Dou Po's Green Lotus Transformation

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I'm back and have read about twenty chapters in total. The following are all shortcomings and minor problems for me, but they are poisonous points for some people. 1. There is a lot of inner drama at the beginning. After gaining strength, the character does not match the heart of a strong person, and the character is a sloppy protagonist (please pay attention, the protagonist is followed by this character, with strong strength but no strong character. I hope the author can slowly change in the future) 2. In the first three chapters, he is soft-hearted and merciless when facing Medusa, and the system is not strong enough to respond to the protagonist's requests. (I like the domineering character of the protagonist to conquer Medusa) 3. The protagonist encounters some mercenaries sneaking up on him, but instead of killing him, he lets them go generously. It is better to say that it is a character design in the game life. The character is not lovable and seems to have no temper (no force! Force! Force! It is still a question of force) 4. The protagonist, who is a Dou Zong, wants to accept Qing Lin as a maid, and plans to negotiate terms with Xiao Ding (if you can't accept it, just leave) 5. Xiao Ding actually refused the protagonist's conditions for the sake of Qing Lin's feelings. I think he adopted Qing Lin because of his kindness. He couldn't care so much about Qing Lin (Qing Lin can be adopted by someone and can destroy his competitors. Xiao Ding, as the leader of the group, can't not do this deal even if he thinks about it, and he still cares about Qing Lin's opinion?) 6. Xiao Ding used harsh words to threaten the protagonist because of Qing Lin. I feel that the author made a mistake in writing Xiao Ding's character (they actually said harsh words for Qing Lin, making it look like Qing Lin is Xiao Ding's younger sister. Is Xiao Ding's character setting wrong? Emm) 7. At the end of the matter, the protagonist did not take revenge (the harsh words he said for Qinglin were just inconsistent with the character. I think the problem is not big and can be ignored. If you can read it, just read it as solid food. If you can't stand it, you can find the next book) 8. The protagonist met Medusa again and was speechless, as was Yue Mei. (Alas~) 9. The protagonist's attitude towards the system is explosive. (This system is so easy to talk about, give me a try) 10. The progress between the protagonist and Medusa feels too fast. After the strategy is completed, the skills and treasures just obtained are given away immediately. Generally speaking, it is a bit irritating (if you have objections, maybe I have a different opinion) 11. There is also the issue of naming. The protagonist and Hai Bodong have never interacted before, and they are so powerful that they call Hai Bodong Hai Lao. The protagonist has lost value again. (Author, the protagonist's character needs to be improved, don't lose points) 12. The protagonist has no plans for future development. In addition to rescuing people, he is often led by system tasks (the common problem of system writing is understandable, but I hope the protagonist can have his own opinions instead of being led by the system) Now I see the task of recruiting apprentices in Chapter 27. The protagonist wants to accept Xiao Qing as his apprentice. There are some paragraphs that are not written very smoothly. I hope the author can correct it. (Anyway, these flaws have not yet reached my poisonous point range, so I can continue to look at them)

In the first chapter, you are directly persuaded to quit, and you are rewarded for taking in a woman? How about you pay the actor a salary?

The poisonous points of this book include but are not limited to Xiao Ding, a fighting master who threatens the protagonist who appears to be a fighting king. The author actually praises him for his patience. Also, the protagonist joins the Motie Mercenary Group as a Dou Zong, which is simply funny.

Emperor Lian, why don't you just go directly to Emperor Qing?

Why are all the Kung Fu and Fighting Skills rewarded by this system given to others, without the protagonist having anything to do with them? Moreover, the rewards are given to others as soon as they are given. It seems too cheap. If you put yourself in your shoes, if I were a supporting character, I would only think that this person is stupid and rich: "I just met you, and you didn't even say a few words, and you are not familiar with it, and you just gave me the Kung Fu and Fighting Skills of the Earth and Heaven Levels. Where did this stupid boy come from? What a chance."

I really can't stand it when a Dou Po fan licks Medusa. I don't understand how someone could like a nasty woman like Medusa. Apart from being pretty tall, it has no use. A vicious bunch.

When I meet Dou Zong, I feel poisonous. If there was a six-star Dou Zong in the original book who found out about the strange fire, he would have strengthened it long ago. Medusa was the only Dou Emperor. I feel really disgusting. Can I get it into my brain when writing a book?

Just came back from Doupo's time traveler with over 100 million points, Qinglian's earth core fire shape has been slaughtered

Chapter 1: Persuading him to quit. Pig's feet are too narcissistic and funny. He has the strong demeanor as promised.

I don't want Yafei to accept anyone, I want talent but not talent, strength but not strength, brains but no brains, only cleverness, a fighter in his twenties and thirties, a fighting spirit continent I don't know how many people are prettier than her, but without Xiao Yan, he is nothing.

After reading the first chapter, I was given a mission to collect Xiao Xun'er, and she was immediately poisoned and died.

It's really rubbish, the protagonist is really useless, I watched a few pictures, there are people everywhere looking for trouble and then the protagonist lets them go, and it's not decisive at all. A strong man from Douzong is showing humility to all kinds of little people.

A group of people who, um~, have no fighting spirit skills, still want to fight with the protagonist. Qing Lin was insulted by the people of the mercenary group in various ways, but the protagonist actually did not kill all the Xiao family members And Xiao Ding was not even a shit, and his eyes were ruthless, and the target was a person who did not even know how high the level of Xiao Ding was, and he still dared to bet, bah~ Xiao Ding, you are a der, and you still make a bet, just fight against the world view of the world. You kill people and set fire anytime and anywhere, and you make a bet with Ju Qing. 😂 It's outrageous that the Xiao family could go so long without being wiped out. Gu Xun'er needed to find Gu Yu, and there were only two or three big cats and kittens from the Xiao family. The Xiao family was wiped out by Ling Ying on the second day after being sent to the Xiao family. What does Gu Xun'er want? Does he want you, Xiao Yan, to peek at Xiao Yu's bath since he was a child, or does he want you to be a useless person? So that I can inherit the Xiao family's property, which together cannot buy a high-end elixir 😒

Regarding the heroine, everyone's favorite Queen Medusa was selected. There are also Little Doctor Fairy, Yun Yun, Zi Yan, Ya Fei, Nalan Yanran, etc. Everyone likes the one that leaves footprints, thank you. Danchen, Cao Ying, Feng Qing'er, Mu Qingluan from Zhongzhou...

Is it another stallion story? Retreat, retreat

I feel like today's fandoms are so perverted

We can't let Xiaoyan tarnish Yunyun.

You should change your name to (The Transformation of the Holy Mother of Dou Po) to show me how disgusting it is.

In the eternal blue sky, a lotus plant has nine leaves that support the sky. Climb the road to heaven, sing songs and cover the sky with a snap of your fingers😏

It's so beautiful, all fellow Taoists must read it! It's a huge loss if you don't care 😆

I am Shen Nong, I have tried hundreds of poisons without dying, and I despise the poisons in the world. Now, Nong Guan has returned from this book. Every time I think about the medicinal properties of this book, I feel very tight in my chest. I know that Nong Xiao underestimated the world. This book can harm Nong's life. Fortunately, Nong can resist this poison for a while, so I wrote this book to tell all Taoist friends: Leave it alone. It is enough to burn incense and comfort farmers and farmers' hearts.

The first chapter gave me the feeling that it was a wretched system and a wretched protagonist, and the whole novel was wretched.

It's suitable for those who are new to the game, but I can't stand it.

I've just read a few chapters and I really can't stand it anymore! It really poisoned me!

I don't like the book very much. . . But this author is good.

Gave Yun Yun to Xiao Yan?

Come and watch, it's too good to watch live🧞‍♂️🧞‍♂️🧞‍♂️. Let the sticker serve as proof! If you are not convinced, come and argue!

Sorry, I didn't get past three chapters. . . .

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