not an ordinary marriage. It is inevitably a bit messy in the early stage. I also discovered this problem, and it started to feel good from chapter 35. You can read it. To be honest, it is difficult for newcomers. I can't grasp it well. There are indeed some rhythm problems in the early stage. Please forgive me. I will keep going.
This book is awesome, it won't collapse, and it is expected to be a high-quality product.
Come on
If you persist for one million, you will definitely gain something!