
Douluo Jueshi: My Roommate's Name Is Wang Dong
斗罗绝世:我的舍友叫王冬
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 606k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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202Chapters
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Isn't this plot just about changing Huo Yuhao's name? Has the plot changed in any way from the original?
In the early days, it was outrageous to go to the Far North alone at the age of 7. Let's not talk about the soul beasts in the Far North. Let's talk about the evil soul masters in the Dou Er period. They were so rampant that they could even create a sect with an Ultimate Douluo, and they could safely go to the Far North. I'm just extremely lucky. I can tolerate it here, but not in the Shrek plot. I don't have any big objections to you joining Shrek. After all, most of the beauties are in Shrek, but why should the male protagonist be afraid of Zhou Yi at level 49? Zhou Yi is a lunatic in this batch. He directly expelled a student who did absolutely nothing wrong in the first class of the semester. A one-class trip to Shrek Academy? Author, you also commented that you are on the side of justice, so you don't care about the expelled student? Is this justice? Are you also following Tang San's double standards?
I take it for granted. I dare to go to the far north by myself. I can only say that I am really not afraid of death.
In the second part, the Wuhun Palace is gone, where are the subsidies and free awakenings?
Si Dong Quan: Thoughts are flowing like a spring! 👊😭👊 I will never forget the Winter Sword!!🗡😭🗡 Haodong Palm for all my life!!!✋😭✋ Dong'er, Dong'er, Dong'er! Withering in the brilliance, the golden road! 😊👉👈😊 The blazing fire in the extreme cold, the hammer of the Emperor of Heaven! 😚☺👦👧 The mantra in nothingness, the storm of the soul! 😁👍💪 Dancing solo in the frost, the colorful dress of light!
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What the hell
Is this protagonist a Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtle? Women have all posted and you are so pretentious about refusing? You author, what are you pretending to be? Liu Xiahui Pretentious thing, retreat, retreat, leave.
Shennong was poisoned by many poisons and was unable to recover.
Shen Nong reminds me that I have just read Chapter 4 and my opinions are for reference only.
My evaluation is that it is a fantasy novel written by AI using the Douluo template. Many of the settings are not compatible with Dou Er, and the protagonist's awesome skills are suffocating. Huo Yuhao's solo trip to the Far North was protected by a dream. The protagonist arrived alone in a place full of thousand-year-old soul beasts purely by luck. More than one thousand-year-old soul beast discovered the protagonist, but everything was fine. Only when he discovered that he couldn't beat the centuries-old soul beast did he think of using external force. According to Tianmeng's performance, the 900-year-old ice silkworm only has a 90-year-old soul beast when converted into a normal combat power. This still does not take into account the improvement in combat power of Tianmeng's racial evolution one hundred thousand years later. The protagonist has been training for three months, and his physical fitness can absorb more than a thousand-year soul ring, but he still can't beat the ice silkworm.
My child, you are invincible. You will be promoted to two levels in one year.
The heroine voted
Wang Dong'er, Wang Qiu'er, Snow Emperor, Xiao Xiao, Ma Xiaotao, Orange, Senior Sister Zhang Lexuan, Zhang Nannan...
There is no difference between this article and the diary of a primary school student except that it has fewer typos.
It smells like fantasy, this plot is so poisonous that I want to vomit🤮
I just want to say why there are so few comments. He is a little bit poisonous, but I can't stand him because he has so many comments.
A typical AI novel can only be said to be not ugly, but has a lot of bad points. I can't say there's anything bad about it, but it just seems difficult to read. There are also a lot of bad points. The protagonist is a bit taken for granted. It's more classic but too classic, which means that this article is relatively old-fashioned. Generally speaking, most people can't read it. However, I have only read a small part so far. I don't know what the rest is. It all depends on personal preference. However, the author can change the writing style. At present, it does not look like it is written by a novice, nor does it look like what an old person should have. The style is a bit like it was written purely for AI. It may be better if it is changed. If not, it can only be based on the preferences of book friends. It is not good but not bad and can only be regarded as a middle-of-the-road work. Some of the second settings are different from the original text and most other fan fiction. It may be explained later, but I didn't see it. It doesn't hurt those who like this type, but most of them may not be too accepting of this kind of literary works. It varies from person to person. It mainly depends on whether you can accept it. The main problem is that I don't see any obvious problems. The main problem is that there are some problems in the writing and character creation. The description of the plot is not quite right and a bit stiff. I could deepen the description of the plot. The problem with the second design is not big. Even if the shortcomings are corrected, it can become a highlight. If there is something written that is not thoughtful, you don't need to stop criticizing it. Just be gentle.
I am a historian, and my evaluation is history. What is it about? The setting is messy and the protagonist is mentally ill.
In three chapters, Shennong was poisoned to death
The writing is so disgusting, I haven't even read five chapters.
I don't understand how childish the protagonist's mind is. When fighting, he always shouts for kill. When he breaks through, he always shouts for help. He thinks you've been holding back a big lump, but the result is thin.
History is nothing special 😒
Ma Xiaotao being the heroine is so disgusting🤢
I forgot to read the comments, I'm already poisoned to death🤢
You've been writing books for a few years, but why are you still writing in such a bad way? You haven't made any progress for so long. I really don't know who signed the contract for you.
Recommend a new book - Peerless Tang Sect: I Simulate the Legend of the Dragon King
This book is very well written, but there is also another book that is still good to read - Douluo Peerless: Life Simulator
Recommend a new book - Peerless Tang Sect: I Simulate the Legend of the Dragon King
Recommend a novel - Peerless Tang Sect: My Simulation of the Dragon King (formerly known as Peerless Tang Sect: My Simulation of the Dragon King Legend)
Isn't the Ice Emperor inferior to Xiao Xiao? Why not accept the Ice Emperor?
I can't stand the 5 pictures. What a jerk. If you see this comment, run away.
I remember Xiao Xiao is a three-life martial soul, right? Only one was broken at the back